for Chuck vs the Hail Mary2/9 c2 ednolte
I just read it, and I wish this had been what actually aired. It makes far more sense than the scene with Chuck's sentimental plea at the dream house. The original felt poorly written. I understand they wanted to provide a recap or reboot while paying tribute to the fans, but a more well-crafted ending would have been much more satisfying
I just read it, and I wish this had been what actually aired. It makes far more sense than the scene with Chuck's sentimental plea at the dream house. The original felt poorly written. I understand they wanted to provide a recap or reboot while paying tribute to the fans, but a more well-crafted ending would have been much more satisfying
9/1/2024 c2 Richard76310
Went to read my review and didn’t find one. So here goes. AWESOME. Enough said. Morgan at the end is a great guy.
Went to read my review and didn’t find one. So here goes. AWESOME. Enough said. Morgan at the end is a great guy.
2/17/2024 c2 
6Tempe4Booth
I liked this one too, I would have liked to see it finished but I understand you may not have the time to do and regularly update your other story
6Tempe4BoothI liked this one too, I would have liked to see it finished but I understand you may not have the time to do and regularly update your other story
9/29/2023 c2 whatailsme
Great job with this story. With Sarah essentially being back to the Sarah Walker from the pilot episode, I thought Chuck was smarter than to try to appeal to her with emotional pleas. That wouldn't have worked. What you've written in Chapter 1? That's exactly what would've gotten through to Sarah. Same with Casey and Morgan's entreaties. They're all smart enough to know that the Sarah Walker of old would've responded better to logical arguments. Thanks for this.
Great job with this story. With Sarah essentially being back to the Sarah Walker from the pilot episode, I thought Chuck was smarter than to try to appeal to her with emotional pleas. That wouldn't have worked. What you've written in Chapter 1? That's exactly what would've gotten through to Sarah. Same with Casey and Morgan's entreaties. They're all smart enough to know that the Sarah Walker of old would've responded better to logical arguments. Thanks for this.
1/31/2022 c1 3arcaneobsidian
Love this! Just some of the million little details that made Chuck vs Sarah ridiculous. When Sarah came back the very first thing they would have done is to take her to a hospital and given her an MRI to see what the glitched intersect did to her brain. They would have asked a bazillion questions to gauge her cognitive function and would have damn well noticed an earwig so it would have been immediately obvious that she had significant memory loss. The list of flaws is VERY long.
3arcaneobsidianLove this! Just some of the million little details that made Chuck vs Sarah ridiculous. When Sarah came back the very first thing they would have done is to take her to a hospital and given her an MRI to see what the glitched intersect did to her brain. They would have asked a bazillion questions to gauge her cognitive function and would have damn well noticed an earwig so it would have been immediately obvious that she had significant memory loss. The list of flaws is VERY long.
11/20/2021 c2 check12
I like this story. Much more consistent and intelligent behaviour from the characters compared to canon.
I like this story. Much more consistent and intelligent behaviour from the characters compared to canon.
11/5/2021 c2 2aChieftess
THANK YOU for writing much, much, much better those last two episodes. I haven't rewatched S5 since I binged the series for the first time a few months ago. Stories like yours makes it hurt a little less.
Thank you for sharing :)
2aChieftessTHANK YOU for writing much, much, much better those last two episodes. I haven't rewatched S5 since I binged the series for the first time a few months ago. Stories like yours makes it hurt a little less.
Thank you for sharing :)
7/11/2021 c2 1JamieTheHopefulWriter
I definitely like this re-imagining better than the episode writing itself. In fact, I found the scene where Chuck cried about how Sarah could love a nerd like him quite cringey.
I thought Morgan came off a fair bit strong, and from the first chapter I wasn't convinced Casey needed to do much of his dialogue with Sarah as he did here, but overall I really liked this. Especial shout-out to how it ended with the team reuniting rather than Sarah being forced to choose whether to stay with Chuck after only a few moments or so. (Well, perhaps the final paragraph is intended to be interpreted as such, but I interpret it a little differently I guess.)
1JamieTheHopefulWriterI definitely like this re-imagining better than the episode writing itself. In fact, I found the scene where Chuck cried about how Sarah could love a nerd like him quite cringey.
I thought Morgan came off a fair bit strong, and from the first chapter I wasn't convinced Casey needed to do much of his dialogue with Sarah as he did here, but overall I really liked this. Especial shout-out to how it ended with the team reuniting rather than Sarah being forced to choose whether to stay with Chuck after only a few moments or so. (Well, perhaps the final paragraph is intended to be interpreted as such, but I interpret it a little differently I guess.)
4/6/2021 c1 Soccerfan37
Way better done then the actual show, as always you use much better logic then the actual writers.
However, they had also decided to wipe out five years of the best character development on the show.
It is ultimately Chuck's story and Sarah turned out to only be considered a tool to show of his development as a character. Just very sad if you ask me. As a big fan of Chuck I was very disappointed by the final three episodes and the rushed feel of it all. It was like they knew they only had 13 episodes but were hoping for a back 6 pick up as had happened in previous seasons. When they finally got the word that there would only be 13 they had to really truncate and remove scenes and plot lines. I listened to a Chuck podcast that happened a week after the finale with Fedak. He gave the explanation for Quinn as being the agent originally destined to receive the Intersect 1.0 and that Bryce's actions had somehow cratered his career. I don't know how his justifiable anger at Bryce transferred to our reluctant spy named Chuck. That is one leap of logic Fedak could not explain at all. Also, he said that he almost had that scene in Chuck vs The Baby where Sarah tells Molly she had a stuffed dog she named Sam as a nod to her reveal of her 'real' name to Shaw instead of Chuck. Remember that show was called Chuck vs the FAKE name. However the scene was changed when he remembered that they had removed a scene from Shaw's first episode where Sarah and Casey are correctly (IMO) suspicious of Shaw and are going to check into his background and dig into his past.
Well, I have another chapter to read so I will step down from my soap box.
Thanks for this great story.
Way better done then the actual show, as always you use much better logic then the actual writers.
However, they had also decided to wipe out five years of the best character development on the show.
It is ultimately Chuck's story and Sarah turned out to only be considered a tool to show of his development as a character. Just very sad if you ask me. As a big fan of Chuck I was very disappointed by the final three episodes and the rushed feel of it all. It was like they knew they only had 13 episodes but were hoping for a back 6 pick up as had happened in previous seasons. When they finally got the word that there would only be 13 they had to really truncate and remove scenes and plot lines. I listened to a Chuck podcast that happened a week after the finale with Fedak. He gave the explanation for Quinn as being the agent originally destined to receive the Intersect 1.0 and that Bryce's actions had somehow cratered his career. I don't know how his justifiable anger at Bryce transferred to our reluctant spy named Chuck. That is one leap of logic Fedak could not explain at all. Also, he said that he almost had that scene in Chuck vs The Baby where Sarah tells Molly she had a stuffed dog she named Sam as a nod to her reveal of her 'real' name to Shaw instead of Chuck. Remember that show was called Chuck vs the FAKE name. However the scene was changed when he remembered that they had removed a scene from Shaw's first episode where Sarah and Casey are correctly (IMO) suspicious of Shaw and are going to check into his background and dig into his past.
Well, I have another chapter to read so I will step down from my soap box.
Thanks for this great story.
4/5/2021 c2 11Purrum
I have this feeling that it was my story you read, "Morgan Vs the Courtyard".
A well thought out story carefully filling in the potholes of the original series.
11PurrumI have this feeling that it was my story you read, "Morgan Vs the Courtyard".
A well thought out story carefully filling in the potholes of the original series.
2/23/2021 c2 Harakan
Willie you make great alternate story but you also left her unfinished i would go in two direction Sarah goes solo and finished Quin as her revenge path or as whole team B. but of course Sarah would do the final blow hopefully not just a bullet but that was just sick all me and if she fells something about Chuck when she doing it it would be great.
Willie you make great alternate story but you also left her unfinished i would go in two direction Sarah goes solo and finished Quin as her revenge path or as whole team B. but of course Sarah would do the final blow hopefully not just a bullet but that was just sick all me and if she fells something about Chuck when she doing it it would be great.
2/23/2021 c1 Harakan
Willie it was great chapter and reading it i wonder what a hell those screenwriters are smoking when they wrote last two episodes this would so much better then what we see in the show.
Willie it was great chapter and reading it i wonder what a hell those screenwriters are smoking when they wrote last two episodes this would so much better then what we see in the show.
1/8/2021 c2 Mosydys
I think Casey acted cold because she would expect that from him. To add credibility to himself and his words. She could have seen only him as compromised by Chuck. Casey would have looked like a loyal lapdog who tried to do something underhanded, not a coworker worried about where her loyalties lie. Basically, she might have thought that she did her job too well on him too and really sold her 'love' for Chuck.
P.S. Did you find the Morgan fanfic? I'm interested, please tell me if you did.
I think Casey acted cold because she would expect that from him. To add credibility to himself and his words. She could have seen only him as compromised by Chuck. Casey would have looked like a loyal lapdog who tried to do something underhanded, not a coworker worried about where her loyalties lie. Basically, she might have thought that she did her job too well on him too and really sold her 'love' for Chuck.
P.S. Did you find the Morgan fanfic? I'm interested, please tell me if you did.