for Work Hard! Bleed Hard! Fight Hard!8/8/2019 c12 Vhosek
Oh wow! I am a big fan of Ryuu and am just really loving this story! I hope you get time to come back to this someday. Thank you for your hard work and sharing it with us.
Oh wow! I am a big fan of Ryuu and am just really loving this story! I hope you get time to come back to this someday. Thank you for your hard work and sharing it with us.
5/22/2019 c12 
3Shin Hyo Joon
you made really good story indeed .
in here and your another fanfic i can relate how Bell really cute .
Even the Author of the Story made him look like al-miraj . hahaha.
its been 5 month after your update i hope you still continue both of your story . hehehe~
3Shin Hyo Joonyou made really good story indeed .
in here and your another fanfic i can relate how Bell really cute .
Even the Author of the Story made him look like al-miraj . hahaha.
its been 5 month after your update i hope you still continue both of your story . hehehe~
12/11/2018 c11 RiveriaLover
Ryuu is sad and thats not good
Bell gotta do somein now
also great chapter
Ryuu is sad and thats not good
Bell gotta do somein now
also great chapter
12/9/2018 c10 RiveriaLover
I really like this
because its good and
Ryuu/Lyu and Bell
Definitely Ryuu/Lyu and Bell
I really like this
because its good and
Ryuu/Lyu and Bell
Definitely Ryuu/Lyu and Bell
11/10/2018 c9 19Ashkar
I love the Ryuu and Bell moments you put in your story... I keep waiting for them to kiss but I'll be patient (kind of lol)... as far as Cinder Ella here is the description for it so you know what it does.
Cinder Ella: Cinder Ella is a transformation magic that enables Lili to transform into anything around the same size as herself, including monsters. She is able to copy the physical abilities of who/whatever she transforms into, though it's limited by her own status, and she can also take advantage of natural abilities like the Beast Humans' heightened sense of smell and hearing. Before she officially joined Bell's party at the end of volume 2, she often used Cinder Ella to disguise herself as someone else after stealing from adventurers.
19AshkarI love the Ryuu and Bell moments you put in your story... I keep waiting for them to kiss but I'll be patient (kind of lol)... as far as Cinder Ella here is the description for it so you know what it does.
Cinder Ella: Cinder Ella is a transformation magic that enables Lili to transform into anything around the same size as herself, including monsters. She is able to copy the physical abilities of who/whatever she transforms into, though it's limited by her own status, and she can also take advantage of natural abilities like the Beast Humans' heightened sense of smell and hearing. Before she officially joined Bell's party at the end of volume 2, she often used Cinder Ella to disguise herself as someone else after stealing from adventurers.
11/8/2018 c8 Ashkar
I love the way you are writing Ryuu's character... it's nothing like her from the books or anime but you still make it seem like it definitely could secretly be how she really is... keep up the good work
I love the way you are writing Ryuu's character... it's nothing like her from the books or anime but you still make it seem like it definitely could secretly be how she really is... keep up the good work
10/31/2018 c8 Christian Medina
I was about to go to sleep when I saw my Gmail and it say this story had updated, immediately I stopped looked at it again thinking my mind was playing tricks on me then when I realized this was true I immediately came to the chapter...soooo here I am , good chapter I liked his magic so it can change to anything he wants right like a swords or knife cool
I was about to go to sleep when I saw my Gmail and it say this story had updated, immediately I stopped looked at it again thinking my mind was playing tricks on me then when I realized this was true I immediately came to the chapter...soooo here I am , good chapter I liked his magic so it can change to anything he wants right like a swords or knife cool
10/30/2018 c7 JoannesQuire
I can’t wait to see if bell gets firebolt or some other spell based off his answers
I can’t wait to see if bell gets firebolt or some other spell based off his answers
10/17/2018 c6 Christian Medina
Well yeah it was a bit short for 9 days that you had to write but oh well at least make sure you don’t abandon this FanFiction pls ill died if you do that you are a good writer so pls keep writing ️ thank for this nice chapter I hope that you upload the next one soon.
Also I would recommend adding fillers like I don’t know the date of bell and Rut or the birthday do ritual or just put a little more jealousy in the story would be find well that’s all I had bye bye .
Well yeah it was a bit short for 9 days that you had to write but oh well at least make sure you don’t abandon this FanFiction pls ill died if you do that you are a good writer so pls keep writing ️ thank for this nice chapter I hope that you upload the next one soon.
Also I would recommend adding fillers like I don’t know the date of bell and Rut or the birthday do ritual or just put a little more jealousy in the story would be find well that’s all I had bye bye .
10/17/2018 c6 Ashkar
I vote that sexy blonde elves who can kick your ass can be as clingy as they like... lol... great chapter again
I vote that sexy blonde elves who can kick your ass can be as clingy as they like... lol... great chapter again
10/17/2018 c6 CrimsonRasengan
Ryuu is acting like a cat, wow. I'm not going to lie it's kinda cute. at least she's not a yandere.
Ryuu is acting like a cat, wow. I'm not going to lie it's kinda cute. at least she's not a yandere.
10/9/2018 c5 Christian Medina
Ohh! 9 days oh well guess I’ll have to wait is a really good story by the way I like it I was looking forward to this chapter since yesterday that I found this amazing fanfic keep up the good work
Ohh! 9 days oh well guess I’ll have to wait is a really good story by the way I like it I was looking forward to this chapter since yesterday that I found this amazing fanfic keep up the good work
10/9/2018 c5 Ashkar
If you are going to add more to the relationship other then Ryu my 2 cents in order I would like would be Haruhime, Syr, Eina… but I won't lie, I like what you are doing with Ryu and Bell... I'd be fine with you keeping it like that... great chapter again... keep them coming
If you are going to add more to the relationship other then Ryu my 2 cents in order I would like would be Haruhime, Syr, Eina… but I won't lie, I like what you are doing with Ryu and Bell... I'd be fine with you keeping it like that... great chapter again... keep them coming