for Silver Script2/6/2021 c1 tjhomeboy
"He had a few thousand words to spend. She had the three that mattered most." GOD my jaw dropped
And Weiss... wow. You've continued to outdo yourself
"He had a few thousand words to spend. She had the three that mattered most." GOD my jaw dropped
And Weiss... wow. You've continued to outdo yourself
4/29/2020 c1 Beanoclard
Every single new character had me crying! Congrats, I loved it!
I dont even know what to say, I expected Yang, sure, but not that 'Summer only ever got one' line! Ruby and Ren as foils gave me a punch in the gut, and Weiss' was so dang fitting and bittersweet (but more sweet than bitter). Gosh Nora I did not expect at all... I'm choosing not to think about the implications tho. Let's not go there.
And then you just destroyed me with Pyrrha that's fine! Like, I'm amazed at the ingenuity of this story, but also somehow you built it in a way that enhances every single shred of emotion it gives us... Damn.
Thanks for sharing!
Every single new character had me crying! Congrats, I loved it!
I dont even know what to say, I expected Yang, sure, but not that 'Summer only ever got one' line! Ruby and Ren as foils gave me a punch in the gut, and Weiss' was so dang fitting and bittersweet (but more sweet than bitter). Gosh Nora I did not expect at all... I'm choosing not to think about the implications tho. Let's not go there.
And then you just destroyed me with Pyrrha that's fine! Like, I'm amazed at the ingenuity of this story, but also somehow you built it in a way that enhances every single shred of emotion it gives us... Damn.
Thanks for sharing!
2/17/2020 c1 
5bitterblues
I really wish it was possible for me to articulate how much I enjoyed this fic but I really don't think I could. I feel like I've read so many timer fics but this is hands down the most well executed one. The countdown for each character fits so well that I just had to keep pausing while reading the fic because I just kept getting so excited at how damn perfect everything was.
I like including a favorite line/part whenever I leave a review but dear god I'm truly struggling to pick One Part. I thiiiink Yang's might be my favorite by a very small margin. People leaving her has been such an integral part of her character, and the thought of her knowing that she would still be left behind three more times... I can't imagine it.
"Now she owned two pieces of Yang's life, and Summer had only ever gotten one."
This line in particular absolutely ruined me because I'm a complete sucker for Yang's dynamic with Raven (and Summer).
Just honestly, truly, thank you for this fic. I'm going to be obsessively rereading it for a really long time haha.
5bitterbluesI really wish it was possible for me to articulate how much I enjoyed this fic but I really don't think I could. I feel like I've read so many timer fics but this is hands down the most well executed one. The countdown for each character fits so well that I just had to keep pausing while reading the fic because I just kept getting so excited at how damn perfect everything was.
I like including a favorite line/part whenever I leave a review but dear god I'm truly struggling to pick One Part. I thiiiink Yang's might be my favorite by a very small margin. People leaving her has been such an integral part of her character, and the thought of her knowing that she would still be left behind three more times... I can't imagine it.
"Now she owned two pieces of Yang's life, and Summer had only ever gotten one."
This line in particular absolutely ruined me because I'm a complete sucker for Yang's dynamic with Raven (and Summer).
Just honestly, truly, thank you for this fic. I'm going to be obsessively rereading it for a really long time haha.
7/17/2019 c1 Saint-Less
Absolutely amazing story I loved it and all the counters fit so perfectly. Ruby’s fit so well and Pyrrah’s made me so sad thinking about how it probably pushed her to try and be more and more perfect and to never lose a fight. Absolutely incredible story.
Absolutely amazing story I loved it and all the counters fit so perfectly. Ruby’s fit so well and Pyrrah’s made me so sad thinking about how it probably pushed her to try and be more and more perfect and to never lose a fight. Absolutely incredible story.
2/12/2019 c1 2zetashark
You know if the decimal conversion system in the universal computer gets fucked up some day it can get even more confusing... Everything turns into 2esomething.
2zetasharkYou know if the decimal conversion system in the universal computer gets fucked up some day it can get even more confusing... Everything turns into 2esomething.
1/21/2019 c1 9Prince Pondincherry
This is amazing. They're all so fitting. I LOVE Ruby so much. Continuing to be a hero and kill Grimm even when it seems to be bringing her closer to death is exactly the sort of levelheaded, heroic decision she would make.
OUCH. Poor Nora.
Pyrrha's nameless instructor is one of the wisest people here.
HOLY SHIT, WHAT IS UP WITH CINDER?
9Prince PondincherryThis is amazing. They're all so fitting. I LOVE Ruby so much. Continuing to be a hero and kill Grimm even when it seems to be bringing her closer to death is exactly the sort of levelheaded, heroic decision she would make.
OUCH. Poor Nora.
Pyrrha's nameless instructor is one of the wisest people here.
HOLY SHIT, WHAT IS UP WITH CINDER?
12/6/2018 c1 11Mew Shadowfang
I realize that I keep coming back to this fic. So hooray, you've earned a favorite from someone who rarely gives them out.
I kinda want another chapter, but at the same time, this fic is perfect the length it is. Maybe incorperate the idea into an AU or something. So much potential in this idea.
11Mew ShadowfangI realize that I keep coming back to this fic. So hooray, you've earned a favorite from someone who rarely gives them out.
I kinda want another chapter, but at the same time, this fic is perfect the length it is. Maybe incorperate the idea into an AU or something. So much potential in this idea.
10/10/2018 c1 Guest
aaaah
aaaah
9/28/2018 c1 Guest
Great concept and writing!
Great concept and writing!
9/26/2018 c1 KHARAKI TAKAN
This was really interesting never read anything like this one.
Great work.
This was really interesting never read anything like this one.
Great work.
9/26/2018 c1 2APhantomISuppose
This was an extremely interesting read. An odd concept, but the constantly shifting perspective was really well done. Good job, keep up the great work!
2APhantomISupposeThis was an extremely interesting read. An odd concept, but the constantly shifting perspective was really well done. Good job, keep up the great work!
9/26/2018 c1 Guest
ouch
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