for The Forgotten War10/11/2018 c2 
13Nightmare Senshi
actually, Lucy did leave a note when she left. She said she was going home. that's the only way Team Natsu had any idea where she went.
So that's invalid, Doom Marine. I recall that quite vividly. if you can't recall that, I suggest re-reading early issues.
13Nightmare Senshiactually, Lucy did leave a note when she left. She said she was going home. that's the only way Team Natsu had any idea where she went.
So that's invalid, Doom Marine. I recall that quite vividly. if you can't recall that, I suggest re-reading early issues.
10/11/2018 c1 23On Soaring Wings
Doom Marine,there is a difference between Lucy leaving for two-three days at most to clear the air with her father, and Natsu just up and leaving for a whole year to train with just a note. Stop using that argument again because it makes you look like a fool with no concept of time.
23On Soaring WingsDoom Marine,there is a difference between Lucy leaving for two-three days at most to clear the air with her father, and Natsu just up and leaving for a whole year to train with just a note. Stop using that argument again because it makes you look like a fool with no concept of time.
10/11/2018 c1 13Nightmare Senshi
not bad, a semi-used concept, but it's a good one to see everyone's different take on it.
I see a few spelling/Grammar issues, but that's it.
13Nightmare Senshinot bad, a semi-used concept, but it's a good one to see everyone's different take on it.
I see a few spelling/Grammar issues, but that's it.
9/28/2018 c1 Guest
I love this story!
I love this story!
9/27/2018 c1 Doom Marine 54
Lucy left at the end of the Phantom Lord arc without even leaving a note so she's got no right to complain about Natsu, also Fairy Tail didn't abandon her she CHOOSE to go off on her own. Also Aquariolus was definitely not a second mother to her she treated Lucy like crap.
Lucy left at the end of the Phantom Lord arc without even leaving a note so she's got no right to complain about Natsu, also Fairy Tail didn't abandon her she CHOOSE to go off on her own. Also Aquariolus was definitely not a second mother to her she treated Lucy like crap.
9/26/2018 c1 Guest
I think that this I pretty good but try to edit it more? Some words weren't correct for the sentence (I think).
I think that this I pretty good but try to edit it more? Some words weren't correct for the sentence (I think).