21h c298 Mpeter
Well played my friend, well played. You did in effect get me. Everything was going so well too. The reception everyone was having a great time, Yuri was in heaven well he better be with his companions next to him. One thing though with so many operators in attendance I'm sure they are all armed at least I hope they are. With Graham and Beckman foiling Fulcrums plans for them hopefully Team B can return the favor to Teddy.

Well there goes the security deposit. Great chapter my friend. Thank you.

3/10 c296 Rae Smith Cobleigh
Aww, cuteness and joy all around!

3/10 c298 12jwatkins
Damn. I'll admit, you got me. Yes, there was a part of me that was saying "this is too good to be true", all the wonderful wedding prep, friends and family gathering. But my willing suspension of disbelief won out and I was blissfully enjoying the festivities. I should have known better. Well played, sir. Well played. As surprising as that was, Fulcrum may think they have the upper hand, but this is still Team B and friends they have to contend with. I suspect Fulcrum will get more than they bargained for. So far with Beckman and Graham, respectively, things have not gone Fulcrum's way.

3/9 c297 chucksboxers
I’m behind and almost missed this heartwarming chapter! Glad i didn’t! Thanks WG!

3/9 c298 1JohnnyRayChandlett
"You were worried about nothing." Why is it that the Bartowski women always thoughtlessly hand out those harbingers of catastrophe? In canon, Sarah quipped about, "just one more mission", and here Ellie's light-heartedly summoning doom. At least, Sarah unknowingly sets the motto of the day: "You should worry more."

It all begins as peacefully and happily as the finale of the most fantastic rom-com ever created as Willie Garvin lines up, lovingly introduced person by person, an all-star cast of New Day. Sweet references to canon sprinkled throughout - "She didn't unpack her suitcase the whole time she was staying with us".

And then Roarke-in-the-box pops out in the least desired moment, a man that has no scruples and no shame, even stealing Bryce Larkin's words - "Hey. Carmichael. Did you miss me?"

That's following canon's main plot twist, but it's much better. And it gets even better! Langston Graham never had a chance to develop in canon (much too soon gone Tony Todd regretted that very much), but he's a fully developed character in New Day with quite a spy past, and I can't say how much I enjoyed that he hasn't forgotten how to deal with a threat. That guy is awesome and you better have him in your friend camp. I was equally enchanted to see the Auburn Fox handle her challenge and a gun with no problems and no qualms. Yeah, she closes the chapter on the right tone - "Well, shit." Steaming, smelling, hitting the fan, but not a Casablanca-type fan, but a powerhouse turbine.

Well, Willie!

3/8 c298 1Ancientgamer
OK, then. You were really setting up a very nice rehearsal dinner/celebration/party. And Sadie Moore had worked so hard to get everything just right. Too bad the Keystone Kops, better known as FULCRUM, had to show up. Talk about pooping in the punch bowl. Chevy Chase really makes me angry. I was looking forward to Team B and company whooping it up. All is not lost, so maybe they can still whoop it up after they open up a can of whoop ass on the wedding crashers. We'll have to wait and see. Please, please let Sadie kick Roark in the nuts. She deserves that much, at least. lol.

Nice to see Graham and Beckman being complete badasses and taking care of their business. After all of the hurt brought down on FULCRUM already, how could they still believe that they had the upper hand. Talk about blindly arrogant. Sheesh.

I actually feel sorry for the tattered remnants of the Not Ready for Prime Time Players. No, that's a lie. They have no idea what they've just walked into. As the saying goes, "the beatings will continue until their morale improves." Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing, my friend.

P.S. Please have a scene where the babysitters complain about the hell that gang of tykes put them through. If they only knew. lol.

3/8 c294 27Rae Smith Cobleigh
Very dramatic reveal scene, but the explanation of the whole process was believable... except for the soda bottle. I wandered off to google that because I was slightly incredulous. Learned some fun stuff. Thanks!