for Capital Offense11/25/2018 c9 rancheesan
I love this story.I also like the fight scenes and the sexual tension between Serenty and Ranma as Sailor earth. THIS STORY ROCKS!
I love this story.I also like the fight scenes and the sexual tension between Serenty and Ranma as Sailor earth. THIS STORY ROCKS!
11/24/2018 c8 WillItWork
Seeing the chapter update notice reminded me that I hadn’t actually posted a review — so I had to do something about that.
These past two chapters have really heated up the action, but the interleaved perspectives make for balance. Character-wise, I love reflection spots, so Mercury thinking about what she’s done, or Venus regretting being a golem that humanizes things.
As always thanks for sharing.
Seeing the chapter update notice reminded me that I hadn’t actually posted a review — so I had to do something about that.
These past two chapters have really heated up the action, but the interleaved perspectives make for balance. Character-wise, I love reflection spots, so Mercury thinking about what she’s done, or Venus regretting being a golem that humanizes things.
As always thanks for sharing.
10/21/2018 c4 WillItWork
You know, at least HALF the plot drama here could be avoided if people involved were actually honest with each other. However, in a multiverse rotting from the inside, most of the players are pathological liars unable to tell a straight story even when their reality demands it — as it does here.
I thought the mercury and Lyra connection didn’t get a fair shake — maybe with night goddesses hanging around, she’ll get more screen time.
Overall the chapter was a fun and dramatic intensity chapter. A bit more than intro, but not much happens. We all want everyone’s least liked cultist to get in the Veste.
Thanks for sharing!
You know, at least HALF the plot drama here could be avoided if people involved were actually honest with each other. However, in a multiverse rotting from the inside, most of the players are pathological liars unable to tell a straight story even when their reality demands it — as it does here.
I thought the mercury and Lyra connection didn’t get a fair shake — maybe with night goddesses hanging around, she’ll get more screen time.
Overall the chapter was a fun and dramatic intensity chapter. A bit more than intro, but not much happens. We all want everyone’s least liked cultist to get in the Veste.
Thanks for sharing!
10/18/2018 c1 RDDash
I am not sure if Akumi is that interesting of a character in the story. She really feels like she is just there.
I am not sure if Akumi is that interesting of a character in the story. She really feels like she is just there.
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