10/10/2018 c1 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Interesting one-shot about how the Hoshidans are doing. Most interesting indeed. I enjoyed it. I’m also quite impressed with how well you wrote down everyone’s personalities so well. These times must be tough for Mikoto and the Royal Family huh? Especially Hinoka, as she was the closes to the twins no doubt like in game canon with the Avatar. But I digress. It’s also interesting to see that Hinoka is beginning to see the effects that the Hoshido-amour struggle is affecting everyone. Her people mainly, as she doesn’t likely know of what happened in Nohr so far.

And how about that? I caught that reference of Gareth when Mikoto mentioned the “Lightning Drake” incident. Well done!

In any case, I look forward to what you’ve planned not only for Hinoka, but everyone else next chapter as well. Keep this up!