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1Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Is it so hard to not fuck up Ilia’s name? It just keeps going from Ilia to Illa and it’s annoying
1MuuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrdddIs it so hard to not fuck up Ilia’s name? It just keeps going from Ilia to Illa and it’s annoying
8/29/2024 c14 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Pretty sure Winter wouldn’t give a damn about the SDC, given that he said company. Although, they don’t have their own private army so this really makes no sense. But yeah, Winter wouldn’t care about anything related to the SDC as she knows, better than most people, that Jacques is a huge piece of shit. Just makes no sense for her to be angry at Qrow over it or for Qrow to use it against her since he knows she isn’t even in talks with her dad and hates him with a passion.
Pretty sure Winter wouldn’t give a damn about the SDC, given that he said company. Although, they don’t have their own private army so this really makes no sense. But yeah, Winter wouldn’t care about anything related to the SDC as she knows, better than most people, that Jacques is a huge piece of shit. Just makes no sense for her to be angry at Qrow over it or for Qrow to use it against her since he knows she isn’t even in talks with her dad and hates him with a passion.
8/29/2024 c6 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Ruby is nowhere near Light Speed. She’s pretty slow for having a type of Super Speed
Ruby is nowhere near Light Speed. She’s pretty slow for having a type of Super Speed
8/28/2024 c1 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Also, Weiss went from saying Jaune was a pleasant friend to instantly insulting him every chance she got, only making Weiss unlikable. Yang teases way too much, Pyrrha could barely say anything positive about Jaune without Yang instantly having to say something. Nora interrupts way too often as well
Also, Weiss went from saying Jaune was a pleasant friend to instantly insulting him every chance she got, only making Weiss unlikable. Yang teases way too much, Pyrrha could barely say anything positive about Jaune without Yang instantly having to say something. Nora interrupts way too often as well
8/21/2024 c48 7triscythe59
I know it’s pretty late to comment on the Deadpool chapter, but after seeing the latest movie of Deadpool and Wolverine I hope you plan to make a reaction chapter of both the movies!
7triscythe59I know it’s pretty late to comment on the Deadpool chapter, but after seeing the latest movie of Deadpool and Wolverine I hope you plan to make a reaction chapter of both the movies!
8/12/2024 c76 1Ultrautahraptor
It sure was one hell of a ride, hope to see them reacting again some time in the future. Hopefully we get to see them react to Jaune as Smaug or Sonic. EXE One Last Round, William afton, or as SCP-682. Yes i know that some of these are bad and straigh up evil, but i think we need them. I also hope we see Cinder and Salem in the future.
Have a nice vacatio dude
1UltrautahraptorIt sure was one hell of a ride, hope to see them reacting again some time in the future. Hopefully we get to see them react to Jaune as Smaug or Sonic. EXE One Last Round, William afton, or as SCP-682. Yes i know that some of these are bad and straigh up evil, but i think we need them. I also hope we see Cinder and Salem in the future.
Have a nice vacatio dude
8/9/2024 c74 15draconis ignitus
Since you've finished this story and have mentioned coming back for a future one, and considering how you have Hot Rod and referenced Optimus' death, have you considered doing the death scene from the original movie?
Or just the original movie itself?
I can see Salem as Unicron.
And just the sheer...emotional impact of it all.
The score itself brings tears to me.
Just food for thought.
15draconis ignitusSince you've finished this story and have mentioned coming back for a future one, and considering how you have Hot Rod and referenced Optimus' death, have you considered doing the death scene from the original movie?
Or just the original movie itself?
I can see Salem as Unicron.
And just the sheer...emotional impact of it all.
The score itself brings tears to me.
Just food for thought.
7/20/2024 c76 2Warrior of the Shadows
I enjoyed the hell out of reading this. Honestly though the one joke I want to see happen in the sequel is Teams RWBY and JNPR watch a Chicken Fight Live before they get pulled into View’s theater. Or at least have their first viewing be a live fight.
2Warrior of the ShadowsI enjoyed the hell out of reading this. Honestly though the one joke I want to see happen in the sequel is Teams RWBY and JNPR watch a Chicken Fight Live before they get pulled into View’s theater. Or at least have their first viewing be a live fight.
7/11/2024 c75 Number1Guy
To Murkscout: Leave the author alone, dude. He’s done with this story and I’m pretty sure he got other stories he wants to work on.
To Murkscout: Leave the author alone, dude. He’s done with this story and I’m pretty sure he got other stories he wants to work on.
7/9/2024 c76 MurkScout
Hey man. Just finished reading this chapter (had to stop after the first half for a few days to catch up with some work) and I just wanted to say your work is awesome. I know my last couple of suggestions weren’t exactly feasible, but when you do get around to the Return (can’t wait for that!), is it possible for you to do a chapter with Jaune as Whiplash from Iron Man 2? I love that movie’s version of one of my favorite villains, and I think Jaune could pull it off well (specifically the scene at the Monaco race track). Thanks, and keep up the good work!
Hey man. Just finished reading this chapter (had to stop after the first half for a few days to catch up with some work) and I just wanted to say your work is awesome. I know my last couple of suggestions weren’t exactly feasible, but when you do get around to the Return (can’t wait for that!), is it possible for you to do a chapter with Jaune as Whiplash from Iron Man 2? I love that movie’s version of one of my favorite villains, and I think Jaune could pull it off well (specifically the scene at the Monaco race track). Thanks, and keep up the good work!
7/2/2024 c76 HunterPrimeAW5M3
reaction ideas for sequel:
avater the last airbender
Demon Slayer
SAO abridged
more ben ten episodes (camp fear, ghostfreaked out, secret of the omnitrix.)
reaction ideas for sequel:
avater the last airbender
Demon Slayer
SAO abridged
more ben ten episodes (camp fear, ghostfreaked out, secret of the omnitrix.)