
9/19/2021 c4 Guest
Como que media hija de puta alex con su familia no? Jajaja bajale un cambio piba XD
Como que media hija de puta alex con su familia no? Jajaja bajale un cambio piba XD
4/13/2021 c30 TuMadreway89
Good story and awesome trilogy as a whole, although I didn’t agree with some things towards the end like leaving Barry to suffer and cutting off contact with some of their friends. Besides that it was an awesome read as a whole, I look forward to reading the life equation,
Good story and awesome trilogy as a whole, although I didn’t agree with some things towards the end like leaving Barry to suffer and cutting off contact with some of their friends. Besides that it was an awesome read as a whole, I look forward to reading the life equation,
4/13/2021 c29 TuMadreway89
I really don’t agree with not telling Connolly, Jess and some of the other friends of their inner circle about Kara being alive. I guess I just feel that’s wrong and selfish considering they did the best they could protecting the Danvers family.
I really don’t agree with not telling Connolly, Jess and some of the other friends of their inner circle about Kara being alive. I guess I just feel that’s wrong and selfish considering they did the best they could protecting the Danvers family.
4/10/2021 c18 TuMadreway89
I really hope these flash back chapters are done soon, I feel like it’s really dragging the story and getting boring.
I really hope these flash back chapters are done soon, I feel like it’s really dragging the story and getting boring.
11/6/2020 c30 Fabery
What a ride. I thought I would be sad about Seg leaving and Kara choosing to stay out of the superhero business but you made it sweet.
Last but not least, thanks for writing this 3-part stories. I loved how long and how many chapters there were. I loved the world building. I loved how different this Kara feels from the Kara in your other stories (different but without losing her essence). I loved how you decided to put the Danvers sisters in the center. I loved how you incorporated Bruce and Diana (even if I hated the way you written her off in this last part). I loved how you incorporated dc lore through out this. I loved what you made with Lobo. I could go on and on but I will just say that I'm grateful for the time and dedication. Your stories made these last few days of mine better. Thank you.
What a ride. I thought I would be sad about Seg leaving and Kara choosing to stay out of the superhero business but you made it sweet.
Last but not least, thanks for writing this 3-part stories. I loved how long and how many chapters there were. I loved the world building. I loved how different this Kara feels from the Kara in your other stories (different but without losing her essence). I loved how you decided to put the Danvers sisters in the center. I loved how you incorporated Bruce and Diana (even if I hated the way you written her off in this last part). I loved how you incorporated dc lore through out this. I loved what you made with Lobo. I could go on and on but I will just say that I'm grateful for the time and dedication. Your stories made these last few days of mine better. Thank you.
11/6/2020 c29 Fabery
I loved the action. I really enjoy the scenes where Kara is shown as a powerhouse.
I loved the action. I really enjoy the scenes where Kara is shown as a powerhouse.
11/5/2020 c28 Fabery
GREAT chapter. I really enjoyed how Seg described Nyssa and how he associated her with Kara.
GREAT chapter. I really enjoyed how Seg described Nyssa and how he associated her with Kara.
11/5/2020 c25 Fabery
Coming back to this chapter just to say that I totally agree with your opening note. Melissa's strength is something to be admired. I'm so happy she found love with a guy who seems deserving of her. And now you her new born I'm just so happy for her that I not even upset over Supergirl's cancellation. The last season's plot was terrible so I felt Melissa was wasting her time on the cw.
Coming back to this chapter just to say that I totally agree with your opening note. Melissa's strength is something to be admired. I'm so happy she found love with a guy who seems deserving of her. And now you her new born I'm just so happy for her that I not even upset over Supergirl's cancellation. The last season's plot was terrible so I felt Melissa was wasting her time on the cw.
11/5/2020 c27 Fabery
I love Seg so much! I know he won't but I desperately want him to stay with Kara and Alex. Also, I almost forgot that Brainiac 5 and Kara were a thing in the comics and the cartoon
I love Seg so much! I know he won't but I desperately want him to stay with Kara and Alex. Also, I almost forgot that Brainiac 5 and Kara were a thing in the comics and the cartoon
11/4/2020 c26 Fabery
So happy to see Krypton's season 1 plot in this story. It was an amazing season and Seg and Nyssa are great characters. I should have said it before but better late than never.
I'm also surprised to see Valor. I really like him and have hopes for his role in this story
So happy to see Krypton's season 1 plot in this story. It was an amazing season and Seg and Nyssa are great characters. I should have said it before but better late than never.
I'm also surprised to see Valor. I really like him and have hopes for his role in this story
11/1/2020 c7 Fabery
Can't believe I'm saying this but I'm a fan of Kelex. He keeps getting better and better
Can't believe I'm saying this but I'm a fan of Kelex. He keeps getting better and better
11/1/2020 c5 Fabery
Well, this is a mess. Alex and Eliza's relationship finally getting close to the one from the tv show is not a good sign
Well, this is a mess. Alex and Eliza's relationship finally getting close to the one from the tv show is not a good sign