for Spiritual Love (Luigi x Booette)1/7/2023 c3 Joe Balls
No fucking way did you just say Mario was in Vietnam
No fucking way did you just say Mario was in Vietnam
1/10/2022 c2 Blacksouls99
Hum that not true for the kitsune costume it’s first appear in super Mario bros 3 and than it came back in super Mario 3D land my friend
Hum that not true for the kitsune costume it’s first appear in super Mario bros 3 and than it came back in super Mario 3D land my friend
9/17/2020 c6 Guest
sexy
sexy
3/12/2020 c7 AstralRaven
I respect that you won't continue this fic but I'm left wondering, why do you see your writing in this fic as cringy. I've been reading fanfiction for 5 years now and I've seen some truely terrible writing, though I never said anything because anxiety and lack of experience prevents me from critiquing. Your writing is fine the way it is in this fanfic and generally pretty good, but I'm glad that you have improved. Cheers to your continued growth!
I respect that you won't continue this fic but I'm left wondering, why do you see your writing in this fic as cringy. I've been reading fanfiction for 5 years now and I've seen some truely terrible writing, though I never said anything because anxiety and lack of experience prevents me from critiquing. Your writing is fine the way it is in this fanfic and generally pretty good, but I'm glad that you have improved. Cheers to your continued growth!
2/12/2020 c7 
2DragonshadowRyukage
Hey, umm Do you think you’ll revisit the premise of this story ever?
2DragonshadowRyukageHey, umm Do you think you’ll revisit the premise of this story ever?
2/11/2020 c7 CID94
Disappointed after it’s now dead. Was looking forward to the rest but oh well, good luck on your future projects.
Disappointed after it’s now dead. Was looking forward to the rest but oh well, good luck on your future projects.
2/11/2020 c7 Midnight49
Well damn it was cringy but I was looking forward to the double date chapter.
Well damn it was cringy but I was looking forward to the double date chapter.
1/30/2020 c2 Fierce Dities Link
I know you're trying to be authentic with Mario and Luigi's accents and all, but you don't need to put "-a" in almost every word. You could leave it out entirely even and it would be ok. I like the story so far. Could do with a little more spacing, but that's just me, not really a necessity.
I know you're trying to be authentic with Mario and Luigi's accents and all, but you don't need to put "-a" in almost every word. You could leave it out entirely even and it would be ok. I like the story so far. Could do with a little more spacing, but that's just me, not really a necessity.
11/10/2019 c6 Guest
More bitch
More bitch
9/1/2019 c6 Guest
G
G
4/10/2019 c6 1D4RKWR173R
Wow it's been too long since last chapter. I hope you can continue this story.
1D4RKWR173RWow it's been too long since last chapter. I hope you can continue this story.
3/20/2019 c6 Blacknight908
you should keep luigis new voice as it is it's not going to hurt anything we can just imagine he's talking in Italian accent. Besides it was getting annoying adding a after each word. another thing is probably upgrade the rating if there will be lemons in this story.
you should keep luigis new voice as it is it's not going to hurt anything we can just imagine he's talking in Italian accent. Besides it was getting annoying adding a after each word. another thing is probably upgrade the rating if there will be lemons in this story.
2/28/2019 c6 Vigriff
I've been wondering, why did King Boo side with Bowser in the first place? Maybe you can explore that a bit?
I've been wondering, why did King Boo side with Bowser in the first place? Maybe you can explore that a bit?