for Pokemon: The Battle for Pokemon Master (Discontinued)10/20/2019 c1 
17LightingWinter2
Um... Why did you say it's complete if it's not? And I wonder if it's discontinued?
17LightingWinter2Um... Why did you say it's complete if it's not? And I wonder if it's discontinued?
9/8/2019 c1 15TrinityFlower of Memories
This was written really really well & I enjoy how realistic it is! Ash & Misty reconnecting was so nostalgic & great!
15TrinityFlower of MemoriesThis was written really really well & I enjoy how realistic it is! Ash & Misty reconnecting was so nostalgic & great!
10/11/2018 c2 Miss geek
Stupid trolls honestly got nothing else to do I’m sorry hope to still read ur story it’s soo good love how u portray serena as a bi& & cas to me she is lol
Stupid trolls honestly got nothing else to do I’m sorry hope to still read ur story it’s soo good love how u portray serena as a bi& & cas to me she is lol
10/11/2018 c1 15Blue Glass Spear
Two of the supposed alts are older then me. That's kind of a first sign they manufactured this whole claim.
15Blue Glass SpearTwo of the supposed alts are older then me. That's kind of a first sign they manufactured this whole claim.
10/11/2018 c2 Blue Glass Spear
[only conflict here is completely manufactured by Hybrid of Fate. If you block her sockpuppets and turn on review moderation to catch her anon spam, your review section will become quite calm.]
Actually this whole conflict was started by St Elmo's Fire who did this an a attempt to get his way from other users I mean even know he does it in his reviews.
Also, he made up the sock puppet nonsense even sent thousands of reports but the admins haven't banned me because it's complete bullcrap.
[only conflict here is completely manufactured by Hybrid of Fate. If you block her sockpuppets and turn on review moderation to catch her anon spam, your review section will become quite calm.]
Actually this whole conflict was started by St Elmo's Fire who did this an a attempt to get his way from other users I mean even know he does it in his reviews.
Also, he made up the sock puppet nonsense even sent thousands of reports but the admins haven't banned me because it's complete bullcrap.
10/11/2018 c2 23St Elmo's Fire
[Due to a recent surge of spam from Hybrid of Fate, Istwill56, KingPyle, and St Elmo's Fire, I have decided to discontinue this story on this site.]
You really don't have to do this. The only conflict here is completely manufactured by Hybrid of Fate. If you block her sockpuppets and turn on review moderation to catch her anon spam, your review section will become quite calm.
AO3 is... not a great choice if you want less conflict, honestly. If you do go there, I also recommend turning on comment moderation.
23St Elmo's Fire[Due to a recent surge of spam from Hybrid of Fate, Istwill56, KingPyle, and St Elmo's Fire, I have decided to discontinue this story on this site.]
You really don't have to do this. The only conflict here is completely manufactured by Hybrid of Fate. If you block her sockpuppets and turn on review moderation to catch her anon spam, your review section will become quite calm.
AO3 is... not a great choice if you want less conflict, honestly. If you do go there, I also recommend turning on comment moderation.
10/5/2018 c1 Guest
Well, given you are here I should just warn you. There a fight going on between several users. Honestly, its better using ao3 for your story at this rate.
As fot your story... its really clear you are pretty far behind aren't you in the anime.
Well, given you are here I should just warn you. There a fight going on between several users. Honestly, its better using ao3 for your story at this rate.
As fot your story... its really clear you are pretty far behind aren't you in the anime.
10/5/2018 c1 GenX567
[I don’t watch the anime, so I’m not going to be able to review this story on content. Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it. ]
This is complete nonsense. He has watched the anime. Secondly no one bothers with tags when character tags exisrs. That and everyone mix a and matches. Even writers discovered how pointless they were.
[You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard.]
Pokemon names are actual names. The creator has said so and both Game Freak and Nintendo have bother agreed on it.
[You’re formatting dialogue incorrectly. ]
No you aren't Dailogue is formatted as ["Hello." She said] or as ["Hello," She said] with the later only happening when interrupted.
This is all garbage.
[I don’t watch the anime, so I’m not going to be able to review this story on content. Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it. ]
This is complete nonsense. He has watched the anime. Secondly no one bothers with tags when character tags exisrs. That and everyone mix a and matches. Even writers discovered how pointless they were.
[You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard.]
Pokemon names are actual names. The creator has said so and both Game Freak and Nintendo have bother agreed on it.
[You’re formatting dialogue incorrectly. ]
No you aren't Dailogue is formatted as ["Hello." She said] or as ["Hello," She said] with the later only happening when interrupted.
This is all garbage.
10/5/2018 c1 23St Elmo's Fire
I don’t watch the anime, so I’m not going to be able to review this story on content. Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it. Find your story under “Manage Stories” and select it from the dropdown menu that says “World: Any” in the “Category” section.
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like trainer or professor or gym.
You’re formatting dialogue incorrectly. Dialogue is written as [“Hello,” she said] or [“Hello!” she said], never [“Hello.” She said] or [“Hello,” She said] or [“Hello” she said] or [“Hello!” She said]. This is because dialogue and speech tags are considered to be part of the same sentence, so they have to flow together. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb. In that case, the second part IS considered a separate sentence, so it’s written as [“Hello.” She grinned], never [“Hello,” she grinned]. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like “laughed” or “giggled” is in the second category. (“Speak” is also not a speech verb.) Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s [“Hi,” she said. “This is it.”] not [“Hi,” she said, “this is it.”] or [“Hi,” she said “this is it.”] And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s [“Hi. This,” she said, “is it.”] The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks (or single quotes) with thoughts. This is because quotation marks for thoughts make it look like your characters are talking out loud, which is confusing to the reader.
23St Elmo's FireI don’t watch the anime, so I’m not going to be able to review this story on content. Please tag your story as anime fic so people searching for anime fic can find it. Find your story under “Manage Stories” and select it from the dropdown menu that says “World: Any” in the “Category” section.
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like trainer or professor or gym.
You’re formatting dialogue incorrectly. Dialogue is written as [“Hello,” she said] or [“Hello!” she said], never [“Hello.” She said] or [“Hello,” She said] or [“Hello” she said] or [“Hello!” She said]. This is because dialogue and speech tags are considered to be part of the same sentence, so they have to flow together. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn’t contain a speech verb. In that case, the second part IS considered a separate sentence, so it’s written as [“Hello.” She grinned], never [“Hello,” she grinned]. Note that something isn’t a speech verb just because it’s a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like “laughed” or “giggled” is in the second category. (“Speak” is also not a speech verb.) Furthermore, if you’re breaking up two complete sentences it’s [“Hi,” she said. “This is it.”] not [“Hi,” she said, “this is it.”] or [“Hi,” she said “this is it.”] And if you’re breaking up a sentence in the middle, it’s [“Hi. This,” she said, “is it.”] The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don’t use quotation marks (or single quotes) with thoughts. This is because quotation marks for thoughts make it look like your characters are talking out loud, which is confusing to the reader.