for Dark Discoveries11/16 c1 suminonA
Would've had nothing against a dick driven writing... if it were not primarily dick driven. I kind of hate how Hermione's and Harry's friendship gets twisted in the first chapter... which I think makes up most of the reason why I stop here. The beauty of a dark character for me happens when said character still has love and trust to give to those who deserve, but the fact that the author turns against Granger, which I think is likely the least deserving of such vile treatment, doesn't go right with me. Besides, he's already in the fifth year, I believe? Is he around 15? I refuse to believe he's still completely ignorant of the differences between man and woman, the fact that he thought this had any chance at working better than just telling her of maked for a braindead MC, not an "evil" one. Granger not bolting away based on simple naivity and actual friendship she has with Harry makes the whole thing even worse.
Would've had nothing against a dick driven writing... if it were not primarily dick driven. I kind of hate how Hermione's and Harry's friendship gets twisted in the first chapter... which I think makes up most of the reason why I stop here. The beauty of a dark character for me happens when said character still has love and trust to give to those who deserve, but the fact that the author turns against Granger, which I think is likely the least deserving of such vile treatment, doesn't go right with me. Besides, he's already in the fifth year, I believe? Is he around 15? I refuse to believe he's still completely ignorant of the differences between man and woman, the fact that he thought this had any chance at working better than just telling her of maked for a braindead MC, not an "evil" one. Granger not bolting away based on simple naivity and actual friendship she has with Harry makes the whole thing even worse.
7/1 c64 pincho
Magician pulling a strap on out of a bag instead of a bunny...some days low humor is just needed.
Magician pulling a strap on out of a bag instead of a bunny...some days low humor is just needed.
7/1 c61 pincho
reality check, bwahahaha!
reality check, bwahahaha!
6/30 c45 pincho
Now there was a real depiction of what befalls muggleborns.
Now there was a real depiction of what befalls muggleborns.
6/30 c42 pincho
First comment: that was a great fight scene. You need more interspersed with the sex.
First comment: that was a great fight scene. You need more interspersed with the sex.
6/29 c85 slydino
Wonderful chapter. Great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wonderful chapter. Great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
6/29 c85 Guest
Just so everyone knows, this story will not be continued here on fanfiction because of current policies removing any stories with r18 contents. Currently it goes up to chapter 94 on archiveofourown by the same name under the same author name "aTasteofDarkness (Dirk grey)"
Just so everyone knows, this story will not be continued here on fanfiction because of current policies removing any stories with r18 contents. Currently it goes up to chapter 94 on archiveofourown by the same name under the same author name "aTasteofDarkness (Dirk grey)"
25/24 c85 Mwhitefoxm
Very nice! Hope to read more soon
Very nice! Hope to read more soon
4/24 c85 kaskazi117
Loving the story, however you keep mixing up him/her.
Also - time for mione to stop taking the potion? Whats the point of going back if the head girl with perfect newts ends up as a waitress?
Maybe she can reverse engineer the dark mark for harry?
Loving the story, however you keep mixing up him/her.
Also - time for mione to stop taking the potion? Whats the point of going back if the head girl with perfect newts ends up as a waitress?
Maybe she can reverse engineer the dark mark for harry?
3/27 c42 Simianpower
Not bad at all. For a smut story, that was some good combat. But it's "legiLImency", not "legimency".
Not bad at all. For a smut story, that was some good combat. But it's "legiLImency", not "legimency".