for Dark Discoveries10/4/2023 c83 Neotono
This story took a nosedive in quality a long time ago. The 1k chapters do not help, it just pads the chapter count and slows the story to a snails pace.
This story took a nosedive in quality a long time ago. The 1k chapters do not help, it just pads the chapter count and slows the story to a snails pace.
10/4/2023 c2 Verina Du'Arden
The previous two chapters need more of a... I guess a lead up to Harry's actions. It relies too much on the reader being familiar with the more or less basic HP story line up to this point. This just makes Harry seem like someone anyone would be a fool trust... unless of course this is the effect you desire.
The previous two chapters need more of a... I guess a lead up to Harry's actions. It relies too much on the reader being familiar with the more or less basic HP story line up to this point. This just makes Harry seem like someone anyone would be a fool trust... unless of course this is the effect you desire.
10/4/2023 c83 George Cristian810
The chapters have started way too short and harry started to become too warped . For him women are playthings , something to use and discard when you want . I dont like this harry .
The chapters have started way too short and harry started to become too warped . For him women are playthings , something to use and discard when you want . I dont like this harry .
10/4/2023 c82 
6thunderofdeath97
NGL wish there was some more, or some in general, of Harry with the following
Astoria Greengrass
Astoria's and Daphne's mom
Katie Bell
Angelina Johnson
Molly Weasley
Lily Evans Potter
Andromeda Tonks
Narcissa Malfoy
Bellatrix Lestrange
Hermione's mom
Alecto Carrow
Hestia and Flora Carrow
Madam Rosmerta
Olympe Maxime
Perenelle Flamel
Morgana
Helga Hufflepuff
Cho Chang
Lavender Brown
Patil twins
Tracy Davis
Fleur Delacour
Petunia
Marlene Mckinnon
Penelope Clearwater
Millicent Bulstrode
Rowena and Helena Ravenclaw
Apolloine Delacour
Rita Skeeter
Megan Jones
Hestia Jones
Alice Longbottom
Gwenog Jones
Emmaline Vance
6thunderofdeath97NGL wish there was some more, or some in general, of Harry with the following
Astoria Greengrass
Astoria's and Daphne's mom
Katie Bell
Angelina Johnson
Molly Weasley
Lily Evans Potter
Andromeda Tonks
Narcissa Malfoy
Bellatrix Lestrange
Hermione's mom
Alecto Carrow
Hestia and Flora Carrow
Madam Rosmerta
Olympe Maxime
Perenelle Flamel
Morgana
Helga Hufflepuff
Cho Chang
Lavender Brown
Patil twins
Tracy Davis
Fleur Delacour
Petunia
Marlene Mckinnon
Penelope Clearwater
Millicent Bulstrode
Rowena and Helena Ravenclaw
Apolloine Delacour
Rita Skeeter
Megan Jones
Hestia Jones
Alice Longbottom
Gwenog Jones
Emmaline Vance
10/3/2023 c82 yoto
bon chapitre
bon chapitre
9/26/2023 c81 yoto
bon chapitre
bon chapitre
9/24/2023 c81 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
6Yaw6113Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
9/23/2023 c81 Jack1nTheBox
there's an unfortunate spelling mistake at the start. it turned Amelia into putty, not a potty, that's a toilet bro, less sexy more nasty.
anyway, otherwise great as always.
there's an unfortunate spelling mistake at the start. it turned Amelia into putty, not a potty, that's a toilet bro, less sexy more nasty.
anyway, otherwise great as always.
9/23/2023 c81 George1892
"turned her into a potty in his hand."
The phrase is "turned her into putty" because putty is easily malleable.
"turned her into a potty in his hand."
The phrase is "turned her into putty" because putty is easily malleable.