
4/17 c3 Guest
I mean i didnt assume it was a nerf to the mc but that kinda nerf to an mc is so common that you cant really blame pepole for it
I mean i didnt assume it was a nerf to the mc but that kinda nerf to an mc is so common that you cant really blame pepole for it
4/12 c13 LongSongSilver
ahhhhh
the AN preamble and recap just keep taking up more and more of the chapter T_T
ahhhhh
the AN preamble and recap just keep taking up more and more of the chapter T_T
4/7 c24 thmstrbtr96
You should really start a storyline something similar how TV shows have episodes that have a storyline that leads to the final episode in a season which normally accumulates to the ending of the season until the next season happens
I wonder what happened if Tony Stark combined Uru, vibranium, and adamantium
I would like to have galactus's daughter have a relationship with quill
Try to remake his spaceship only better try using him Pym particles on the whole ship so normally the ship would be the size of a planet but it is shrunk down to something like a famous car or maybe in the shape of a famous car and probably be like the TARDIS the front seats are the same but the back seats lead to the entrance to the whole Tardis like vehicle that could if done correctly hold his whole base of operation for example it could hold enough room to house the population of a whole planet our whole planet plus some more for agricultural room to feed everyone just so he can go around and mess with people taking maybe 50 people with him and have them pay or have you pay them to just stay in the vehicle until they stop and they would come out of the car one after the other like a clown car just to f*** with people
He can probably f*** with people like some people were having a problem with a something they were having trouble with so he silently walks and fixes the problem and leaves and or leaving a sign says saw it broken needing fixing tried fixing it
Create a couple more helicarriors just for Fury with Superior defenses
You should really start a storyline something similar how TV shows have episodes that have a storyline that leads to the final episode in a season which normally accumulates to the ending of the season until the next season happens
I wonder what happened if Tony Stark combined Uru, vibranium, and adamantium
I would like to have galactus's daughter have a relationship with quill
Try to remake his spaceship only better try using him Pym particles on the whole ship so normally the ship would be the size of a planet but it is shrunk down to something like a famous car or maybe in the shape of a famous car and probably be like the TARDIS the front seats are the same but the back seats lead to the entrance to the whole Tardis like vehicle that could if done correctly hold his whole base of operation for example it could hold enough room to house the population of a whole planet our whole planet plus some more for agricultural room to feed everyone just so he can go around and mess with people taking maybe 50 people with him and have them pay or have you pay them to just stay in the vehicle until they stop and they would come out of the car one after the other like a clown car just to f*** with people
He can probably f*** with people like some people were having a problem with a something they were having trouble with so he silently walks and fixes the problem and leaves and or leaving a sign says saw it broken needing fixing tried fixing it
Create a couple more helicarriors just for Fury with Superior defenses
4/3 c14 hdhusky
im very lost in this chapter. perspectives are changing so quickly, i have no clue who is who.
im very lost in this chapter. perspectives are changing so quickly, i have no clue who is who.
4/2 c1 Zealot07
interesting, but maybe the power scale grew too much, and mc has done some very weird shit and weird behavior
interesting, but maybe the power scale grew too much, and mc has done some very weird shit and weird behavior
3/30 c24 Guest Test 123
Okay, yeah, damn, this is a good story. I know life happens, so it might not always be possible, but fingers crossed that once a month updates will be happening, 'cause I'm already looking forward to the next one.
Okay, yeah, damn, this is a good story. I know life happens, so it might not always be possible, but fingers crossed that once a month updates will be happening, 'cause I'm already looking forward to the next one.
3/30 c5 Guest Test 123
Hey man, I love all the exposition. I'm loving pretty much everything about this story.
The only complaint I could make is that I found this story at 108k words, saw it had updated 2 days ago, and noted that I had never seen it before, and concluded it was new and started reading it. The problem there of course, is that I hadn't realized until the author's note in chapter 3 where it mentions 2019, just when this was started. My current plan is to hope really fucking hard that there was something like a 5 year gap in updates for the story, and that in the future there will be regular updates, maybe once a week or so... Look, hope can only do so much for me if I don't also have a Blue Power Ring, so please don't shatter my hopes!
(Clarification: I initially thought when I first found this story that it was 100k words written over maybe a few months, then I experienced the despair of actually looking at the story bar and seeing it was published in 2018, changing the theoretical update rate from 100k words in 3 months to 100k words in 6 and a half years. And now I'm inevitably going to blast through the rest of this story that's currently uploaded and run out out of words to read in a couple hours. I'm already dreading that moment of inevitable agony).
Hey man, I love all the exposition. I'm loving pretty much everything about this story.
The only complaint I could make is that I found this story at 108k words, saw it had updated 2 days ago, and noted that I had never seen it before, and concluded it was new and started reading it. The problem there of course, is that I hadn't realized until the author's note in chapter 3 where it mentions 2019, just when this was started. My current plan is to hope really fucking hard that there was something like a 5 year gap in updates for the story, and that in the future there will be regular updates, maybe once a week or so... Look, hope can only do so much for me if I don't also have a Blue Power Ring, so please don't shatter my hopes!
(Clarification: I initially thought when I first found this story that it was 100k words written over maybe a few months, then I experienced the despair of actually looking at the story bar and seeing it was published in 2018, changing the theoretical update rate from 100k words in 3 months to 100k words in 6 and a half years. And now I'm inevitably going to blast through the rest of this story that's currently uploaded and run out out of words to read in a couple hours. I'm already dreading that moment of inevitable agony).
3/30 c22 realfan16
sometimes there's nothing to say that doesn't feel to generic and rehearsed. Even now i don't have anything in particular to say aside from "i fear nothinglooks at the box with disdain*
sometimes there's nothing to say that doesn't feel to generic and rehearsed. Even now i don't have anything in particular to say aside from "i fear nothinglooks at the box with disdain*
3/29 c24
1Jonakiller
Heeeeelll yaaa, new chapter hype! Thats a good way to fall asleep i tell ya! Nice to see Galacta finally meet her “maker”, hehe, get it? Cus he is gonna be creating a lot of biomass for her?

Heeeeelll yaaa, new chapter hype! Thats a good way to fall asleep i tell ya! Nice to see Galacta finally meet her “maker”, hehe, get it? Cus he is gonna be creating a lot of biomass for her?