for Deku Spider10/9/2018 c1 Morlandros
I think it's off to a pretty decent start really. One thing that really stands out at me though: when did the symbiote retract? It's not clear just how people should be reacting to him for me, since I at first assumed he was all dressed like green spider-man. But then suddenly All Might's there and recognizes him immediately, so I have to start assuming that he's been looking normal for most of this time.
I think it's off to a pretty decent start really. One thing that really stands out at me though: when did the symbiote retract? It's not clear just how people should be reacting to him for me, since I at first assumed he was all dressed like green spider-man. But then suddenly All Might's there and recognizes him immediately, so I have to start assuming that he's been looking normal for most of this time.
10/7/2018 c1 EzioIsPIRATE
i dont think ignoring our reviews is such a good idea mate, considering the fact that we can't read this stuff without wasting a huge chunk of time that could have been saved if this was written properly.
i dont think ignoring our reviews is such a good idea mate, considering the fact that we can't read this stuff without wasting a huge chunk of time that could have been saved if this was written properly.
10/7/2018 c1 cerberus328
Its all fucked try a different typing program like word or you may have uploaded it wrong
Its all fucked try a different typing program like word or you may have uploaded it wrong
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