for The Dragons Rebirth2/11 c13 t0uch-m3
the mistakes in characters names are hurting my brain!.
please fix the problems in spelling it won't take long to fix,if you don't know the spelling you can always use google or a autocorrect app.
the mistakes in characters names are hurting my brain!.
please fix the problems in spelling it won't take long to fix,if you don't know the spelling you can always use google or a autocorrect app.
10/30/2020 c22 Ravel Phoenix
Just finished the last Chapter, it was good, more so than I thought it would be minus the grammatical mistakes. Hope you update soon !
Just finished the last Chapter, it was good, more so than I thought it would be minus the grammatical mistakes. Hope you update soon !
10/29/2020 c5 Ravel Phoenix
Chapter 5: My face split into a grin at two times: When Issei asked Ingvild for her first kiss and when Issei rejected the sleep offer with Asia. Nice Chapter !
Chapter 5: My face split into a grin at two times: When Issei asked Ingvild for her first kiss and when Issei rejected the sleep offer with Asia. Nice Chapter !
8/24/2020 c22 Guest
Dude you have got to put path to supremacy back up cuz it was a freaking awesome story!
Dude you have got to put path to supremacy back up cuz it was a freaking awesome story!
8/22/2020 c22 hennessyswagg83
I feel like you're missing the aspect that joining a peerage means being becoming a devil there's realistically no leaving a peerage option and are just adding this thing for a character that doesn't even realistically doesn't even exist in canon at all this story was great unit you created a female Naruto I'm assuming and Itachi in the DxD universe
I feel like you're missing the aspect that joining a peerage means being becoming a devil there's realistically no leaving a peerage option and are just adding this thing for a character that doesn't even realistically doesn't even exist in canon at all this story was great unit you created a female Naruto I'm assuming and Itachi in the DxD universe
7/2/2020 c22 james
finaly a update yes
finaly a update yes
6/26/2020 c22 
2Xerzo LotCN
you know i always wondered why such and such can't learn ki (but yokai can) or touki (but sairaorg use it) or senjutsu (but advanced ki users can) but others can so odd meh whatever
so what race was killed by the devils does she mean nekomata?
well that worked out well
also idk if it actually possible but all those fics for issei do it so might as well lols
issei and azazel having a nice bond
also he is very right ise would destroy anyone who hurts those he cares about
interesting training i wonder what it is it supposed to be powerful cool
wow does she really want that date she fell hard and fast huh
2Xerzo LotCNyou know i always wondered why such and such can't learn ki (but yokai can) or touki (but sairaorg use it) or senjutsu (but advanced ki users can) but others can so odd meh whatever
so what race was killed by the devils does she mean nekomata?
well that worked out well
also idk if it actually possible but all those fics for issei do it so might as well lols
issei and azazel having a nice bond
also he is very right ise would destroy anyone who hurts those he cares about
interesting training i wonder what it is it supposed to be powerful cool
wow does she really want that date she fell hard and fast huh