for The Demigod of Ooo8/30 c3 James351
eternal reincarnation hhmmm why does that sound familar cause who do we know that reincarnates every 1000 years
eternal reincarnation hhmmm why does that sound familar cause who do we know that reincarnates every 1000 years
7/16/2021 c5 
14WOKELAND
You've done an entertaining job with this fanfic so far. Percy's interactions with the world of OOO and its characters. Keep it up.
14WOKELANDYou've done an entertaining job with this fanfic so far. Percy's interactions with the world of OOO and its characters. Keep it up.
6/9/2021 c5 Dean
Mentor Percy route, I gotta say I like what i'm seeing. Percy is accepting what happened and seems to be becoming his old self again. Am I sensing a hint of PercyXBonnie or is that my imagination? Either way I can tell that the land of Ooo is gonna get fairly interesting given Percy is absolutely built different in comparison to anything in it except for Golb. If you want a nice solo adventure for him have Percy team up with Billy's ex girlfriend Canyon she's a water being and that should be a very interesting match up. My only complaint is Percy isn't joking as much as he use to and in this timeline their all about jokes. All in all I can't wait for the next chapter please don't keep us waiting.
Mentor Percy route, I gotta say I like what i'm seeing. Percy is accepting what happened and seems to be becoming his old self again. Am I sensing a hint of PercyXBonnie or is that my imagination? Either way I can tell that the land of Ooo is gonna get fairly interesting given Percy is absolutely built different in comparison to anything in it except for Golb. If you want a nice solo adventure for him have Percy team up with Billy's ex girlfriend Canyon she's a water being and that should be a very interesting match up. My only complaint is Percy isn't joking as much as he use to and in this timeline their all about jokes. All in all I can't wait for the next chapter please don't keep us waiting.
5/18/2020 c1 chaos the first primordial
it was going pretty great until percy started to throw his head back and let out a bloodcurling scream, plus alot of other stuff, l just cant continue reading this its good but alot of it makes me not want to read it sorry
it was going pretty great until percy started to throw his head back and let out a bloodcurling scream, plus alot of other stuff, l just cant continue reading this its good but alot of it makes me not want to read it sorry
6/14/2019 c4 Calico
You need help with your grammar and spelling dude. Get a beta.
You need help with your grammar and spelling dude. Get a beta.
6/14/2019 c3 Stormspartan21
Nice. Keep up the good work.
Nice. Keep up the good work.
6/13/2019 c3 Matt
Nice though you might want to spellcheck some words. Sad that my favorite gay couple(Nico and Will) is dead along with most of Percy’s friends. Who’ll be his new lover? Please update L.H and O.P story soon.
Nice though you might want to spellcheck some words. Sad that my favorite gay couple(Nico and Will) is dead along with most of Percy’s friends. Who’ll be his new lover? Please update L.H and O.P story soon.