
3/22/2020 c2 ThatsLifeDarlings
ohhhh looks great so far! I noticed a few mistakes? for the first word I think you meant initiating? then on the second chapter doable would be better as useable or some other last one is that you have out where a you should be. Hope this helps!
ohhhh looks great so far! I noticed a few mistakes? for the first word I think you meant initiating? then on the second chapter doable would be better as useable or some other last one is that you have out where a you should be. Hope this helps!
10/10/2019 c2 Guest
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
10/1/2019 c2 Guest
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
8/30/2019 c1 Guest
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
8/23/2019 c2 Guest
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
Looking forward for the next chapter to come out soon
11/16/2018 c1 Guest
Oh happy day, a new oc naruto gamer fanfiic's out. So far so good man. Keep it up.
Oh happy day, a new oc naruto gamer fanfiic's out. So far so good man. Keep it up.
11/15/2018 c2 Guest
:)
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10/31/2018 c2 Guest
Interesting idea for stats please continue.
Interesting idea for stats please continue.
10/14/2018 c2 Heart
Wheeee!. Convenient that. Must be a library game mechanic...
Wheeee!. Convenient that. Must be a library game mechanic...
10/14/2018 c1 Heart
Wow. Yus Lee is a Clan~ I thought she was gonna pick that just from the title. Interestiiiiiiing... solid groundwork
Wow. Yus Lee is a Clan~ I thought she was gonna pick that just from the title. Interestiiiiiiing... solid groundwork
10/14/2018 c2
5Soledge1
she is well on her way to getting stronger. her next enemy should be human like. Imp or Goblin should do.

she is well on her way to getting stronger. her next enemy should be human like. Imp or Goblin should do.
10/14/2018 c2 MarlinMagic
i really like this and its awesome that you're trying something new! my personal feedback is to try and go into more depth with your story. i know this means longer chapters and slower updates but i personally feel it makes a fanfic 10 times better. thanks for the update!
i really like this and its awesome that you're trying something new! my personal feedback is to try and go into more depth with your story. i know this means longer chapters and slower updates but i personally feel it makes a fanfic 10 times better. thanks for the update!