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1Ilireanwri
Sooooo... no piccolo jr. in this story? Honestly, I am more than a bit disappointed with that as he is one one of my favorite characters after he gets out of his "kill son goku at any cost" phase XD
he and Vegeta have some of the most interesting and entertaining character growths
1IlireanwriSooooo... no piccolo jr. in this story? Honestly, I am more than a bit disappointed with that as he is one one of my favorite characters after he gets out of his "kill son goku at any cost" phase XD
he and Vegeta have some of the most interesting and entertaining character growths
12h c1 Guest
nice
nice
4/28 c58 ultracrazymatt
Welcome back, and congrats on finding a new job, hoping you'll get more time to write more chapters.
anyway, Yes at last they've arrived, and wow the Ginyu's were taken out pretty fast, Raditz took out Jeice and Burter with ease and seems like he has a history with them too, and oof, Recoome wiped out quick like a bug by Gine that quickly. I am very glad that Kakarot is back with his wife and kid and at least Yamcha is ok. Vegeta's lucky Chichi still hasn't mentioned to her husband and mother in law that Vegeta broke her back and caused her pain and threatened her child if Chichi didn't surrender and submit herself to Vegeta entirely and be his concubine by force for more offsprings, had they known that they would've went for Vegeta and ended him.
I know really do hope that Guru will awaken Gohan and Chichi's potential, particularly Chichi, I wanna see what she's capable of, it be cool if she could gain S cells and gain Zenkai boosts that Saiyans have, especially demonic and spiritual powers, it be cool. I do hope Kakarot doesn't end up too strong to the point of being invincible, Frieza still has be capable of beating him and others to prove he's a threat in this story. It would be awesome if all the Z gang, Yamcha, Bulma, Gohan, Chichi and Krillin all fight Frieza's army and Raditz and Gine destroy Zarbon and Dodoria when they arrive.
Aaannnnnddddd crap! Ginyu now has Raditz body, this is not good, Kakarot, you guys be careful.
Even worse, Frieza just freaking arrived now, well at least Nail is here to help at least, as much as Vegeta is a scumbag they need all the help they can get, cause is way too damn strong even for Kakarot, I just Guru awakening Kakarot, Gohan, Chichi, Raditz and Gine's potentials will be enough to at least hold back Frieza, but highly doubt they'll beat him that easily.
Welcome back, and congrats on finding a new job, hoping you'll get more time to write more chapters.
anyway, Yes at last they've arrived, and wow the Ginyu's were taken out pretty fast, Raditz took out Jeice and Burter with ease and seems like he has a history with them too, and oof, Recoome wiped out quick like a bug by Gine that quickly. I am very glad that Kakarot is back with his wife and kid and at least Yamcha is ok. Vegeta's lucky Chichi still hasn't mentioned to her husband and mother in law that Vegeta broke her back and caused her pain and threatened her child if Chichi didn't surrender and submit herself to Vegeta entirely and be his concubine by force for more offsprings, had they known that they would've went for Vegeta and ended him.
I know really do hope that Guru will awaken Gohan and Chichi's potential, particularly Chichi, I wanna see what she's capable of, it be cool if she could gain S cells and gain Zenkai boosts that Saiyans have, especially demonic and spiritual powers, it be cool. I do hope Kakarot doesn't end up too strong to the point of being invincible, Frieza still has be capable of beating him and others to prove he's a threat in this story. It would be awesome if all the Z gang, Yamcha, Bulma, Gohan, Chichi and Krillin all fight Frieza's army and Raditz and Gine destroy Zarbon and Dodoria when they arrive.
Aaannnnnddddd crap! Ginyu now has Raditz body, this is not good, Kakarot, you guys be careful.
Even worse, Frieza just freaking arrived now, well at least Nail is here to help at least, as much as Vegeta is a scumbag they need all the help they can get, cause is way too damn strong even for Kakarot, I just Guru awakening Kakarot, Gohan, Chichi, Raditz and Gine's potentials will be enough to at least hold back Frieza, but highly doubt they'll beat him that easily.
4/28 c58 Anon
Amazing work on this new chapter. Looks like Vegeta joins the team. I know at this point he deserves to die storywise but I can't help but be draw to his character. There are some qualities that I like in his character.
Though still, Vegeta is an ass. XD
Amazing work on this new chapter. Looks like Vegeta joins the team. I know at this point he deserves to die storywise but I can't help but be draw to his character. There are some qualities that I like in his character.
Though still, Vegeta is an ass. XD
4/28 c58 Atea1793
Is Guru going to bring back Porunga like Kami did with Shenron back in the canon anime after King Piccolo destroyed him? He created Porunga, so he should have the original model on him.
And once again, I'm BEGGING you, do NOT follow that annoying trend as other authors who have Gine go with Kakarot to Earth and have Vegeta be a bigger monster than he is in the canon anime. He hands-down has the best character development in the Dragon Ball series and screwing it over just to follow some awful trend would be a travesty!
Is Guru going to bring back Porunga like Kami did with Shenron back in the canon anime after King Piccolo destroyed him? He created Porunga, so he should have the original model on him.
And once again, I'm BEGGING you, do NOT follow that annoying trend as other authors who have Gine go with Kakarot to Earth and have Vegeta be a bigger monster than he is in the canon anime. He hands-down has the best character development in the Dragon Ball series and screwing it over just to follow some awful trend would be a travesty!
4/28 c58 214Shadow Joestar
KO awesome chapter, Nail has come into the picture to tell everyone about Frieza coming to Planet Namek which means Vegeta will have to work with Gine to survive and ready themselves for the battle of their lives, if they can get along long enough.
214Shadow JoestarKO awesome chapter, Nail has come into the picture to tell everyone about Frieza coming to Planet Namek which means Vegeta will have to work with Gine to survive and ready themselves for the battle of their lives, if they can get along long enough.
4/28 c1 rachlnoah
The story delves into a tense and emotionally charged environment, showcasing Miss Parker's internal conflict and the strained relationships with those around her, especially with Raines and Lyle. The writing effectively portrays her vulnerability and the dangerous dynamics at play, leaving the reader hooked with its mix of suspense and raw emotion
The story delves into a tense and emotionally charged environment, showcasing Miss Parker's internal conflict and the strained relationships with those around her, especially with Raines and Lyle. The writing effectively portrays her vulnerability and the dangerous dynamics at play, leaving the reader hooked with its mix of suspense and raw emotion
4/26 c57 Guest
I'm glad that you have gone better brother. Also like Atea1793 said, I really hope that you also don't fall into the same hole of making Vegeta a worse ass than he already is in canon because it is not only an annoying trend that let Gine go to Earth with Goku, but also a little annoying because it would be too OOC for him.
I'm glad that you have gone better brother. Also like Atea1793 said, I really hope that you also don't fall into the same hole of making Vegeta a worse ass than he already is in canon because it is not only an annoying trend that let Gine go to Earth with Goku, but also a little annoying because it would be too OOC for him.
4/23 c57 Anon
Would you include Daima into this story? I wonder how Gine will fit into Daima in this universe?
Would you include Daima into this story? I wonder how Gine will fit into Daima in this universe?
4/23 c57 guest
So Raditz got his body stolen by Captain Ginyu huh? I honestly thought it was going to be Gine who was going to get her body hijacked, because you know she's the main character of this story like Goku was in canon.
I'm interested where this story is going.
So Raditz got his body stolen by Captain Ginyu huh? I honestly thought it was going to be Gine who was going to get her body hijacked, because you know she's the main character of this story like Goku was in canon.
I'm interested where this story is going.
4/23 c57 Guest
Aww man, why did you have Ginyu swap bodies with Raditz? I was looking forward for Gine getting her body stolen by Ginyu.
Oh well. This story is still good. Please continue.
Aww man, why did you have Ginyu swap bodies with Raditz? I was looking forward for Gine getting her body stolen by Ginyu.
Oh well. This story is still good. Please continue.
4/21 c57 rubendrawdriguez
This is super interesting! I honestly never seen a db fic change so much especially at this point. No idea what's gonna happen and it's kinda tyrilling. Ty for the chapter
This is super interesting! I honestly never seen a db fic change so much especially at this point. No idea what's gonna happen and it's kinda tyrilling. Ty for the chapter
4/21 c57 16Zhorvak
I wonder if Gine will turn into SSJ4 since she still has her tail.
Ginyu is toast if he gets caught
16ZhorvakI wonder if Gine will turn into SSJ4 since she still has her tail.
Ginyu is toast if he gets caught
4/21 c57 21Ander Arias
First of all, I'm glad that you're doing much better now.
After so much suffering, the guys finally get some much needed respite with the Son family showing up... then Raditz gets his body hijacked. Though the title kinda spoiled that Ginyu was going to use his signature move on someone.
21Ander AriasFirst of all, I'm glad that you're doing much better now.
After so much suffering, the guys finally get some much needed respite with the Son family showing up... then Raditz gets his body hijacked. Though the title kinda spoiled that Ginyu was going to use his signature move on someone.