for My Dearest1/4/2020 c8 Bella
Very good Anelah! Please continue soon! Love these updates in the Jackelica section right now!
Love to follow the start of their relation, you write very well and funny!
Very good Anelah! Please continue soon! Love these updates in the Jackelica section right now!
Love to follow the start of their relation, you write very well and funny!
10/28/2019 c7 
43valenelle
"*Slap.* If she had at least hit his other cheek." Cracked up on that one.
I like your sense of humor and comedic style flowing between the lines. Now, everything is well written, but I can really see the greatness grow in particularly where you took on quite previously in this story.
This version of their start is very believable and I look forward to read on more when you have time to update. :) Their witty remarks to each other are also very much in character so I like it. For me I always, most of all, appreciate when one manage keeping them true to themselves and I am impressed by how much you do so. ;)
/Val
43valenelle"*Slap.* If she had at least hit his other cheek." Cracked up on that one.
I like your sense of humor and comedic style flowing between the lines. Now, everything is well written, but I can really see the greatness grow in particularly where you took on quite previously in this story.
This version of their start is very believable and I look forward to read on more when you have time to update. :) Their witty remarks to each other are also very much in character so I like it. For me I always, most of all, appreciate when one manage keeping them true to themselves and I am impressed by how much you do so. ;)
/Val
12/17/2018 c4 Guest
Best best best...please continue
Best best best...please continue