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11/8/2018 c1 7Roslein
Hello!
I really enjoyed this lil deep dive, it was really well constructed.
I really like the language you used! 'Lying by omission' is a phrase I've never thought of using and I really like how it sounds.
There were some minor grammar mistakes here and there like a lack of capitalization on Lag's name in the second last paragraph. Other than that I think that it was a lovely addition to our archive and I'd love to see more perspectives you have on events in the canon!
- Psyche

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