for harry Sorcerer of darkness5/5/2020 c1 
11thunderofdeath97
why is there a 22 year old still in school here? she cant be that slow? also ron is not that competent, neither is ginny, and hermione is yeah enough said there
11thunderofdeath97why is there a 22 year old still in school here? she cant be that slow? also ron is not that competent, neither is ginny, and hermione is yeah enough said there
10/22/2019 c1 A Note of Advice
Hello, I have just finished the first chapter and it feels like you have rushed the development of your character changes in this chapter. I don’t mean to criticise you or your work, but it maybe an area to work on in your future story’s. I have not read further as of this review so please ignore me if you have more a in-depth development of of your characters later in your story.
Hello, I have just finished the first chapter and it feels like you have rushed the development of your character changes in this chapter. I don’t mean to criticise you or your work, but it maybe an area to work on in your future story’s. I have not read further as of this review so please ignore me if you have more a in-depth development of of your characters later in your story.
10/7/2019 c1 Pieter250
Names should start with a capital letter. Sentences should start with one as well. At the moment the story reads like a carelessly written first draft.
Names should start with a capital letter. Sentences should start with one as well. At the moment the story reads like a carelessly written first draft.
10/6/2019 c1 magitech
Sorry but this concept has been done to death and beyond.
Gryffindor bad, Slytherin fantastic and Harry saying the Hat wanted him in Slytherin.
It only said Slytherin would help him become great, but I say it would have said that about ANY house.
And Harry didn't ask for Gryffindor, only not Slytherin becasue he didn't didn't want to go into the House which spawned the murderer of his parents and Draco Malfoy was a spoiled and a total bigoted bastard, much like Dudley Dursley. Who;d want to spend seven years with that?
Sorry but this concept has been done to death and beyond.
Gryffindor bad, Slytherin fantastic and Harry saying the Hat wanted him in Slytherin.
It only said Slytherin would help him become great, but I say it would have said that about ANY house.
And Harry didn't ask for Gryffindor, only not Slytherin becasue he didn't didn't want to go into the House which spawned the murderer of his parents and Draco Malfoy was a spoiled and a total bigoted bastard, much like Dudley Dursley. Who;d want to spend seven years with that?
3/29/2019 c6 claymaster27
great so far keep it up i was a little upset to find out two of the possible chapters were duds
great so far keep it up i was a little upset to find out two of the possible chapters were duds
3/29/2019 c6 RamDLC28
he want to go unnoticed but he has all his family crest on display it doesn't make sense
he want to go unnoticed but he has all his family crest on display it doesn't make sense
1/3/2019 c1 Goose
Weaboo garbage.
Weaboo garbage.