10/28/2018 c1 Shadows
Hi there

i find this story very interesting, especially the part about all the hopeful alliances. I can see that coming in handy when the curse takes effect.

Please continue with the story, however in the following chapters perhaps try have longer and more detailed sentences. i suspect though that this was just for the first chapter.

All the best for your story, it shows great potential

Shadows in Shadows

10/24/2018 c1 88LizzyLovesPink
It's an interesting start. I think you should continue it.