for The Wolf of the Forest5/9/2021 c2 Guest
I liked it but I guess you dropped it
I liked it but I guess you dropped it
5/26/2019 c1 NazgulBelserion
Well never mind was excited I honestly hate when mc tells kage about hes situation it's stupid imo like hate how person is like oh it's a good idea no it's not it really isn't
Well never mind was excited I honestly hate when mc tells kage about hes situation it's stupid imo like hate how person is like oh it's a good idea no it's not it really isn't
12/25/2018 c2 RIOSHO
If 5k then try to keep a steady schedule on updates. We know quite a few authors that put out ridiculous sized chapters once a month. It works for them but do what works for you. We will be here until you either finish or give up on it. Even if we do not speak.
If 5k then try to keep a steady schedule on updates. We know quite a few authors that put out ridiculous sized chapters once a month. It works for them but do what works for you. We will be here until you either finish or give up on it. Even if we do not speak.
12/25/2018 c2 Yifto
if I forget wich story yours is I'm not so likely to read since I need to reread to catch up and get back into it. weapon kiba sounds cool.
the sword sheathing bit was a bit weird. the pommel is at the bottom of the handle, so if that is poking over his left shoulder at an angle and he is right handed he has to reach across his body in a really weird angle. maybe a mistake? I like him getting to know Naruto.
maybe, if possible, have like a case files extra at the end of the chapter. kinda like journal entries or mission reports like ibiki post interrogation report part one subject is yada yada. get it? or his mom's journal or the Hokage's or even narutos just to get a bit more filler and insight. might also help with writing.
if I forget wich story yours is I'm not so likely to read since I need to reread to catch up and get back into it. weapon kiba sounds cool.
the sword sheathing bit was a bit weird. the pommel is at the bottom of the handle, so if that is poking over his left shoulder at an angle and he is right handed he has to reach across his body in a really weird angle. maybe a mistake? I like him getting to know Naruto.
maybe, if possible, have like a case files extra at the end of the chapter. kinda like journal entries or mission reports like ibiki post interrogation report part one subject is yada yada. get it? or his mom's journal or the Hokage's or even narutos just to get a bit more filler and insight. might also help with writing.
12/25/2018 c2 Yifto
I liked the chapter I don't mind shorter chapters as long as I get regular uploads. like
I liked the chapter I don't mind shorter chapters as long as I get regular uploads. like
12/25/2018 c2 Nicholas Copsy
Really like how its going so far, if Kiba's going a weapons route then maybe he should talk/learn from Tenten about what she knows or even her father. Keep up the good work
Really like how its going so far, if Kiba's going a weapons route then maybe he should talk/learn from Tenten about what she knows or even her father. Keep up the good work
12/24/2018 c2 
1sketchtheunicorn
nice chapter, the length is fine, so keep up the good work and can't wait for more!
1sketchtheunicornnice chapter, the length is fine, so keep up the good work and can't wait for more!
12/24/2018 c2 The-Funeral-Pyre
Work for whatever length is comfortable and works for you.
Anyways, thanks for the newest chapter! It's very interesting to see where you'll take this. One of the only things I'm kind of worried about is that he hasn't explicitly told them about Kabuto yet- though that may have been included in what all he was talking about.
I'm really looking forward to more!
Work for whatever length is comfortable and works for you.
Anyways, thanks for the newest chapter! It's very interesting to see where you'll take this. One of the only things I'm kind of worried about is that he hasn't explicitly told them about Kabuto yet- though that may have been included in what all he was talking about.
I'm really looking forward to more!
12/24/2018 c2 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
nice seeing him teaching naruto some stuff
will be fun to see if the old man deals with danzo
as for chapter length is good its not to long or to short 5-6k is nice
looking forward to the talk with kiba older sister and the teasing that she is now younger and should listen to her wise older brother
nice chapter thx for writing it
nice seeing him teaching naruto some stuff
will be fun to see if the old man deals with danzo
as for chapter length is good its not to long or to short 5-6k is nice
looking forward to the talk with kiba older sister and the teasing that she is now younger and should listen to her wise older brother