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12/30/2021 c5 a reader
you may want to give more detail about what is going on for those of us who do not write stories.

can you please give info about how to read stories on wattpad without needing to have an account.
like you can do here on and most other fan fiction websites.
8/29/2021 c4 a reader
can you please continue the story on this website? not everyone wants to sign in to a website just to read stories. you are forced to have an account just to read stories on wattpad and all I want is read stories not write them. I know this website is not the best, but I have lost out on stories because the were moved from this website to another. but the choice is yours not mine just wanted you to know the problems that are out there if you only continue this story on wattpad.

thank you for your time.
6/14/2020 c1 Guest
I appreciate how mature you’re making naruto out to be, but he’s fucking 2. That’s not how a two year old acts, no matter the circumstances.
4/4/2020 c1 Guest
No description no read
12/27/2018 c2 SKitsuneDragon
Hi i just want to tell you that chapters 2, 3 and 4 are messed-up.
10/25/2018 c1 Storm95
Hey, since you asked about Review here it is.
The story isn't bad and i like it, but its hard to read through the textblock.
Try to structure the text better and make longer chapters. As a reader its not very stimulating to read max. 1000 Words per chapter because just when your in the story you are out of material to read.
To sum it all up, plan before you write a chapter where the story should/could go and just write it as far as you like, then edit it so that it can be read in a flowing pattern. And last but not least let someone proofread it, so any mistakes you make can be corrected and not be used as material to flame by internet trolls.
10/25/2018 c1 1Novrier
This so far does not feel like a story. It feels like a report.
Someone did this and that, went there, bought stuff and so on.
Story requires narrative, events, descritions, character interactions, emotions. This so far is about as balnd, boring and emotionless as it can get.
Structure is abysmal, everything is reduced to huge blocks of text, that are a pain to even look at.
There is no dialogue.
The pacing ... provided that term being even applicable here is rushed. There are no meaningful details, no character development, aside from Naruto buying stuff.
This is ... well, i am not entirely sure this can even be called a story. Maybe a short draft, notes or someting. But not an actual first chapter from a story.

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