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10/29/2018 c1 1StarryNightPrincess
I liked your nice use of dialogue. You also did a good job describing what is going on, I could almost see what was happening. I think it's really cool to be seeing the battle from the other side. It is so easy to write from the perspective that we already see- the people of Earth because it is everywhere. The beginning really caught my attention, now I can't wait to see how things play out. Overall, I really liked this and I look forward to reading more.

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