for Choking12/22/2018 c1 WTFYOUCLIFFHANG
MOOOOOREEE
MOOOOOREEE
12/16/2018 c2 Guest
I feel that you are very talented at being descriptive and bringing sensations/inner thoughts to life, despite their being no dialogue. Your writing reminds me of John Knowles, keep up the good work.
I feel that you are very talented at being descriptive and bringing sensations/inner thoughts to life, despite their being no dialogue. Your writing reminds me of John Knowles, keep up the good work.
12/12/2018 c2 unifrog1331
I love that his first thought is to take care of his family and make sure they aren't overly worried (it is probably bad for his own mental health to bottle things up like that but it is nice he is cares about them enough to worry about their wellbeing).
I love that his first thought is to take care of his family and make sure they aren't overly worried (it is probably bad for his own mental health to bottle things up like that but it is nice he is cares about them enough to worry about their wellbeing).
12/12/2018 c2 Jutluk
Is it sasuke or not who is reborn. If it is oc then is he from narutoverse, real world or any other world and how did he know the future.
Is it sasuke or not who is reborn. If it is oc then is he from narutoverse, real world or any other world and how did he know the future.
12/12/2018 c1 Jutluk
Well written chapter and the story line is interesting.
Well written chapter and the story line is interesting.
12/11/2018 c1 Theunfunny9
I love these little stories that emphasize the psyche of characters. Love the quality, hoping for more.
I love these little stories that emphasize the psyche of characters. Love the quality, hoping for more.
10/28/2018 c1 
231Mononoke-hime x sukai kurora
This is excellent. I cannot wait for more of this breathtaking story.
231Mononoke-hime x sukai kuroraThis is excellent. I cannot wait for more of this breathtaking story.