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10/15 c1 1Srta.NR
Gostei como apresentaste...bom trabalho.
10/31/2020 c1 Guest
Cute
5/4/2004 c1 Cyrus- Lord of Darkness
Interesting Consept...
10/12/2003 c1 Suzy Q
Aw, this poem was too cute! My favorite line by far was " i took a deep breath before i could snap". I can just picture that, it was so Marguerite. You should write some more poems, their really cool!
8/2/2003 c1 imnevercomingbackdeleteaccount
I love! Very cute, it had such flow... I can't think of anything bad to say.
4/20/2003 c1 19Beckers
Oh, this was fun! Thanks so much!
4/20/2003 c1 7Aurinko
A very clever and fun little piece. The rhyming's impressive. Clever idea!
4/19/2003 c1 Lara Harting
Brilliant! I loved it. Took a classic, and made it better. Very creative.
4/19/2003 c1 10TLWROX
I love the original, and I LOVE your LW version of it! This is my favorite line: "When, what to my wondering eyes should appear, But the glimpse of a face and the side of an ear. The rifle that hung on the mantle was gone. I knew in an instant the man was Lord John."

There's just something about it- it flows really nicely. Great job. :) :) :)
4/18/2003 c1 Lisa
AW! That was sweet!

Very nice, MissMeganJane!

Lisa
4/18/2003 c1 Eva
How sweet! Loved the part of Margurerite tending to his wound. How appropriate. And, it rhymed! Good how you slipped in that part of 'filled full of love' at the end. Well done!
4/18/2003 c1 Alanna
:Clap, Clap, Clap: Absolutely brilliant! I LOVED it! I could hear the humming in my head while reading this...it fit SO perfect! Excellent job! Any more spoofs locked away?

Alanna

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