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8/5/2022 c4 flowy223
Esta muy bueno. Es una lastima que no halla mas capĂ­tulos :(
6/8/2022 c1 beniza58
Plz update
9/14/2021 c4 Uday Sra
5/7/2021 c3 Mikaeru
So gabriel is the one that kill naruto's father ... How old is naruto anyway.
5/7/2021 c1 Mikaeru
Fem!Issei... She quite interesting
5/7/2021 c2 Mikaeru
I like the way twist the plotline
4/18/2021 c1 corjca1
i would kill that old pervert make him suffer
2/15/2021 c4 PrintedSnail11
1/26/2021 c2 k
this is shit
1/26/2021 c1 K
What the is he a janitor.
10/27/2020 c4 NaruCrazy
While I have no issues with femIssei, the pace of the fic is so slow that it was bound be abandoned and it was.

Explaining the training part was pointless. What purpose does explaining how a spell works serve other than waste everyones time and provide an avenue to show Naru/Tsubaki spent time. Just say "they trained, grew stronger and closer". 6 words.
10/26/2020 c2 NaruCrazy
Whats will all the interruptions? If we go day-by-day then one piece will be like a time skip compared to this fic...The story speed is so slow. Every person Naruto comes across they want to interrupt his life.
9/4/2020 c1 Snake551g
hope this story comes back love it
8/14/2020 c1 Guest
I'm not going to thank the author for making Issei a female! this completely deconstructs and distorts his personality and his dream of becoming Harem King!

you might as well make Issei an oc because it is no longer Issei.

Dxd not being in girl's shortage, many of whom are underutilized, female Issei is uninteresting.
especially since I see that he is the only one in this case?

adding a female character like Issei's sister would have been better.
probably one of the worst ideas an author could have ever had!
7/17/2020 c1 NapoleonIII
female Issei? ... just a lazy way to stay close to the cannon! never read anything so bad
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