for Naruto: Fate Breaker11/5/2019 c2 
1Zackery Silverstone
you know, You're Gonna Know My Name would be a perfect song for this Naruto...
1Zackery Silverstoneyou know, You're Gonna Know My Name would be a perfect song for this Naruto...
11/5/2019 c2 Zackery Silverstone
just finished chapter one, and I have a suspicious feeling that Asia is MORE than what was let on...
And if it's true, then the Angel that sired Naruto might have been blonde, which didn't really confirm anything, since most Angel in the series has that (sort of) and chances for the character to be a DXD cannon character is low...
hmm, I guess more reading is in commence.
"I don't need sleep, I need answer!"
just finished chapter one, and I have a suspicious feeling that Asia is MORE than what was let on...
And if it's true, then the Angel that sired Naruto might have been blonde, which didn't really confirm anything, since most Angel in the series has that (sort of) and chances for the character to be a DXD cannon character is low...
hmm, I guess more reading is in commence.
"I don't need sleep, I need answer!"
11/5/2019 c1 Zackery Silverstone
RIP you bulky ass phone.
I will remember you.
For you have served well.
And die for it.
Rest in Peace.
RIP you bulky ass phone.
I will remember you.
For you have served well.
And die for it.
Rest in Peace.
10/30/2019 c1 1Thatoneguy1109
Never thought i could like a female issei so much. Hope you find time to update this. Keep up the awesome work.
1Thatoneguy1109Never thought i could like a female issei so much. Hope you find time to update this. Keep up the awesome work.
10/28/2019 c4 User Closed
I already feel like a lot of Naruto stories, this story is going to be similar, Naruto replacing Issei as Mc, who kicks Riser's ass and like a white knight is helping Rias who was unable to save herself from her marriage because of her laziness and arrogance.
I already feel like a lot of Naruto stories, this story is going to be similar, Naruto replacing Issei as Mc, who kicks Riser's ass and like a white knight is helping Rias who was unable to save herself from her marriage because of her laziness and arrogance.
10/18/2019 c4 Skull Flame
- Does this Tsunade have the appearance of canon Tsunade, or do they just share the same name?
- So Raynare is seeking revenge on Heaven. This is going through the canon route, or maybe even worse. And seeing she has one of those cylinders those stray devils were assigned to protect, I think it could be worse.
- Gabriel offered herself to Naruto as a wife? And even willing to give him children, if I read that right. That's pretty extreme.
- Tenten seems like an automaton. Or created on the same project that created Lint Sellzen.
- Gai was member of the church? With how enthusiastic he is, I'd say is fitting.
- The squabbles between sisters are still amusing.
- Does this Tsunade have the appearance of canon Tsunade, or do they just share the same name?
- So Raynare is seeking revenge on Heaven. This is going through the canon route, or maybe even worse. And seeing she has one of those cylinders those stray devils were assigned to protect, I think it could be worse.
- Gabriel offered herself to Naruto as a wife? And even willing to give him children, if I read that right. That's pretty extreme.
- Tenten seems like an automaton. Or created on the same project that created Lint Sellzen.
- Gai was member of the church? With how enthusiastic he is, I'd say is fitting.
- The squabbles between sisters are still amusing.
10/16/2019 c4 Shadow
Loved it, hoping the next update doesnt take nearly as long. Keep up the amazing work and please update soon!
Loved it, hoping the next update doesnt take nearly as long. Keep up the amazing work and please update soon!
10/15/2019 c4 1Rycott
I do like we are getting some more backstory on why Raynare is doing the things she does. She was kind of a throw away villain at the start of DxD unlike some of the later ones.
Good stuff and I look forward to more.
1RycottI do like we are getting some more backstory on why Raynare is doing the things she does. She was kind of a throw away villain at the start of DxD unlike some of the later ones.
Good stuff and I look forward to more.
10/15/2019 c4 Elchabon
Great chapter.
Very good description of the training and the deepening of Naruto's relationship with Tsubaki, and the explanation she gave him of the magic / glyphs / runes. The best part was the fantasy / visualization of him with her being pregnant.
Issei and Akeno's fight was also entertaining.
Yeah, in that situation I would also feel jealous and curse Naruto. I understand your pain Jiraiya.
I didn't see it coming from Sarada. I wonder who will be his older sister ?. I have a slight theory or idea of who it can be.
With Naruto's little sisters, we're never bored. Hahaha. He only has a little more than 6 months of mental health.
Is Issei's sacred gear a perverted dragon? OoO
Oh, Raynare bad girl.
I like how you take the time to explain the political and social situation of either the demons and the other factions.
This also gives us an idea of how Rias, Sona, her servants are, are really and how they can be affected by the constant intrigues and power games.
Thank you very much for the update, the time and thought you invest in the development of the plot is appreciated.
Regards.
Great chapter.
Very good description of the training and the deepening of Naruto's relationship with Tsubaki, and the explanation she gave him of the magic / glyphs / runes. The best part was the fantasy / visualization of him with her being pregnant.
Issei and Akeno's fight was also entertaining.
Yeah, in that situation I would also feel jealous and curse Naruto. I understand your pain Jiraiya.
I didn't see it coming from Sarada. I wonder who will be his older sister ?. I have a slight theory or idea of who it can be.
With Naruto's little sisters, we're never bored. Hahaha. He only has a little more than 6 months of mental health.
Is Issei's sacred gear a perverted dragon? OoO
Oh, Raynare bad girl.
I like how you take the time to explain the political and social situation of either the demons and the other factions.
This also gives us an idea of how Rias, Sona, her servants are, are really and how they can be affected by the constant intrigues and power games.
Thank you very much for the update, the time and thought you invest in the development of the plot is appreciated.
Regards.
10/15/2019 c4 2TheRazgrizDragon
I hope Naruto does what he does best and takes sticks from people's backside and helps Raynare!
2TheRazgrizDragonI hope Naruto does what he does best and takes sticks from people's backside and helps Raynare!