for Unravel8/7/2019 c4 Kaylee
Wow. Just wow. This story is incredible! I can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo
Wow. Just wow. This story is incredible! I can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo
8/1/2019 c4 
11Verinorina
omfg this is so good.
I love the name you gave peter! also, how would ned handle the news? I feel like he's smart enough to put together pieces, mj as well.
peter stops coming to school and spiderman stops showing before the recluse appears.
HMM
I WONDER WHO THE RECLUSE IS.
w
11Verinorinaomfg this is so good.
I love the name you gave peter! also, how would ned handle the news? I feel like he's smart enough to put together pieces, mj as well.
peter stops coming to school and spiderman stops showing before the recluse appears.
HMM
I WONDER WHO THE RECLUSE IS.
w
7/21/2019 c4 Jeffy
This is amazing
This is amazing
7/16/2019 c4 DreamCatcher06
Loved the update! I know I keep bugging you about it but please let Peter turn into Venom in this story. But you don’t have to btw it’s just a suggestion. Poor Tony, I hope they can get Peter back to normal! And please update again soon!
Loved the update! I know I keep bugging you about it but please let Peter turn into Venom in this story. But you don’t have to btw it’s just a suggestion. Poor Tony, I hope they can get Peter back to normal! And please update again soon!
7/8/2019 c3 DreamCatcher06
Woooooaaaaaahhhhhhh. A like super duper scary Peter warning would be nice... but anyway I think that you should start having Peter turn into Venom, like black with white eyes and scary teeth, whenever he gets, ah, crazy. Anywho, great story! I love it! Please please please please please update again soon! Please! I’m pretty sure this is a nice comment so we should get a fast update... right?
Woooooaaaaaahhhhhhh. A like super duper scary Peter warning would be nice... but anyway I think that you should start having Peter turn into Venom, like black with white eyes and scary teeth, whenever he gets, ah, crazy. Anywho, great story! I love it! Please please please please please update again soon! Please! I’m pretty sure this is a nice comment so we should get a fast update... right?
6/9/2019 c1 3Sapphire-of-SHIELD
The best the best the bestttttt poor Peter though... I can't wait to see where you go with this! (I already posted a review on Ch 2 so it's not letting me post it there so I'm putting it here)
3Sapphire-of-SHIELDThe best the best the bestttttt poor Peter though... I can't wait to see where you go with this! (I already posted a review on Ch 2 so it's not letting me post it there so I'm putting it here)
6/8/2019 c2 9Princess Viris Potter
Me encanta esta idea.
Soy yo o hay referencias a Tokyo Ghoul (?)
Espero ansiosa tu siguiente actualización.
9Princess Viris PotterMe encanta esta idea.
Soy yo o hay referencias a Tokyo Ghoul (?)
Espero ansiosa tu siguiente actualización.
5/11/2019 c1 6Rainbow UniPenguins YT
You said you might never fix the cliffhanger, but will you allow me to make a sequel for this story? I really like it, and want to see an ending. It might take awhile, but I can get started on it if you let me make it.
6Rainbow UniPenguins YTYou said you might never fix the cliffhanger, but will you allow me to make a sequel for this story? I really like it, and want to see an ending. It might take awhile, but I can get started on it if you let me make it.
1/23/2019 c1 twilightrose711
Omg you cant leave it like that. The suspense is already killing me. Please, i'm begging you, continue this story
Omg you cant leave it like that. The suspense is already killing me. Please, i'm begging you, continue this story