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8/11/2019 c28 7Professor R.J Lupin1
RIP Chance’s sanity.
Oh boy. A new district partner for Zaira. Is it maybe another submission to the 7 male spot that didn’t make it in? A random person you made? Someone from Zaira’s past? Yeah that last one isn’t happening but whatever.
Things are definitely heating up. Subplots galore and I am here for it!
Also probably RIP Yael.
8/11/2019 c1 Anna
OmG i JuSt ReAlIzEd HoW oVeRpOwErEd ArAbElLa Is My GoOdNeSs
8/11/2019 c27 Professor R.J Lupin1
Oh wow. RIP Ruce I guess. But we all knew Yael would go crazy eventually and at least she took it out on someone who everyone hated.
Zaira’s score is pretty much what I expected. Not to say I’m not slightly disappointed, but I will survive. Zaira’s still going to die, but what can you do?
Sorry I haven’t been reviewing very much the last few chapters. I have been reading, I’ve just been really busy and haven’t had much free time.
I don’t know if I should be looking forward to the bloodbath or not. I suppose I am though.
8/11/2019 c25 Anna
Imma just answer the questions cuz I forgot to

1. Not chemistry but I like the alliance of Axel, Linen Savanna and Hadley.
2. Probably the careers.
3. UH ARABELLAS. UNless they can fix the mental state of Yael, or kill Yael... Yael be crazy bruh
4. Honestly idk. I think that Rachel and Arabella and Tristana need to ditch Yael tho
5. Yael... they could fix her mental state and then everything would be fine
8/11/2019 c27 AnnaDaCorgi
YAY *scream*


jk lol. IM HAPPY HES DEAD THANK YOU THANK YOU. he was a menace XD

Glorian: So, brute and brawn. This guy will definitely be tough to beat. Actually, the way he uses the paints is so unique a! It’s not common to see a career not just evil and mean. I applaud the creator! His backstory is so sad. I bet he’ll get a ten, maybe an Eleven?

Axel: Dart throwing. That’s not a very common skill. I think he’ll get around a six. I think maybe if he demonstrated more he would get a higher score.

Hadley: I think that their alliance is under estimated, and I bet they all could manage to get a FIVE or over. I would say Hadley would get a 7.

Arabella: Yay! Arabella! Hmm. She only a did a few things. I think she did good though, especially for her age! She’ll probably get a four.

Rachel: Rachel seems so determined. I feel like she’ll take a risk, and that will be her downfall, sadly. She has a very good reason to win though, and I kinda like that. Arabella will really need to be careful. I feel like Ara May poison the food. Rachel will probably get a 2. Also, I also feel like Ara May help Rachel win if she can’t.

D1: These two got good scores! Ten will definitely put them on the higher end of the spectrum. They will be sponsor favorites, I presume.
D2: Glitter got a decent score for the careers. And glorian! Wow an Eleven! He definitely has one of the best chances out of everyone.
D3: There’s no surprise there. I think those are pretty decent score though, in terms of district three.
D4: Wow! A nine for a girl missing an arm. That’s impressive, and she’ll do well. Lucretius, however.. I have a feeling he’s gonna be killed off.
D5: Macey and Tracey’s score was predictable. I’m a little disturbed at how Dennis got a 7..
D6: WOW. I am actually so surprised at Axel’s score. How? I feel like they’re doing that so people target him. Tristana also got a decent score!
D7: Zaira has a decent score, and yes Sprucen exaggerates a lot. Lol. Still a good score.. uh oh.
D8: Six is good for a thirteen year old. A Three is okay.
D9: Six is decent, Three is not so good.
D10: Yay! My Arabella got a four :D that’s decent for a twelve year old! I’m really rooting for her, but it’s so unlikely for a twelve year old to win. I feel like she could pull it off, but it’s a long shot, XD. Buck had a decent score!
D11: aOoooo Kade is a career now. Yael has a decent score as well.
D12: Rachel probably could have gotten a Nine, but she hid her true talent. Quinten did decent as well.

SPRUCEN IS DEAD OMG. AHAHAHAHA IM HAPPY AND I LOVE THAT ENDING. it’s gonna be so odd... are they gonna quickly go get a new tribute?

If you choose to go that route pm monkey so she can tell me. If not then hey one less tribute as competition for Ara!

Soo close to the bloodbath! Just the interviews! You got this!
8/11/2019 c27 2Tyquavis
Glorian-His sword fighting skills are definitely solid, but what pushed him over the edge was his magic. I’ve never seen that before. That flashback though. That was intense, I don’t know how he’ll cope if it happens in the arena
Axel-Damn. Talk about being skilled. He definitely caught the Gamemakers off guard. If he gets his hands on some darts in the arena, it’s game over.
Hadley-He’s a great wrestler and an even better person. Out of all the tributes, he’s the easiest to root for.
Arabella-Okay, the Gamemakers didn’t have to be so rude. If their attitude towards her is anything to go by, she’s gonna have a hard time.
Rachel-I love her strategy, but I don’t like who she’s targeting. It isn’t the best idea to try and backstab Tristana or Yael. She’s gonna end up dead if she goes after either one of them.
Noelani-Okay, this is where things get juicy. As far as training scores go, I’m surprised that Cecelia didn’t get the highest score. I don’t think Glorian should be leading the Careers. He’s way to passive. Districts 3 and 5’s scores were pretty much what I expected. Now Axel on the other hand, he got a freakin’ 9! I’m so proud of my guy. He deserves it. He is not one to be messed with, so put some respect on his name. Most of the other tributes scores were as expected, but Savanna’s score tells me that they didn’t have that trident. However, I think it’s a blessing in disguise.
Sprucen-Yes dude, the youngest tribute scored higher than you. Get over it. I’m so done with your rude ass.
Yael-I CALLED IT. I saw it coming from a mile away. She snapped, and now Sprucen’s dead because of her. I’m just glad that she got rid of the most annoying tribute.
8/11/2019 c27 7Team Shadow
Glorian-Wow, what a chapter. I felt so bad reading his flashback, he literally watched all his friends get killed. Why would he want to enter the Games to watch more friends get killed? He's so interesting but he's been on the down low this whole time, I'd love to know more about him.
Axel-A solid performance from him I think, he's definitely the tribute that's exceeded my expectations the most.
Hadley-He's so sweet, every time he's featured I can't get over how sweet he is. His alliance is definitely my favorite, I think they all have good skills and good potential to make it far together.
Arabella-I feel bad for her, the Gamemakers weren't the warmest towards her. I think she could do well, but her alliance puts her in danger.
Rachel-I'm starting to like her less and less, her personality just drives me bonkers. She's going to get screwed over in the Games, I can feel it.
Noelani-I'm so proud of my girl for getting a ten! I'm okay with Glorian being the new leader, better than Trajan. Though I do kind of have a sense that he's not assertive enough? I feel like (no bias) Cecelia was a better leader for the Careers. But again, anyone's better than Trajan. Also, the fact that Axel is on everyone's radar might end up being a bad thing for him.
Sprucen-What an absolute d-hole. I can't stand him.
Yael-...and it looks like I don't have to stand him any longer. Wow. I am completely shocked. She's completely lost it. Killing tributes before the games is completely frowned upon...will they figure out it's Yael? Punish her? This looks bad for everyone.
Fantastic chapter! Keep updating!

24th-Sprucen Willes, killed by Yael Harident: Honestly, I ain't even mad about this. He was annoying, a jerk, cocky, you get what I'm saying. While his death came as a shock, I'm glad one annoying character is gone. I do wonder what rippling effect this is going to have.

Mine: Cecelia Hart (D1F), Dennis Fielder (D5M)
Rooting For: Tristana Rockett (D6F)
Love: Lennox Porter (D3F), Zaira Quentin (D7F), Linen Baird (D8F), Hadley Moreau (D9M)
Like: Glorian Stafford (D2M), Macey & Tracey Aderyn (D5F), Axel Woodleigh (D6M), Felix Camacho (D8M), Buck Hayford (D10M), Arabella Cantros (D10F), Quentin Fredericus (D12M), Savanna Davison (D9F)
Neutral: Glitter Monique (D2F), Nikola Allegra (D3M), Noelani King (D4F), Lucretius Marlo (D4M),
Dislike: Rachel Ivy (D12F), Yael Harident (D11F)
Hate: Kade Anderson (D11M), Trajan Seth (D1M)
8/11/2019 c25 3TacoPhoenix88
1. I really like the Axel, Linen, Savanna and Hadley alliance, they just seem so genuine and I love Axel and Linen! Hadley is like the older-brother that looks after all of them, they’re a cute family unit.
2. Probably the Careers, just based on talent.
3. After this chapter, Tristana, Arabella and Rachel are definitely going to die, unless they somehow have a good influence on Yael that fixes her mental state, otherwise, doomed to die.
4. I’d like to see Nikola with the Axel, Linen, Hadley and Savanna alliance, I dunno why I just think he’d slide in easily.
5. Yael definitely, she’s fighting her dangerous urges and there’s hope if the girls in her alliance have a good influence on her, if they become close enough to persuade the ‘voices.’
Brilliant chapter! : )
8/10/2019 c26 2Tyquavis
Buck-He has a great chance at making it to the end if he can avoid the Careers. However, from the way he described them staring him down, it looks like he’s on their hit list.

Savanna-Jeez another POV hyping Axel up. Stop it, you’re making me blush. Lol for real though, I’m happy she found a weapon she can use. I hope she can get her hands on a trident in the arena.

Macey-Damn, Tracey went off on Dennis. I love it! She really struck a nerve when she mentioned his mother. Who knows, maybe Dennis’ mother is part of the reason why he’s so messed up.

Lucretius-I’m glad that Noelani finally started treating him relatively nicely. Although their argument really does concern me. There’s even more tension in this Career pack than last year’s

Cecelia-I really hope she kicks Trajan out of the Career alliance. Who in their right mind would bring Sprucen into their alliance? From what I can see, the other Careers more or less feel the same way about Trajan.

Quentin-Felix and Zaira seem like a perfect match for him. He fits in well with them. But the fact that he refuses to hurt anything is not ideal for an alliance that needs protection.

1. I REALLY want to see the Cecelia/Trajan rivalry continue with it causing Trajan to be kicked out of the Career alliance. Plus conflict within the Career pack is always entertaining.

2. Honestly no. At the most, I expected them to tolerate each other, so seeing them taking steps to get along is a pleasant surprise to say the least.

3. This is a little biased, but I’ve gotta say Nikola. He’s just not built for this, and watching him struggle is heartbreaking.

4. My training score predictions are as follows:
5-Savanna, Linen, Zaira, Felix
6-Rachel, Quentin, Nikola, Lennox, Yael
7-Hadley, Sprucen, Dennis, Tristana
8-Axel, Kade, Glitter
9-Trajan, Lucretius, Noelani, Glorian, Buck

5. Yes, Kade will make it in, and yes I want to see him join so he can add more conflict. If this happens, the Careers will crash and burn.
8/10/2019 c26 7Team Shadow
Buck-I think if Buck makes it past the bloodbath he'll have a really good shot of making it far, but he is on the Careers radar in the worst way possible. I can definitely see it going either way with him.
Savanna-I'm glad she found her thing, I really like her and I want to see her do well. Her alliance seems really strong right now, I think I have high hopes for them.
Macey-Oooof don't piss Dennis off, he doesn't make threats lightly. I worry they're going to get killed exactly how Dennis said he's going to kill them...dang Lilah I really did create an insane character didn't I XD
Lucretius-It's nice to see these two getting along a little more, I understand Noelani's frustration with him, you spend so many years building trust with one person and then someone comes along and ruins it. But there definitely needs to be trust between the careers, and based on their observations of Cecelia and Trajan, the alliance is going to need all the help it can get.
Cecelia-Eeee I love seeing my girl in this chapter, it was a pleasant surprise! It's safe to say Trajan is my new least favorite my god he just really sucks doesn't he? While I do love her relationship with Noelani, I reeeallly hope it doesn't get her killed, hurt, or distracted.
Quentin-Okay I absolutely love the fact he formed an alliance, I think he has potential with this group.
1. Most excited? I mean, I look forward to the hopeful end of Trajan when Cecelia kicks his ass XD but I look forward to Luc and Noelani friendship growing
2. No, not really, especially since Noelani formed a friendship with Cecelia she wouldn't see a reason to bond with Luc. But I like it. It's a nice change.
3. Savanna or Hadley probably. I'll say Savanna.
5. I don't want him to, but I think he will. I really really really hope he doesn't get the highest score otherwise he might be the leader of the Careers? Would they let that? Probs not.
4. Score predictions:
3- Macey & Tracey
4- Nikola
5- Arabella, Yael, Linen, Zaira
6- Tristana, Rachel, Savanna, Felix, Quentin
7- Dennis, Ruce, Buck, Axel, Hadley, Lennox
8- Kade, Glitter, Glorian
9- Noelani, Luc, Trajan, Cecelia

Fantastic chapter! Update soon!

Mine: Cecelia Hart (D1F), Dennis Fielder (D5M)
Rooting For: Tristana Rockett (D6F)
Love: Lennox Porter (D3F), Zaira Quentin (D7F), Linen Baird (D8F), Hadley Moreau (D9M)
Like: Glorian Stafford (D2M), Macey & Tracey Aderyn (D5F), Axel Woodleigh (D6M), Felix Camacho (D8M), Buck Hayford (D10M), Arabella Cantros (D10F), Quentin Fredericus (D12M), Savanna Davison (D9F)
Neutral: Glitter Monique (D2F), Nikola Allegra (D3M), Noelani King (D4F), Lucretius Marlo (D4M), Rachel Ivy (D12F), Yael Harident (D11F)
Hate: Sprucen Wills (D7M), Kade Anderson (D11M), Trajan Seth (D1M)
8/10/2019 c26 Anna
I’m glad I haz you craving capitol desserts ;)


yess Private training sessions I’m excited!
8/10/2019 c26 2GaleWrites
1. Honestly I'm pretty excited for the possibility that Macy and Tracey will deal with the creep. I have a hunch they're not going to be as easy a mark as people think.

2. I kind of did, but I expected it to take until they were in the games and Noelani realized she wouldn't have wanted someone she was so close with in there with her.

3. This is way too hard a question, I love so many of these kids.

4. I think Noelani will get the highest because abled folks love to talk up disabled people who can do things they think those folks shouldn't be able to. Not sure who'll get the lowest.

5. I bet he will, and it'll be super interesting if he does
8/10/2019 c6 3MonkeyPower435
Glorian: Honestly, I don't really know how to feel about him. He's very interesting, and it was cool how he could do magic tricks, but I think I need to see more of him to get a good opinion. Neutral for now.

Glitter: Glitter's got a neat personality, and her past with District 1 was neat, but I'm not a huge fan of her right now. Maybe she'll grow on me as the story goes on, we'll see.
8/10/2019 c26 3lionkingfactsguy3

1. Which argument from this chapter are you most excited to see continue in the arena?
Not too sure honestly.

2. I was a bit surprised but since they both know Mercury, Luc's brother, and that they are willing to be allies, well it just kind of makes things look hopeful for the two of then.

3. Buck.

4. I don't know. It's hard for someone like me to tell.

5. Yes. He stands a slight better chance with the Careers for a while.
8/10/2019 c26 Anna
Hey Lilah. I am sooooo sorry I haven’t been reviewing. First I broke my nose, then I broke my kneecap... now I am sick and have diarrhea. (Honestly I’m a bit concerned i May have appendicitis...)

Thanks so much for your kind words. I have been reading and I can definitely see your improvement throughout your writing! I’m so excited to see where your story goes, and hope Ruce dies and Arabella makes it through the bloodbath.. probably not though!

I’m glad you’re still here and can’t wait to work more with your character :)

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