for Rapids: The 248th Hunger Games4/25/2019 c7 
2Tyquavis
1. I love the way you wrote Nikola. It’s exactly how I envisioned him. I like how you used Thomas as a source of slight tension in the Allegra family. I can’t wait to see how Nikola’s character develops throughout this story.
2. I absolutely adore Lennox. Her relationship with Ada is so cute. If Lennox can’t make it back, I hope Eddie take good care of her.
3. I prefer Nikola over Lennox(no bias whatsoever).
4. I think that Nikola will make it farther(once again, no bias)
5. The worst movie adaptation of a book would definitely be Diary of a Wimpy Kid: The Long Haul. It just doesn’t hold up against the first three movies.
Mine: Nikola Allegra, Axel Woodleigh
Rooting For:
Love: Lennox Porter
Like: Cecelia Hart, Glorian Stafford
Neutral:
Hate: Trajan Seth
2Tyquavis1. I love the way you wrote Nikola. It’s exactly how I envisioned him. I like how you used Thomas as a source of slight tension in the Allegra family. I can’t wait to see how Nikola’s character develops throughout this story.
2. I absolutely adore Lennox. Her relationship with Ada is so cute. If Lennox can’t make it back, I hope Eddie take good care of her.
3. I prefer Nikola over Lennox(no bias whatsoever).
4. I think that Nikola will make it farther(once again, no bias)
5. The worst movie adaptation of a book would definitely be Diary of a Wimpy Kid: The Long Haul. It just doesn’t hold up against the first three movies.
Mine: Nikola Allegra, Axel Woodleigh
Rooting For:
Love: Lennox Porter
Like: Cecelia Hart, Glorian Stafford
Neutral:
Hate: Trajan Seth
4/23/2019 c6 Guest
I love Glorian and Glitter both! Not sure which I prefer, but I think Glitter will do better because trauma babies rarely do as well in the Games as people would want them to.
My favorite book series is probably the Circle of Magic/Circle Opens series by Tamora Pierce
I love Glorian and Glitter both! Not sure which I prefer, but I think Glitter will do better because trauma babies rarely do as well in the Games as people would want them to.
My favorite book series is probably the Circle of Magic/Circle Opens series by Tamora Pierce
4/22/2019 c5 2Tyquavis
1. Glorian is a rare case in which I actually like a tribute from District 2. His flashback was definitely harrowing. The trauma of that situation will definitely play a role in the arena, as well as his indecisiveness.
2. Glitter seems like an entitled brat to me. She’s complains way too much. Her attitude will most likely cause problems in the Career alliance.
3. I prefer Glorian over Glitter for the reasons stated above.
4. I see Glorian going farther. Glitter’s attitude could put her out of the Career alliance, and she could have an early exit.
5. My favorite book series is Percy Jackson and the Olympians. I started reading them in 4th grade ad couldn’t put the books down at all. The movies though...
Mine: Nikola Allegra, Axel Woodleigh
Rooting for:
Love:
Like: Cecelia Hart, Glorian Stafford
Neutral:
Dislike: Glitter Monique
Hate: Trajan Seth
2Tyquavis1. Glorian is a rare case in which I actually like a tribute from District 2. His flashback was definitely harrowing. The trauma of that situation will definitely play a role in the arena, as well as his indecisiveness.
2. Glitter seems like an entitled brat to me. She’s complains way too much. Her attitude will most likely cause problems in the Career alliance.
3. I prefer Glorian over Glitter for the reasons stated above.
4. I see Glorian going farther. Glitter’s attitude could put her out of the Career alliance, and she could have an early exit.
5. My favorite book series is Percy Jackson and the Olympians. I started reading them in 4th grade ad couldn’t put the books down at all. The movies though...
Mine: Nikola Allegra, Axel Woodleigh
Rooting for:
Love:
Like: Cecelia Hart, Glorian Stafford
Neutral:
Dislike: Glitter Monique
Hate: Trajan Seth
4/22/2019 c5 7Professor R.J Lupin1
Glorian- hm, I’m interested in his past. How did his friends die? Why did any of them think robbing a Victors’ house was a good idea?
Glitter-I like this girl. The whole D1 thing is pretty funny, especially since she has a more D1 name than the actual D1 tributes.
I prefer Glitter.
I think Glorian will last longer.
I would say either The Hunger Games, The Unwanteds or the Guardians of Ga’Hoole series. I even wrote terrible ripoffs of Gahoole I’m fifth grade because I was so into them.
7Professor R.J Lupin1Glorian- hm, I’m interested in his past. How did his friends die? Why did any of them think robbing a Victors’ house was a good idea?
Glitter-I like this girl. The whole D1 thing is pretty funny, especially since she has a more D1 name than the actual D1 tributes.
I prefer Glitter.
I think Glorian will last longer.
I would say either The Hunger Games, The Unwanteds or the Guardians of Ga’Hoole series. I even wrote terrible ripoffs of Gahoole I’m fifth grade because I was so into them.
4/22/2019 c5 12Hawkmaid
Hi! I think you did an awesome job with this! You are extremely talented and I love your writing! Glimmer is ok. I don’t usually like careers, and she seems pretty normal for D2. Glorians backstory is very interesting. Really sad though. Are we going to see more of it later? I think that would be awesome! My favorite books series growing up would have to be the Mysterious Benedict Society (excluding the second book!). They are SOOO good! Anyhow, great job! ;)
12HawkmaidHi! I think you did an awesome job with this! You are extremely talented and I love your writing! Glimmer is ok. I don’t usually like careers, and she seems pretty normal for D2. Glorians backstory is very interesting. Really sad though. Are we going to see more of it later? I think that would be awesome! My favorite books series growing up would have to be the Mysterious Benedict Society (excluding the second book!). They are SOOO good! Anyhow, great job! ;)
4/22/2019 c5 7Team Shadow
I found Glorian to be a really interesting character. I liked his backstory, but I'd love to know more about him. What happened after things went wrong? How did he become the chosen volunteer? You leave me curious!
Glitter seems like a really interesting character. I wonder if she'll have any hatred for Cecelia or Trajan, since she hates district one. I mean, I don't blame her, her parents clearly suck.
I prefer Glorian, and I also think he'll do better for now. He seems like he'll make it really far.
The Enemy series by Charlie Higson. Is quite good.
Fantastic chapter! Update soon!
Character Opinions:
Mine: Cecelia Hart (D1F), Dennis Fielder (D5M)
Rooting For:
Love:
Like: Glorian Stafford (D2M)
Neutral: Trajan Seth (D1M), Glitter Monique (D2F)
Dislike:
Hate:
7Team ShadowI found Glorian to be a really interesting character. I liked his backstory, but I'd love to know more about him. What happened after things went wrong? How did he become the chosen volunteer? You leave me curious!
Glitter seems like a really interesting character. I wonder if she'll have any hatred for Cecelia or Trajan, since she hates district one. I mean, I don't blame her, her parents clearly suck.
I prefer Glorian, and I also think he'll do better for now. He seems like he'll make it really far.
The Enemy series by Charlie Higson. Is quite good.
Fantastic chapter! Update soon!
Character Opinions:
Mine: Cecelia Hart (D1F), Dennis Fielder (D5M)
Rooting For:
Love:
Like: Glorian Stafford (D2M)
Neutral: Trajan Seth (D1M), Glitter Monique (D2F)
Dislike:
Hate:
4/21/2019 c5 3TacoPhoenix88
1. Ooo...Glorian really interests me, he obviously has a dark past and I’m excited to find out more about that. I love the way you did his POV as a memory, it gave the chapter more creativity. I think Glorian can make it very far in the Games, although it’s hard to tell how far as his POV was a few years before I assume, and based on what he’s been through, his personality must’ve changed.
2. Glitter seems quite confident and probably a person who sticks to the rules a bit more than others. I think she’ll give the Hunger Games a bit of mercy, alongside Cecelia from District 1. Her parents sound really annoying, and extremely bland. She also seems like quite an honourable person, I don’t know why I just feel it.
3. Glorian, definitely, he’s just more interesting so far
4. Glorian, although I think Glitter will be quite a good fighter
5. Ahhhhh, you’re absolutely killing me! I have to list like 5 now, probably, Hunger Games (pretty obvious), Harry Potter (it’s just amazing), Shadowhunters (all of the series), Maze Runner and probably Divergent
Another amazing chapter! I love all the little questions at the end : )
3TacoPhoenix881. Ooo...Glorian really interests me, he obviously has a dark past and I’m excited to find out more about that. I love the way you did his POV as a memory, it gave the chapter more creativity. I think Glorian can make it very far in the Games, although it’s hard to tell how far as his POV was a few years before I assume, and based on what he’s been through, his personality must’ve changed.
2. Glitter seems quite confident and probably a person who sticks to the rules a bit more than others. I think she’ll give the Hunger Games a bit of mercy, alongside Cecelia from District 1. Her parents sound really annoying, and extremely bland. She also seems like quite an honourable person, I don’t know why I just feel it.
3. Glorian, definitely, he’s just more interesting so far
4. Glorian, although I think Glitter will be quite a good fighter
5. Ahhhhh, you’re absolutely killing me! I have to list like 5 now, probably, Hunger Games (pretty obvious), Harry Potter (it’s just amazing), Shadowhunters (all of the series), Maze Runner and probably Divergent
Another amazing chapter! I love all the little questions at the end : )
4/21/2019 c4 TacoPhoenix88
1. I’m honestly really scared of Trajan, killing someone to get into the Hunger Games, that’s just plain crazy! And he keeps referring to everyone as sheep and wolves, which definitely signifies lunacy. I think he’ll be a strong tribute though, that will go quite far and get many kills.
2. Cecilia seems like a nice girl who, for once, is volunteering for a good reason. I think she might have mercy a bit more than other Careers. She seems a bit soft and clumsy, but also seems as if she’s hiding talent beneath all that. I think she’ll make it kind of far, maybe top 10.
3. I prefer Cecelia, just because Trajan seems crazy, although he’s interesting and will create unique tribute dynamics. For example, the Career alliance.
4. Trajan unfortunately
5. I love the colour blue too, but if we’re being specific, probably a light turquoise.
This was a well-written chapter. I’m gonna go read the next one now : )
1. I’m honestly really scared of Trajan, killing someone to get into the Hunger Games, that’s just plain crazy! And he keeps referring to everyone as sheep and wolves, which definitely signifies lunacy. I think he’ll be a strong tribute though, that will go quite far and get many kills.
2. Cecilia seems like a nice girl who, for once, is volunteering for a good reason. I think she might have mercy a bit more than other Careers. She seems a bit soft and clumsy, but also seems as if she’s hiding talent beneath all that. I think she’ll make it kind of far, maybe top 10.
3. I prefer Cecelia, just because Trajan seems crazy, although he’s interesting and will create unique tribute dynamics. For example, the Career alliance.
4. Trajan unfortunately
5. I love the colour blue too, but if we’re being specific, probably a light turquoise.
This was a well-written chapter. I’m gonna go read the next one now : )
4/21/2019 c3 TacoPhoenix88
This was a great chapter, I quite like Estella’s determination and how she helps her tributes out. Grey seems like a bore to live with, not much personality there. I’m excited to read about the tributes. : )
This was a great chapter, I quite like Estella’s determination and how she helps her tributes out. Grey seems like a bore to live with, not much personality there. I’m excited to read about the tributes. : )
4/21/2019 c4 2GaleWrites
Heh, I remember being around edgy teenagers like Trajan. He'll be a fun 'villain'.
Cecelia is proooobably going to have to get used to heels quick, I'm surprised she didn't practice. But I like that she's got a better reason for volunteering than just glory. I already love her.
Pretty sure Trajan's going to wipe out early because he doesn't have the training to match his ego, but we'll see.
My favorite color is purple
2GaleWritesHeh, I remember being around edgy teenagers like Trajan. He'll be a fun 'villain'.
Cecelia is proooobably going to have to get used to heels quick, I'm surprised she didn't practice. But I like that she's got a better reason for volunteering than just glory. I already love her.
Pretty sure Trajan's going to wipe out early because he doesn't have the training to match his ego, but we'll see.
My favorite color is purple
4/20/2019 c4 7Team Shadow
What an interesting chapter, both of these characters are such a complete 180 from Flora and Garnet, I love it honestly. They're going to have tension in the arena, that's for sure.
I think Trajan is...interesting. I think he's going to be deadly, that's for sure. But I think he's going to get careless. He's going to underestimate somebody.
I love Cecelia (no bias no bias) Haha I'm kidding. But I love how you portrayed her! I'm so excited to watch her character develop over this story.
I prefer Cecelia (swear to god no bias) but I know Trajan is going to be an interesting character.
you already know who I think will make it farther XD I think Trajan will make it about as far as Markus did in Flames. I can only hope Cecelia makes it further haha
Mine is blue as well
Fantastic chapter! Update soon!
Character Opinions:
Mine: Cecelia Hart (D1F), Dennis Fielder (D5M)
Rooting For:
Love:
Like:
Neutral: Trajan Seth (D1M)
Dislike:
Hate:
7Team ShadowWhat an interesting chapter, both of these characters are such a complete 180 from Flora and Garnet, I love it honestly. They're going to have tension in the arena, that's for sure.
I think Trajan is...interesting. I think he's going to be deadly, that's for sure. But I think he's going to get careless. He's going to underestimate somebody.
I love Cecelia (no bias no bias) Haha I'm kidding. But I love how you portrayed her! I'm so excited to watch her character develop over this story.
I prefer Cecelia (swear to god no bias) but I know Trajan is going to be an interesting character.
you already know who I think will make it farther XD I think Trajan will make it about as far as Markus did in Flames. I can only hope Cecelia makes it further haha
Mine is blue as well
Fantastic chapter! Update soon!
Character Opinions:
Mine: Cecelia Hart (D1F), Dennis Fielder (D5M)
Rooting For:
Love:
Like:
Neutral: Trajan Seth (D1M)
Dislike:
Hate:
4/20/2019 c4 7Professor R.J Lupin1
Trajan-I’m sure I’m supposed to hate him, but he’s just so interesting. Still, he seems like he won’t last very long.
Cecelia-I don’t know about her. She’s kind of weird.
Cecelia will probably make it further. I prefer Trajan. He just stood out more. My favorite color is turquoise.
I’ll add a chart for the next reaping; I’m on mobile right now so I don’t want to try right now.
7Professor R.J Lupin1Trajan-I’m sure I’m supposed to hate him, but he’s just so interesting. Still, he seems like he won’t last very long.
Cecelia-I don’t know about her. She’s kind of weird.
Cecelia will probably make it further. I prefer Trajan. He just stood out more. My favorite color is turquoise.
I’ll add a chart for the next reaping; I’m on mobile right now so I don’t want to try right now.
4/20/2019 c4 2Tyquavis
1. Trajan’s gonna be a great antagonist, but I really don’t like his motives. That whole sheep and wolves talk was quite menacing. I don’t think I’m going to like him any time soon. I really hope he doesn’t win.
2. Cecelia is quite different from the typical Career. I don’t think I’ve ever seen a Career volunteer to escape rather than for fame and glory. I never thought I would like a Career, but I like Cecelia.
3. I definitely prefer Cecelia over Trajan. Her personality and motives make her a character that’s easy to like.
4. As much as it pains me to say it, I see Trajan going farther. The Capitol will love his aggression and ruthlessness. That is unless they find out what happened on Reaping day.
5. My favorite color is orange. Don’t know why, it just is.
Mine: Nikola Allegra(D3M, not yet introduced), Axel Woodleigh(D6M, not yet introduced)
Rooting for:
Love:
Like: Cecelia Hart(D1F)
Neutral:
Dislike:
Hate: Trajan Seth(D1M)
2Tyquavis1. Trajan’s gonna be a great antagonist, but I really don’t like his motives. That whole sheep and wolves talk was quite menacing. I don’t think I’m going to like him any time soon. I really hope he doesn’t win.
2. Cecelia is quite different from the typical Career. I don’t think I’ve ever seen a Career volunteer to escape rather than for fame and glory. I never thought I would like a Career, but I like Cecelia.
3. I definitely prefer Cecelia over Trajan. Her personality and motives make her a character that’s easy to like.
4. As much as it pains me to say it, I see Trajan going farther. The Capitol will love his aggression and ruthlessness. That is unless they find out what happened on Reaping day.
5. My favorite color is orange. Don’t know why, it just is.
Mine: Nikola Allegra(D3M, not yet introduced), Axel Woodleigh(D6M, not yet introduced)
Rooting for:
Love:
Like: Cecelia Hart(D1F)
Neutral:
Dislike:
Hate: Trajan Seth(D1M)