
5/16 c1 St4rkiller2001
Brilliantly written
Brilliantly written
9/18/2022 c1 ShadowHawk
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS, IF YOU DONT I WILL!
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS, IF YOU DONT I WILL!
10/13/2020 c1 Guest
Please, please continue I really want to see what happens!
Please, please continue I really want to see what happens!
11/6/2018 c1 Guest
Please do a second part
Please do a second part
11/6/2018 c1 fireynovacat
Heya! This is a good start! May I suggest using a grammar checker tool like Grammarly? You have quiet a few grammar and spelling errors which are a bit distracting.
Heya! This is a good start! May I suggest using a grammar checker tool like Grammarly? You have quiet a few grammar and spelling errors which are a bit distracting.
11/6/2018 c1
12All Things Animated
There are several spelling and punctuation mistakes in this chapter. Not to be rude, but Sabine is a bit OOC. She’d never think that way about Ezra. She wouldn’t blush either. Other than that, good job.

There are several spelling and punctuation mistakes in this chapter. Not to be rude, but Sabine is a bit OOC. She’d never think that way about Ezra. She wouldn’t blush either. Other than that, good job.