
3/5/2019 c1
2Greenyugi
This is completely copied from BlankSoraShiro's story "One Drunk Night" except you managed to make the grammar worse.

This is completely copied from BlankSoraShiro's story "One Drunk Night" except you managed to make the grammar worse.
11/30/2018 c2 Donthedarkdragon26
definitely funny and quite interesting...makes me wonder how natsu is going to handle extreme emotional erza and such with her rage and such while she is pregnant with his kid...lol
definitely funny and quite interesting...makes me wonder how natsu is going to handle extreme emotional erza and such with her rage and such while she is pregnant with his kid...lol
11/7/2018 c1 Guest
Not bad, but you messed up that last sentence. You listed both of Erza's names instead of Natsu's.
Not bad, but you messed up that last sentence. You listed both of Erza's names instead of Natsu's.