for A Tale from the Lost Sea3/11/2019 c14 
2k+GoldGuardian2418
You did a great job on this story! I enjoyed it all the way from the start and my favorite parts were Frisk meeting Ink (my favorite Sans beside my three Sanses), Frisk meeting Gaster (love how you put him as the guardian of the souls) and Frisk meeting Time!Sans. At first I was wondering who he was and then when I read time portal, I was like "Oh, yeah. Time!Sans". :)
I got tears in my eyes at the end, but I thought it was very sweet and romantic. Now both Frisk and Captain Sans can be together in love and in peace. :)
Overall, a wonderful story. Well done. :)
2k+GoldGuardian2418You did a great job on this story! I enjoyed it all the way from the start and my favorite parts were Frisk meeting Ink (my favorite Sans beside my three Sanses), Frisk meeting Gaster (love how you put him as the guardian of the souls) and Frisk meeting Time!Sans. At first I was wondering who he was and then when I read time portal, I was like "Oh, yeah. Time!Sans". :)
I got tears in my eyes at the end, but I thought it was very sweet and romantic. Now both Frisk and Captain Sans can be together in love and in peace. :)
Overall, a wonderful story. Well done. :)
3/9/2019 c10 Deanna's Child
This is really well written. It's been a while since I've gotten to read a story that actually feels like the author took time and effort into their story.
This is really well written. It's been a while since I've gotten to read a story that actually feels like the author took time and effort into their story.
1/13/2019 c13 Aquasseila
The ending was kind of hard to read through the tears in my eyes. I really loved the story.
The ending was kind of hard to read through the tears in my eyes. I really loved the story.
12/16/2018 c6 EnvySin
So far I'm liking this story very much, i adore San's little possesive side. I really am looking forward to reading more
So far I'm liking this story very much, i adore San's little possesive side. I really am looking forward to reading more
11/27/2018 c3 26Silversun XD
were they just on the island or on the edge of the boat? I can't tell from the way things were worded. plus why did it take like a few hours for Frisk to get comfy with her -kidnappers-? she was just going to be MARRIED. Where is her husband-to-be? Why isn't she worried for him or her family and friends? where is the stiff guard, the aggression to the unfamiliar, the suspicion to every action. Why is she letting her guard down just because everyone is friendly, that just makes it more suspicious!
It is a really good story, but I feel it is progressing a little too fast. please keep that in mind, and I hope to read more
26Silversun XDwere they just on the island or on the edge of the boat? I can't tell from the way things were worded. plus why did it take like a few hours for Frisk to get comfy with her -kidnappers-? she was just going to be MARRIED. Where is her husband-to-be? Why isn't she worried for him or her family and friends? where is the stiff guard, the aggression to the unfamiliar, the suspicion to every action. Why is she letting her guard down just because everyone is friendly, that just makes it more suspicious!
It is a really good story, but I feel it is progressing a little too fast. please keep that in mind, and I hope to read more
11/13/2018 c1 weujfhnuiejwfhi
Alright, lets get things started... So, from the first bit, it looks like a normal fanfiction... until it shows things like "Asgore X Toriel, Muffet X Grillby", alright so, I can understand if people think Toriel and Asgore can get back together, but...
What the absolute hell is Grillby X Muffet for? Because they both own shops?
Seems likely, now to the main bit, and also the worst: the story itself.
So, from the start, it's just a normal story, no problem, but then OC's get introduced.
I have no problem with OC's, buuuut Undertale ones mostly take it too far.
Here's an example: Sansette, somehow has hair, loves Sans, etc.
So, I like OC's if they're properly and well written, and not just Sans with hair and Sans' wife.
So, moving to chapter 2, where there's some pointless song or something inbetween, and at the end, it's Frisk saying they're 18?
Now, where's this going? Is it going to end up like one of those grown-up Frisk fanfictions and then she does it with Sans? Unoriginal.
Now, DO NOT GET ME STARTED WITH THE SHITFEST THAT IS SANS X FRISK.
Now, not only is Sans X Frisk PEDOPHILIA SINCE SANS IS A SKELETON AND BASICALLY DEAD, THE EXCUSE THAT FRISK IS 18 IS STILL MAKING IT HIGHLY INAPPROPRIATE SINCE SHE STILL ISN'T OLD ENOUGH SINCE SANS IS TECHNICALLY AN OLD MAN.
So, lemme guess, Sans and Frisk will have a pointless lemon bit for no reason at all. Not only is the ship shit, but the lemon bit will probably be just as bullcrap.
I'm gonna end this right here, with just a note: Sans X Frisk is crap, and probably the worst Undertale ship out there other then Asriel X Frisk/Chara, since it's incest, which is equally as bad as pedophilia.
Alright, lets get things started... So, from the first bit, it looks like a normal fanfiction... until it shows things like "Asgore X Toriel, Muffet X Grillby", alright so, I can understand if people think Toriel and Asgore can get back together, but...
What the absolute hell is Grillby X Muffet for? Because they both own shops?
Seems likely, now to the main bit, and also the worst: the story itself.
So, from the start, it's just a normal story, no problem, but then OC's get introduced.
I have no problem with OC's, buuuut Undertale ones mostly take it too far.
Here's an example: Sansette, somehow has hair, loves Sans, etc.
So, I like OC's if they're properly and well written, and not just Sans with hair and Sans' wife.
So, moving to chapter 2, where there's some pointless song or something inbetween, and at the end, it's Frisk saying they're 18?
Now, where's this going? Is it going to end up like one of those grown-up Frisk fanfictions and then she does it with Sans? Unoriginal.
Now, DO NOT GET ME STARTED WITH THE SHITFEST THAT IS SANS X FRISK.
Now, not only is Sans X Frisk PEDOPHILIA SINCE SANS IS A SKELETON AND BASICALLY DEAD, THE EXCUSE THAT FRISK IS 18 IS STILL MAKING IT HIGHLY INAPPROPRIATE SINCE SHE STILL ISN'T OLD ENOUGH SINCE SANS IS TECHNICALLY AN OLD MAN.
So, lemme guess, Sans and Frisk will have a pointless lemon bit for no reason at all. Not only is the ship shit, but the lemon bit will probably be just as bullcrap.
I'm gonna end this right here, with just a note: Sans X Frisk is crap, and probably the worst Undertale ship out there other then Asriel X Frisk/Chara, since it's incest, which is equally as bad as pedophilia.