9/10/2021 c7 ImperatorRomanorum
This is an excellent story, I really hope you continue it in the future, some suggestions though, I would recomend equipping the guards with a burgonet helmet rather than a nasal helm, as they were more concurrent with brigandine armor, and they also look better, along with that, having the cavalry equipped with plate armor increases their effectiveness substantially, as they have more weight behind the charge, therefore more power.
This is an excellent story, I really hope you continue it in the future, some suggestions though, I would recomend equipping the guards with a burgonet helmet rather than a nasal helm, as they were more concurrent with brigandine armor, and they also look better, along with that, having the cavalry equipped with plate armor increases their effectiveness substantially, as they have more weight behind the charge, therefore more power.
9/8/2021 c2 4duncanmorin0
Family, duty, honour implies that they never should have served Voldemort in the first place
Family, duty, honour implies that they never should have served Voldemort in the first place
9/5/2021 c1 Nikkless
Hoped that Harry would have had an affair with Nyphadora and later She would have given Harry a child or Harry would have had a one night stand with Fleur with her ending up pregnant
Hoped that Harry would have had an affair with Nyphadora and later She would have given Harry a child or Harry would have had a one night stand with Fleur with her ending up pregnant
8/17/2021 c6 Mastersgtjames
I feel like the MC should be able to permanently duplicate(Gemino) the Valyrian Steel they found, then just make/use as much as they want.
I feel like the MC should be able to permanently duplicate(Gemino) the Valyrian Steel they found, then just make/use as much as they want.
8/17/2021 c5 Mastersgtjames
I feel like the MC should be able to permanently conjure and duplicate items. Something he should be doing, for those items that he cannot easily get more of.
Also, kinda wish he had become an animagus.
Surprised they spent so long talking about pleasure houses and did not bother to warn the Starks about what they had learned.
I feel like the MC should be able to permanently conjure and duplicate items. Something he should be doing, for those items that he cannot easily get more of.
Also, kinda wish he had become an animagus.
Surprised they spent so long talking about pleasure houses and did not bother to warn the Starks about what they had learned.
8/17/2021 c4 Mastersgtjames
I'm not sure WHAT the MC could even do... but I wish he would do more self-improvement rituals. Make himself even more of a cheat existence.
I wish one of the HP stories would have the MC make their own kingdom/domain borrowing design aesthetics from LotR. Like, Lothlorien, Rivendell, Moria, Erebor, etc... Would be cool if the MC made his cities INSIDE the mountains.
Did the MC pay all the money to the Starks? He only mentioned paying the initial 20k.
I'm not sure WHAT the MC could even do... but I wish he would do more self-improvement rituals. Make himself even more of a cheat existence.
I wish one of the HP stories would have the MC make their own kingdom/domain borrowing design aesthetics from LotR. Like, Lothlorien, Rivendell, Moria, Erebor, etc... Would be cool if the MC made his cities INSIDE the mountains.
Did the MC pay all the money to the Starks? He only mentioned paying the initial 20k.
8/17/2021 c3 Mastersgtjames
Had hoped they would get Moat Cailin.
I really hope the MC figures out some good methods for immortality and eternal youth. Not using the philosopher's stone, since he could honestly do better.
The MC selling 25% of his port/docks comes across as ridiculous. I mean, he paid 50,000 dragons for his title and lands, is building everything himself, but now sold 25% of what should be all his, for 100 Dragons? I mean, 25% is not a small amount, 5% would have been just as helpful in setting up relations, without costing the MC so much.
Really feel like they should have already told Stark they are Wizards... seems like the kind of thing that would hurt their relations if kept secret until found out.
MC really needs to figure something out for those House-elves. Them having a single point of failure in the MC, where if he dies, they ALL die, is something he should work to remedy.
Had hoped they would get Moat Cailin.
I really hope the MC figures out some good methods for immortality and eternal youth. Not using the philosopher's stone, since he could honestly do better.
The MC selling 25% of his port/docks comes across as ridiculous. I mean, he paid 50,000 dragons for his title and lands, is building everything himself, but now sold 25% of what should be all his, for 100 Dragons? I mean, 25% is not a small amount, 5% would have been just as helpful in setting up relations, without costing the MC so much.
Really feel like they should have already told Stark they are Wizards... seems like the kind of thing that would hurt their relations if kept secret until found out.
MC really needs to figure something out for those House-elves. Them having a single point of failure in the MC, where if he dies, they ALL die, is something he should work to remedy.
8/17/2021 c2 Mastersgtjames
Really feel like Harry should have had Sirius go through a few rituals to improve/protect himself. Especially with concerns like disease, what with this being an entirely foreign world. Something Harry does not need to be as concerned about due to his blood and the rituals he has done.
His sword takes on the properties of whatever it comes in contact with that makes it stronger... Can he add Valyrian steel to it? or Dragonglass? I mean, Goblin steel absorbs materials.
Also, super surprised the MC actually paid the slavers anything. He could have just conjured temporary gold to pay them. Could have even charmed them to not notice WHEN it disappeared, they would just think they were robbed.
Really feel like Harry should have had Sirius go through a few rituals to improve/protect himself. Especially with concerns like disease, what with this being an entirely foreign world. Something Harry does not need to be as concerned about due to his blood and the rituals he has done.
His sword takes on the properties of whatever it comes in contact with that makes it stronger... Can he add Valyrian steel to it? or Dragonglass? I mean, Goblin steel absorbs materials.
Also, super surprised the MC actually paid the slavers anything. He could have just conjured temporary gold to pay them. Could have even charmed them to not notice WHEN it disappeared, they would just think they were robbed.
8/17/2021 c1 Mastersgtjames
So... Venom enhanced blood... but no boost from the Phoenix Tears? Accelerated healing maybe?
No unblocked magical gift, like metamorphmagic?(not counting the mage sight) Always bummed when MC's do not try to become a metamorph(or unlock the ability if they have it).
I seriously doubt Tom MASTERED All the various, useful magical fields. So I would have hoped the MC would try to. Study up on Wards, Construction, Blood/Flesh Magic, Sex Magic(maybe), Divination(like information not prophecy), etc... Maybe just Buy/Copy/Steal ALL the books he can, so he has a MASSIVE library to rely on. Too bad he did not try to figure out a way to intentionally do what he accidentally did, and ABSORB the various horcruxes. Increasing his power/abilities. Maybe also hit up various universities and thinktanks and Read/Copy/Download people's memories/knowledge of various fields. Math, Science, Medicine, Engineering, etc...
Should ABSOLUTELY try to figure out how to create an Arch(Veil of Death), so that regardless of where he ends up, he can leave.
I feel like there is no way the MC managed to spend 3 billion bucks on all he needed in those 2 years. I can buy him spending millions, even hundreds of millions, but not all 3 billion.
Did he liquidate and empty the Black Family Vaults/Properties as well? Or were they left to Tonks?
MC's power increases massively as he grows older, he used a ritual to age himself by a decade, so his power should have skyrocketed from that as well...
Really feels like he went overboard on the number of trunks, what with how much space they each have.
So... Venom enhanced blood... but no boost from the Phoenix Tears? Accelerated healing maybe?
No unblocked magical gift, like metamorphmagic?(not counting the mage sight) Always bummed when MC's do not try to become a metamorph(or unlock the ability if they have it).
I seriously doubt Tom MASTERED All the various, useful magical fields. So I would have hoped the MC would try to. Study up on Wards, Construction, Blood/Flesh Magic, Sex Magic(maybe), Divination(like information not prophecy), etc... Maybe just Buy/Copy/Steal ALL the books he can, so he has a MASSIVE library to rely on. Too bad he did not try to figure out a way to intentionally do what he accidentally did, and ABSORB the various horcruxes. Increasing his power/abilities. Maybe also hit up various universities and thinktanks and Read/Copy/Download people's memories/knowledge of various fields. Math, Science, Medicine, Engineering, etc...
Should ABSOLUTELY try to figure out how to create an Arch(Veil of Death), so that regardless of where he ends up, he can leave.
I feel like there is no way the MC managed to spend 3 billion bucks on all he needed in those 2 years. I can buy him spending millions, even hundreds of millions, but not all 3 billion.
Did he liquidate and empty the Black Family Vaults/Properties as well? Or were they left to Tonks?
MC's power increases massively as he grows older, he used a ritual to age himself by a decade, so his power should have skyrocketed from that as well...
Really feels like he went overboard on the number of trunks, what with how much space they each have.