for Harry Potter and The Land of Ice and Fire12/20/2020 c6 Sable Dawn
this is going to have fun affects in the future, considering Littlefinger made most of his profit from whorehouses.
this is going to have fun affects in the future, considering Littlefinger made most of his profit from whorehouses.
12/11/2020 c4 Guest
The city of new port
Harry house words:life from stone
Harry’s banner; red field, a grey mountain with foliage growing on it, and a white owl sitting on one of the trees
Sirius words: laugh hard, run fast, and always be kind
Sirius sigil: a Grimm laughing at the moon with a stag, and wolf as well
The city of new port
Harry house words:life from stone
Harry’s banner; red field, a grey mountain with foliage growing on it, and a white owl sitting on one of the trees
Sirius words: laugh hard, run fast, and always be kind
Sirius sigil: a Grimm laughing at the moon with a stag, and wolf as well
12/9/2020 c7 mbrevig
I love the detail you put into making the steal. As someone who works as an engineer for a steel producer it is apparent that you did your research. Good story so far.
I love the detail you put into making the steal. As someone who works as an engineer for a steel producer it is apparent that you did your research. Good story so far.
11/27/2020 c3 Alucard-hellsing12
Richard stark was lord before Eddard so the fact you have made up Brandon Stark as being lord Paramount is inaccurate but not majorly annoying. The Iron islands are to the west of Westeros so the fact you said they’ve raided the East of the North is also inaccurate, unless they travelled all the way south past Dorne and back up to the North to raid the poorest of the 7 Kingdoms which I find highly unlikely. The story is good but you have made a couple mistakes like the ones I mentioned plus a few more. It is okay just ruins the immersion a smidge but I am just nitpicking.
Richard stark was lord before Eddard so the fact you have made up Brandon Stark as being lord Paramount is inaccurate but not majorly annoying. The Iron islands are to the west of Westeros so the fact you said they’ve raided the East of the North is also inaccurate, unless they travelled all the way south past Dorne and back up to the North to raid the poorest of the 7 Kingdoms which I find highly unlikely. The story is good but you have made a couple mistakes like the ones I mentioned plus a few more. It is okay just ruins the immersion a smidge but I am just nitpicking.
11/16/2020 c7 kalipendragon
Love it! Kingdom building type fics are my favorite so to see how much Harry and Sirius have accomplished so far is great! It's been a while since you've updated but if you ever find your muse again, I'm definitely a reader!
Love it! Kingdom building type fics are my favorite so to see how much Harry and Sirius have accomplished so far is great! It's been a while since you've updated but if you ever find your muse again, I'm definitely a reader!
11/10/2020 c6 Guest
I'm glad you switched it from a traffic circle to a roundabout, they are much, much better...
I'm glad you switched it from a traffic circle to a roundabout, they are much, much better...
11/10/2020 c5 Guest
For someone so critical of 'Family, Duty, Honor' he sure picked some easily misconstrued words for his house...
For someone so critical of 'Family, Duty, Honor' he sure picked some easily misconstrued words for his house...
11/9/2020 c7 or14121991
This story is very enjoyable. Love kingdom building. Please don't abandon its amazing :(
This story is very enjoyable. Love kingdom building. Please don't abandon its amazing :(
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