for Harry Potter and The Land of Ice and Fire9/23/2022 c1 Guest
Only looser write Harry Stue Storys
Only looser write Harry Stue Storys
9/23/2022 c1 Guest
Pathetic
Pathetic
19/2/2022 c5 jawocena23
bro they care too much about prostitutes dafuq let them have deceases then dump them trying to have moral high ground bullshit
bro they care too much about prostitutes dafuq let them have deceases then dump them trying to have moral high ground bullshit
9/1/2022 c5 LunaLuna99999
While I like the story...But, you wrote...
" A good example would be the fact that saves in the US during the transatlantic slave trade era were seen as a longterm investment for the future and we're treated accordingly, even if appalling at time."
While you did go on to say the truth about Hati, the beginning sentence is highly inappropriate and wrong. They did not treat them a such, which is why they forcibly bred people. There is a reason why its called Chattel Slavery and has no equivalent in human history.
I understand that this is a fanfic, but when you are reference real history for your stories, down playing it or lying about one of the worst atrocities committed by humans and in all of human history like that, even if you are making a throw away comment, is disgusting.
We may use history in our art, whether that is books, movies, television or music, even when creating fiction, when we pull from historical events, especially ones that committed unfathomable crimes, stick to the truth. Unfortunately, as we have seen humans are susceptible to lies. To the rewriting of events and history. There is so much wrong information out there. And I know, this is fan fiction. "Don't take it seriously"... unfortunately humans take in what they see and read whether or not its true and that idea may live in someones mind when reading your story and they will think "yea, since whole family were enslaved and lived their entire lives in slavery, the conditions might have not been that bad because enslaved people were able to live somewhat long lives"
And that will downplay the truth, spread misinformation and contribute to these people out here telling African-Americans, Caribbean's, Afro-Latinos and Africans, that their ancestors did not suffer that bad and that they should be thankful because they wouldn't be able to be Americans or they would have had to live their whole lives on the continent of Africa and that they would not have the infrastructure or medicine or education that they have today.
And those are things that people believe and say. And you're contributing to it.
So change it. Because it's not true and it's unnecessary and you are just trying to justify the impact of the decisions you character is making, which is wrong.
While I like the story...But, you wrote...
" A good example would be the fact that saves in the US during the transatlantic slave trade era were seen as a longterm investment for the future and we're treated accordingly, even if appalling at time."
While you did go on to say the truth about Hati, the beginning sentence is highly inappropriate and wrong. They did not treat them a such, which is why they forcibly bred people. There is a reason why its called Chattel Slavery and has no equivalent in human history.
I understand that this is a fanfic, but when you are reference real history for your stories, down playing it or lying about one of the worst atrocities committed by humans and in all of human history like that, even if you are making a throw away comment, is disgusting.
We may use history in our art, whether that is books, movies, television or music, even when creating fiction, when we pull from historical events, especially ones that committed unfathomable crimes, stick to the truth. Unfortunately, as we have seen humans are susceptible to lies. To the rewriting of events and history. There is so much wrong information out there. And I know, this is fan fiction. "Don't take it seriously"... unfortunately humans take in what they see and read whether or not its true and that idea may live in someones mind when reading your story and they will think "yea, since whole family were enslaved and lived their entire lives in slavery, the conditions might have not been that bad because enslaved people were able to live somewhat long lives"
And that will downplay the truth, spread misinformation and contribute to these people out here telling African-Americans, Caribbean's, Afro-Latinos and Africans, that their ancestors did not suffer that bad and that they should be thankful because they wouldn't be able to be Americans or they would have had to live their whole lives on the continent of Africa and that they would not have the infrastructure or medicine or education that they have today.
And those are things that people believe and say. And you're contributing to it.
So change it. Because it's not true and it's unnecessary and you are just trying to justify the impact of the decisions you character is making, which is wrong.
9/1/2022 c1 LunaLuna99999
While I like the story... you wrote...
" A good example would be the fact that saves in the US during the transatlantic slave trade era were seen as a longterm investment for the future and we're treated accordingly, even if appalling at time."
While you did go on to say the truth about Hati, the beginning sentence is highly inappropriate and wrong. They did not treat them a such, which is why they forcibly bred people. There is a reason why its called Chattel Slavery and has no equivalent in human history.
I understand that this is a fanfic, but when you are reference real history for your stories, down playing it or lying about one of the worst atrocities committed by humans and in all of human history like that, even if you are making a throw away comment, is disgusting.
We may use history in our art, whether that is books, movies, television or music, even when creating fiction, when we pull from historical events, especially ones that committed unfathomable crimes, stick to the truth. Unfortunately, as we have seen humans are susceptible to lies. To the rewriting of events and history. There is so much wrong information out there. And I know, this is fan fiction. "Don't take it seriously"... unfortunately humans take in what they see and read whether or not its true and that idea may live in someones mind when reading your story and they will think "yea, since whole family were enslaved and lived their entire lives in slavery, the conditions might have not been that bad because enslaved people were able to live somewhat long lives"
And that will downplay the truth, spread misinformation and contribute to these people out here telling African-Americans, Caribbean's, Afro-Latinos and Africans, that their ancestors did not suffer that bad and that they should be thankful because they wouldn't be able to be Americans or they would have had to live their whole lives on the continent of Africa and that they would not have the infrastructure or medicine or education that they have today.
And those are things that people believe and say. And you're contributing to it.
So change it. Because it's not true and it's unnecessary and you are just trying to justify the impact of the decisions you character is making, which is wrong.
While I like the story... you wrote...
" A good example would be the fact that saves in the US during the transatlantic slave trade era were seen as a longterm investment for the future and we're treated accordingly, even if appalling at time."
While you did go on to say the truth about Hati, the beginning sentence is highly inappropriate and wrong. They did not treat them a such, which is why they forcibly bred people. There is a reason why its called Chattel Slavery and has no equivalent in human history.
I understand that this is a fanfic, but when you are reference real history for your stories, down playing it or lying about one of the worst atrocities committed by humans and in all of human history like that, even if you are making a throw away comment, is disgusting.
We may use history in our art, whether that is books, movies, television or music, even when creating fiction, when we pull from historical events, especially ones that committed unfathomable crimes, stick to the truth. Unfortunately, as we have seen humans are susceptible to lies. To the rewriting of events and history. There is so much wrong information out there. And I know, this is fan fiction. "Don't take it seriously"... unfortunately humans take in what they see and read whether or not its true and that idea may live in someones mind when reading your story and they will think "yea, since whole family were enslaved and lived their entire lives in slavery, the conditions might have not been that bad because enslaved people were able to live somewhat long lives"
And that will downplay the truth, spread misinformation and contribute to these people out here telling African-Americans, Caribbean's, Afro-Latinos and Africans, that their ancestors did not suffer that bad and that they should be thankful because they wouldn't be able to be Americans or they would have had to live their whole lives on the continent of Africa and that they would not have the infrastructure or medicine or education that they have today.
And those are things that people believe and say. And you're contributing to it.
So change it. Because it's not true and it's unnecessary and you are just trying to justify the impact of the decisions you character is making, which is wrong.
8/31/2022 c7 jckim0937
i love this story. will you be updating this soon? thanks for the story. i also love your other stories
i love this story. will you be updating this soon? thanks for the story. i also love your other stories
8/22/2022 c7 Ironkombat736
I really wish this story would be updated , I really love kingdom building fanfics especially with Harry Potter magic in it!
I really wish this story would be updated , I really love kingdom building fanfics especially with Harry Potter magic in it!
8/18/2022 c7 Phoenix
Well I'm really enjoyed what has been written so far. I would like to read more of this story.
Well I'm really enjoyed what has been written so far. I would like to read more of this story.
8/18/2022 c4 timberwolfst
Bay of Owls (in honor of Hedwig), manor could be Hart Home since my suggestion for Harry's sigil is gold stag's head with lillies entwined in the antlers on a field of red (Parents and Gryffindor colors). Sirius sigil.. armored war dog lunging, silver on black with the motto being something about loyalty. the city... something to do with knowledge. start a school to counter the Maesters.
Bay of Owls (in honor of Hedwig), manor could be Hart Home since my suggestion for Harry's sigil is gold stag's head with lillies entwined in the antlers on a field of red (Parents and Gryffindor colors). Sirius sigil.. armored war dog lunging, silver on black with the motto being something about loyalty. the city... something to do with knowledge. start a school to counter the Maesters.
8/16/2022 c1 eruukira
Really love this builder type fic but god dammit there's like no conflict so it's just kinda boring.
Really love this builder type fic but god dammit there's like no conflict so it's just kinda boring.
7/30/2022 c1 KazuTakeFahrenhir
I love the story but I kinda wanted Harry to marry Daenerys, but they are a century from the Game Of Thrones, so... yeah...
I love the story but I kinda wanted Harry to marry Daenerys, but they are a century from the Game Of Thrones, so... yeah...