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3/20/2019 c2 thesilverpaladin
this is amazing! ten outta ten love it
3/3/2019 c2 KatieGunderson
So kute. Truly beautiful.
1/15/2019 c2 unavailable.101.goodbye
Awwww Lance comforting Katie and Colleen being able to know that her husband is still alive...is adorable
12/30/2018 c1 RJLadyA
oooo. will you write more?
12/9/2018 c1 2ToffyChu
This is a great idea for a fanfic! I would love to see more!
12/7/2018 c1 daylight at midnight
Great start! :)
11/24/2018 c1 RJLadyA
Oh wow! Please don't forget about this story.
11/15/2018 c1 k
This is going to be great :)
11/14/2018 c1 Critic
“painful because it's not your's”
Should be:
“painful because it's not yours”

When you’re indicating possession, yours is the correct choice—not your's. You don’t need an apostrophe to indicate possession because yours itself is a possessive pronoun. In this sense, yours is similar to other possessive pronouns like its, whose, and ours.

Other than that, and a few spots where your wording is a touch awkward, you did splendidly. The ending is brilliant. Very eye-catching and it’ll make readers want to come back for more.
11/14/2018 c1 KatieGunderson
No offense to all the other soulmate AUs I’ve read, but... THIS IS THE BEST SOULMATE AU I’VE EVER READ! And it’s barely started! (I think. Idk, you’re the author, not me.) If was a democracy, I’d vote for you to make this fic at least 100,000 words long. Cause I already love it that much. Keep up the excellent work!
11/14/2018 c1 unavailable.101.goodbye
I ALREADY LOVE THIS
11/14/2018 c1 8Mango Sakaguchi
Ahhhh! I love this! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Good luck and well done!

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