for Yoru - Gamer Between Dimensions9/10/2021 c1 JemeryT
The chakra sensor ability is beyond broken to unlock that powerful especially at level one as a four year old
The chakra sensor ability is beyond broken to unlock that powerful especially at level one as a four year old
9/7/2021 c21 Guest
Uhhh the switch seal he made is kindaaa discount thundergod lol
AND the hiraishin could do all the ameno-whatever could do but better
Plus the sharingan power, the immitation that the MC made could do it without seals
Ya shoulda just made upgraded the hiraishin To make a bounded area where you can teleport wherever,whatever and whoever the user wants in that death field
If you could make throwable kunai seals like those MCs gonna be a nightmare
It would be like a discount ope ope no mi with only teleporting and switching available
But it would be the ultimate uno reverse card ever
S- rank jutsu coming right at me? No u
You have an army? They fused underground now
With MC having flash time he would be the song “cant touch this”
Uhhh the switch seal he made is kindaaa discount thundergod lol
AND the hiraishin could do all the ameno-whatever could do but better
Plus the sharingan power, the immitation that the MC made could do it without seals
Ya shoulda just made upgraded the hiraishin To make a bounded area where you can teleport wherever,whatever and whoever the user wants in that death field
If you could make throwable kunai seals like those MCs gonna be a nightmare
It would be like a discount ope ope no mi with only teleporting and switching available
But it would be the ultimate uno reverse card ever
S- rank jutsu coming right at me? No u
You have an army? They fused underground now
With MC having flash time he would be the song “cant touch this”
9/7/2021 c20 Guest
Yorus like the avatar but with more free time to experiment with the elements
Hope he copies the dust release
HMMM wonder if yoru could just make a sand rasengan? It would probably have more weight to the spin if he did that
Like a sand blaster with steroids
Yorus like the avatar but with more free time to experiment with the elements
Hope he copies the dust release
HMMM wonder if yoru could just make a sand rasengan? It would probably have more weight to the spin if he did that
Like a sand blaster with steroids
9/7/2021 c19 Guest
Hope yoru puts a genjutsu on his personal hotspring
Although only ninjas with high water and fire afinity with moderate control would be able to use it since its artificial
Hope yoru puts a genjutsu on his personal hotspring
Although only ninjas with high water and fire afinity with moderate control would be able to use it since its artificial
9/7/2021 c18 Guest
Is yoru just that emotionless or is his gamers mind that buffed? Cuz gamers can feel emotion too ya know? Its just doesnt go to the panic threshold
They can feel anger and love too
Is yoru just that emotionless or is his gamers mind that buffed? Cuz gamers can feel emotion too ya know? Its just doesnt go to the panic threshold
They can feel anger and love too
9/6/2021 c16 Guest
I dont get why people bitch about gamers being too OP
THATS THE POINT BITCHES!
The original gamer became strong within a freaking year of him getting his power!
The only reason why han jihan wasnt at the top yet was because the top was full or ARMIES AND GODS! PANTHEONS!
and the gamer is just one guy!
I dont get why people bitch about gamers being too OP
THATS THE POINT BITCHES!
The original gamer became strong within a freaking year of him getting his power!
The only reason why han jihan wasnt at the top yet was because the top was full or ARMIES AND GODS! PANTHEONS!
and the gamer is just one guy!
9/7/2021 c2 
8The Liar Who Lies
Partial memory loss on such specific (and very memorable) topics and people? Very specific because remembering a certain anime itself more than your own past is already too specific. Now that just sounds like an obvious and poor plot device. Well, good thing you showed it early enough for us to not be invested yet. See ya.
8The Liar Who LiesPartial memory loss on such specific (and very memorable) topics and people? Very specific because remembering a certain anime itself more than your own past is already too specific. Now that just sounds like an obvious and poor plot device. Well, good thing you showed it early enough for us to not be invested yet. See ya.
9/6/2021 c1 x2leoj
Hmm this definitely seems to be based off the framework of Yami:The Gamer Cage, this is like a remixed version with significantly less typos and earlier in thetimeline.
Hmm this definitely seems to be based off the framework of Yami:The Gamer Cage, this is like a remixed version with significantly less typos and earlier in thetimeline.
8/28/2021 c3 ALAN
This doesn't seem badly done compared to other Gamer stories I have read. So the negative reviews are likely from people who don't like gamer stories or from a dislike of Danzo. A talented orphan would be grabbed by Orochimaru or Danzo and you are more likely to survive Danzo. Plus it seems like this might be an AU Danzo so I don't think it was a bad decision.
This doesn't seem badly done compared to other Gamer stories I have read. So the negative reviews are likely from people who don't like gamer stories or from a dislike of Danzo. A talented orphan would be grabbed by Orochimaru or Danzo and you are more likely to survive Danzo. Plus it seems like this might be an AU Danzo so I don't think it was a bad decision.
8/29/2021 c33 handwran
i really hope you end up writing more. I was so sad when I realized there wasnt gonna be a part 2 to this amazing story
i really hope you end up writing more. I was so sad when I realized there wasnt gonna be a part 2 to this amazing story
8/13/2021 c3 Guest
look, the negative reviews you might have received are probably because the kid is 4, yet has full control of his emotions, has all five chakra element affinities, and is on the course for ANBU by the age of 6, or worse, 5.
look, the negative reviews you might have received are probably because the kid is 4, yet has full control of his emotions, has all five chakra element affinities, and is on the course for ANBU by the age of 6, or worse, 5.
8/11/2021 c3 EverRed
What is horrible about this chapter is how you try to Justify the teachers actions when all in all she just kidnaps children that barely know anything about life and tell them something that will change their life forever but she thinks is good which is fine but the MC is kissing her a*s when she kidnapped him so I hope she gets killed off otherwise Imm going to drop this no questions asked
What is horrible about this chapter is how you try to Justify the teachers actions when all in all she just kidnaps children that barely know anything about life and tell them something that will change their life forever but she thinks is good which is fine but the MC is kissing her a*s when she kidnapped him so I hope she gets killed off otherwise Imm going to drop this no questions asked
8/10/2021 c19 Ahtu
He did note Rin's though... And I'd think 3 tails still has more chakra than Hashirama.
I thought he'd just feel too different, due to his emotional state.
He did note Rin's though... And I'd think 3 tails still has more chakra than Hashirama.
I thought he'd just feel too different, due to his emotional state.