
5/5/2021 c3 Fanficlover909925
nobody:
erza: we gonna cure your motion sickness *straps him on the front of a boat as if he was the figurehead*
nobody:
erza: we gonna cure your motion sickness *straps him on the front of a boat as if he was the figurehead*
12/14/2018 c11
21FenreldStormblade
normally I'd love a Natza story no matter what... but this is severely rushed... everything from the timeline, their training, to their relationship... I wish you luck with this story but I can't read anymore

normally I'd love a Natza story no matter what... but this is severely rushed... everything from the timeline, their training, to their relationship... I wish you luck with this story but I can't read anymore
12/4/2018 c10 Guest
Kind of like how you slightly rushed through training ect. I hope it slows slightly for the bulk of there new adventures though! Great story so far!
Kind of like how you slightly rushed through training ect. I hope it slows slightly for the bulk of there new adventures though! Great story so far!
12/1/2018 c9
15Ryojin
They seem a little over powered way to quickly but I still love it keep writing. I am interested to seem everyone elses reactions.

They seem a little over powered way to quickly but I still love it keep writing. I am interested to seem everyone elses reactions.
11/24/2018 c6 Vince Basile Jr
why is Naruto in this and why is he now marrying Erza and got her pregnant? WTF is going on in this story?
why is Naruto in this and why is he now marrying Erza and got her pregnant? WTF is going on in this story?