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3/28/2024 c9 7Paxloria
Thanks for posting.
So...
Did Shirou break Midusa's curse or kill her?

There doesn't seem to be any need to collect tokens like in the movie, so I guess there are none here. The prophacy is different after all.

The chapter had some descriptive problems, especially near the beginning that reads more like a poem than a fight.

I don't understand why Shirou fainted after the Furies appeared (though it's easy to understand why they targeted him) or why he couldn't even try to resist them first.

Also, I don't understand why it is that they headed to a fast food place, but it was a convenience store, that turned out to be a privite residence with a statue garden.
I don't know if I was just distracted and missreading, or the section read very confusingly due to not being writen well enough and needing fixing, but I was a bit confused there.
Also, the little Demigod stayed behind to (figuratively) face off against Midusa while Annabeth took Shirou away, but didn't even so much as draw a weapon to fight her. I don't get that at all.
3/28/2024 c9 1TheBeatles211
Glad to see another chapter come out so quickly. The Furies incapacitated Shirou with memories of his past sins, so it took him awhile to bounce back. But Penelope did a pretty good job on her own against Medusa. When Shirou finally woke up, he certainly took things seriously. Using Perseus' mantle to avoid her petrification and Harpe to fight her off. Her tone even showed that she wanted the death as to keep her from coming back for a long time.

But due to Shirou's memories of Medusa (Rider), he was reluctant to deal the killing blow. So when he wore her down enough, he used Rule Breaker on her to try and break her curse. Although given how everything became silent, and how robotic Shirou's movements were after the fight, it probably didn't work the way he wanted. I'm guessing when he broke her curse, he killed her as well. Or, when he broke the curse and made her human, all the centuries caught up with her and she died of old age. But I guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter to find out further details. Anywho, I wish you good luck with your writing and I hope to see the next update soon.
3/28/2024 c9 2DannyPhantom619
I wonder if Rule Breaker did what I think it did?
3/28/2024 c9 Benli
Wow, good story.
3/28/2024 c9 7NightBringer325
So he freed her from her curse I can't see Athena taking that well given her pride and vindictive nature.
3/28/2024 c1 OPPRESSOR OF NIGGERS
Shit story
3/28/2024 c9 Apple89123
Why do regular demi-gods have magic circuits again?
3/28/2024 c9 DragonB0b
Okay I'm scared about what rule breaker would do to Medusa. Because if it does break the curse the gods will know and Shirou will never be free.
3/28/2024 c9 Shen1412
Aww Medusa is free now great chapter overall but i think i missed this but what happened to Emiya? It felt similar to the penance stare of ghost rider
3/28/2024 c9 Darth Kyuubi Bugge
Great chapter as always, I’ve forgotten about sword of the imperium.
3/28/2024 c9 JonnyBoboThe1st
Thanks for the chapter, the fight was neat.
3/28/2024 c9 8Jebest4781
Nice chapter this turned out to be here.
3/28/2024 c9 Mwrodach
Thank for the great chapter!
I had a feeling rule breaker was gonna make an appearance when Medusa started talking about curses and I was right. Thank you for not killing her
3/28/2024 c9 Artyk04
I hope it breaks her curse or somehow she becomes Type Moon's Medusa. It'd be nice
3/28/2024 c9 2NIGRIS
So he used Rule Breaker on her. Does that break her curse, or just kill her?
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