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10/4/2022 c7 TrapAlter
Ok ok hold the phone and redial the number, that two arrows bullshit was some sword art online level plot forcing and while I hav egoism this interesting it has only gotten incomprehensible by this chapter and I’m honestly dropping it here. So good luck and maybe if I stumble upon this in another year or so then I hope that I will be able to read a page without getting my own mental voice tongue tied.
9/29/2022 c3 Prolic
dude you seriously need a beta, I can barely understand this.
9/16/2022 c7 Goldiman543
9/13/2022 c2 krkovichsa
You really need to edit this.
9/12/2022 c7 Im a guest
Got say. I’ve been enjoying this lately. Cant wait see next chapter
9/12/2022 c7 12Darkscythe Drake
Great story! I'm actually hoping Emiya will be surly for some reason. Keep it up!
9/12/2022 c7 ErrorDataExpunged
I love this concept, never thought Fate and PJ could work so well
9/5/2022 c7 a roll of toilet paper
Great chapter. I am looking forward to how this all develops.
8/24/2022 c7 2TheSlySage
loving this thus far. thanks for writing I hope after they get hormones lol Pen relentlessly pursues Shirou. and that she has grown on him to the point that he can't leave her
8/24/2022 c1 TheSlySage
I can definitely picture Shirou's divine parents being Hephestas, Aphrodite, and oddly Ares. it is known that while she is married to the blacksmith she has regular affairs with Ares after all. and Divine child birth might allow for the egg to be double seeded maybe? like she was pregnant with Ares child and to hide that it wasn't hephestas' child she slept with him so that it would be both his and Ares' child but thats over complicated
8/18/2022 c7 ALTER-BOT
This girl is so annoying
8/18/2022 c1 Romeperson
No offence to the US of A but they talk about being the most free country and they have to pledge their allegiance to the state as a child who doesn’t understand anything. To me that sounds a bit like indoctrination
8/17/2022 c7 Guest
this is awesome. there are really not enough crossovers between pjo and the nasuverse. I am quite excited to see where this goes next. :)
8/17/2022 c7 shadyxlr
Well damn finally good to see someone write with Dionysios reacting to EMIYA's insanity. I always assumed that Dionysios would instinctively know if someone had a reality marble since you pretty much had to be somewhere on the spectrum of insanity to have one in the first place.
8/17/2022 c7 Yeet
anice chapate man
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