for God of Swords: How a Sword is Forged5/9 c3 
1FireFox2590
I hope he stops bad mouthing his dad soon, his dad clearly cared about him when he was born, and sure most God's are shitty people, but I feel like he should at least give him a chance once he learns WHY he was left behind and the rules the God's here operate under.
1FireFox2590I hope he stops bad mouthing his dad soon, his dad clearly cared about him when he was born, and sure most God's are shitty people, but I feel like he should at least give him a chance once he learns WHY he was left behind and the rules the God's here operate under.
5/9 c16 Artyk04
LOVED the chapter, amazing 100/10 would (will) read again. I loved the way you interpreted Percy's fatal flaw of "caring too much". I hope you re well and tht writer's block does not reach you because this story is amazing
LOVED the chapter, amazing 100/10 would (will) read again. I loved the way you interpreted Percy's fatal flaw of "caring too much". I hope you re well and tht writer's block does not reach you because this story is amazing
5/9 c16 2NIGRIS
It lives! I’m so glad. And I’m happy to see everything is turning out alright on your end. Thanks again for the update.
2NIGRISIt lives! I’m so glad. And I’m happy to see everything is turning out alright on your end. Thanks again for the update.
5/9 c16 1WeAreTheWord
Welcome back. Its good to see you making inroads on this story. I hope things continue to go well for you
1WeAreTheWordWelcome back. Its good to see you making inroads on this story. I hope things continue to go well for you
3/14 c1 Guest
This story was alright but you tried to do to many things with it a rewrite might be necessary
This story was alright but you tried to do to many things with it a rewrite might be necessary
3/6 c1 9Archangel Change24
This desperately needs to be rewritten by someone who speaks english fluently.
9Archangel Change24This desperately needs to be rewritten by someone who speaks english fluently.
12/29/2024 c10 yesyesyes1212
I feel like the chapters are somehow harder to read, like they are being rushed, that coupled with a few bad grammar here and there genuinely made me question the scene inside my head
I feel like the chapters are somehow harder to read, like they are being rushed, that coupled with a few bad grammar here and there genuinely made me question the scene inside my head
9/23/2024 c1 sadmoh0207
Hey hope you are doing well
Are you still planning on doing “ The Counter Guardian in the academy ” I love how you write Emiya he seems to be an actual person
Hey hope you are doing well
Are you still planning on doing “ The Counter Guardian in the academy ” I love how you write Emiya he seems to be an actual person
9/21/2024 c15 Guest
I honestly can't wait for Medusa to see him again.
I honestly can't wait for Medusa to see him again.
9/21/2024 c14 Guest
That was fire. Wonder what they thought of his title.
That was fire. Wonder what they thought of his title.
9/21/2024 c5 Guest
Hmm This was kinda cool. Not reading from Shirou POV.
Hmm This was kinda cool. Not reading from Shirou POV.
8/25/2024 c1 Zerak
What’s up with all the “by the root” stuff. Doesn’t really make sense. Even if Magi did use it (which I need say anyone use in canon) why would Shirou who didn’t care about the root swear by it. I hope it switches to something else as the story progresses as it’s one of the most noting fanon thing about fate (that are not related to magecraft).
What’s up with all the “by the root” stuff. Doesn’t really make sense. Even if Magi did use it (which I need say anyone use in canon) why would Shirou who didn’t care about the root swear by it. I hope it switches to something else as the story progresses as it’s one of the most noting fanon thing about fate (that are not related to magecraft).