for Step Unto the Void1/1/2019 c1 
2AJR3333
Finally got around to reading this and I gotta say... it's very well written. Tasteful discriptions for each scene and setting that I can only hope to achieve myself and a interesting take on the Tenno-verse.
I understand that with there being two MASSIVE universes you're going to have to blend things together; it's going to take some time to write these chapters out. But I believe in you, my dude.
Just make sure not to rush yourself, otherwise, you'll just burn out and strike when your muse burns the hottest, as they say.
By the way, I couldn't help but notice how... familiar Sul seems to me... Nah! It's probably nothing.
2AJR3333Finally got around to reading this and I gotta say... it's very well written. Tasteful discriptions for each scene and setting that I can only hope to achieve myself and a interesting take on the Tenno-verse.
I understand that with there being two MASSIVE universes you're going to have to blend things together; it's going to take some time to write these chapters out. But I believe in you, my dude.
Just make sure not to rush yourself, otherwise, you'll just burn out and strike when your muse burns the hottest, as they say.
By the way, I couldn't help but notice how... familiar Sul seems to me... Nah! It's probably nothing.
11/21/2018 c1 Guest
Soleneus sent me
Soleneus sent me
11/23/2018 c1 2Domesticated Sword
Great intro, and I'm excited to see where you take it from here.
Quick nitpick: You mention 'balorian'. Are you intending for this to be a slang term used by the Tenno, or did you just mistake them for the Balor Fomorians?
2Domesticated SwordGreat intro, and I'm excited to see where you take it from here.
Quick nitpick: You mention 'balorian'. Are you intending for this to be a slang term used by the Tenno, or did you just mistake them for the Balor Fomorians?
11/20/2018 c1 Guest
I have to admit I'm officially lost. The writing was good and I was excited to see a game I was vaguely familiar with being crossed with ME, but as someone who only played Warframe in the early months when it didn't have any story missions beyond the not very exciting or deep main quest, this chapter felt like starting a book not from the first chapter but somewhere in the middle.
I guess that's the summary of my feedback too: you didn't make it easy to read this story without extensive knowledge of the setting. If that's how the next chapters will be, I'm not sure how long it can hold my interest.
I have to admit I'm officially lost. The writing was good and I was excited to see a game I was vaguely familiar with being crossed with ME, but as someone who only played Warframe in the early months when it didn't have any story missions beyond the not very exciting or deep main quest, this chapter felt like starting a book not from the first chapter but somewhere in the middle.
I guess that's the summary of my feedback too: you didn't make it easy to read this story without extensive knowledge of the setting. If that's how the next chapters will be, I'm not sure how long it can hold my interest.
11/21/2018 c1 Hierakles
Heh, I thought the 'she' they were referring to initially was the Lotus. Especially since the Tenno are the next best thing to immortal.
Heh, I thought the 'she' they were referring to initially was the Lotus. Especially since the Tenno are the next best thing to immortal.
11/20/2018 c1 An Anonymoose
Seems interesting. Dropping a follow. I look forward to seeing where this goes
Seems interesting. Dropping a follow. I look forward to seeing where this goes
11/20/2018 c1 6Noswald
Now this is interesting, i too would like to leave my inactive warframes in various different poses around my orbiter.
Can't wait to read the inevitable encounter between shepard's crew and tenno ramiel
6NoswaldNow this is interesting, i too would like to leave my inactive warframes in various different poses around my orbiter.
Can't wait to read the inevitable encounter between shepard's crew and tenno ramiel
11/20/2018 c1 44Soleneus
Hey. I thought it was pretty good over all, but I'll wait until the next few chapters to decide if I really like it...
:D
44SoleneusHey. I thought it was pretty good over all, but I'll wait until the next few chapters to decide if I really like it...
:D
11/20/2018 c1 16NorthSouthGorem
Having never gotten that far into Warframe, I'm unfamiliar with the specifics of the events you mentioned. But I AM looking forward to seeing a Space Ninja in ME-verse. That's gonna be fun.
Also, am I the only one who finds Ordis funny?
16NorthSouthGoremHaving never gotten that far into Warframe, I'm unfamiliar with the specifics of the events you mentioned. But I AM looking forward to seeing a Space Ninja in ME-verse. That's gonna be fun.
Also, am I the only one who finds Ordis funny?