8/4/2023 c20 3loudandclear236
Hey! Love the chapter dump. My guy Kevin broke out in more ways then one! Freaking out about being at the bottom to socially navigating his way to the top of his team. Him trying to be "relatively" (using that loosely) positive though out. Got close in personal with a certain aggressive someone in a scary situation. In other news Gwen is a breathe of fresh air. Dana is a rising star. Dana and Joshua are just a dysfunctional but cooperative duo. And there are so many other good characters...that's all see you in the next one
Hey! Love the chapter dump. My guy Kevin broke out in more ways then one! Freaking out about being at the bottom to socially navigating his way to the top of his team. Him trying to be "relatively" (using that loosely) positive though out. Got close in personal with a certain aggressive someone in a scary situation. In other news Gwen is a breathe of fresh air. Dana is a rising star. Dana and Joshua are just a dysfunctional but cooperative duo. And there are so many other good characters...that's all see you in the next one
8/3/2023 c16 Alison
I forgot to review this one whoops. Seeing Dana and Joshua scheming together is a treat. Sad to see Maddy go as she is a genuine sweetheart. I love Sugar and she proves why she is a forced to be reckoned with. Also I love Sammy quoting Lady on the bonus scene.
I forgot to review this one whoops. Seeing Dana and Joshua scheming together is a treat. Sad to see Maddy go as she is a genuine sweetheart. I love Sugar and she proves why she is a forced to be reckoned with. Also I love Sammy quoting Lady on the bonus scene.
7/28/2023 c16 Clockwork Icarus
Ah, a meeting of the minds. The deranged, hyperfocused minds. I look forward to seeing Joshua and Dana tear each other and everyone in their immediate vicinity to shreds.
I almost forgot about this story! Clearly I picked a good time to remember it exists- now I have three more episodes and an aftermath to read! (And I'm gonna comment on them all- and hope my boy didn't get axed because you thought I was dead lol).
Rambling aside, losing Maddy was a tough blow, but I think we're gonna get some interesting effects, especially with Dana. Finding one good person, having that hope dangled in front of her face, and then abruptly snatched away from her- ouch. Just ouch.
Ah, a meeting of the minds. The deranged, hyperfocused minds. I look forward to seeing Joshua and Dana tear each other and everyone in their immediate vicinity to shreds.
I almost forgot about this story! Clearly I picked a good time to remember it exists- now I have three more episodes and an aftermath to read! (And I'm gonna comment on them all- and hope my boy didn't get axed because you thought I was dead lol).
Rambling aside, losing Maddy was a tough blow, but I think we're gonna get some interesting effects, especially with Dana. Finding one good person, having that hope dangled in front of her face, and then abruptly snatched away from her- ouch. Just ouch.
7/26/2023 c20 Demon420
As always awesome job keep up the great work here ] perfect reaction for Gael with the spiders xD it's the smallest that are the fastest and creepiest. Never know where the little buggers are
As always awesome job keep up the great work here ] perfect reaction for Gael with the spiders xD it's the smallest that are the fastest and creepiest. Never know where the little buggers are
7/25/2023 c20 Alison
Sad to see Bridgette go but it was her time. I'm happy to see that she made up with everyone though! Also, did Amy switch places with Sammy? Chris was ruthless this challenge, I think Gael is right the producers have to be literal demons to want to hire him.
Sad to see Bridgette go but it was her time. I'm happy to see that she made up with everyone though! Also, did Amy switch places with Sammy? Chris was ruthless this challenge, I think Gael is right the producers have to be literal demons to want to hire him.
7/25/2023 c19 Alison
Poor Farin, it must really suck when you have absolutely no options to keep yourself in the game, I feel for her. That scene of Laurie taking down a bear was awesome! Sad to see Freddie go as I enjoyed her, I'm glad Eddie is now able to keep Laurie sane in isolation, What Dana did to Cynthia was cruel and mean, poor girl!. Glad that Kevin was there for her. Dawn is a sweetheart, I'm glad to see Dana forgive her.
Poor Farin, it must really suck when you have absolutely no options to keep yourself in the game, I feel for her. That scene of Laurie taking down a bear was awesome! Sad to see Freddie go as I enjoyed her, I'm glad Eddie is now able to keep Laurie sane in isolation, What Dana did to Cynthia was cruel and mean, poor girl!. Glad that Kevin was there for her. Dawn is a sweetheart, I'm glad to see Dana forgive her.
7/25/2023 c18 Alison
I'm glad Laurie is still in the game as I am really enjoying her character and her feud with Sammy. I feel for Kevin and hope he can come to enjoy his time on his team. Cool see to see Gwen join the cast and ah, so that's what happened with DJ, glad to see he is back as well. Gaius and Sammy are soooo cute! The are def my fave ship of the season. Sugar was hilarious as usual and I'm Glad to see Eddie and Gael back on good terms.
I'm glad Laurie is still in the game as I am really enjoying her character and her feud with Sammy. I feel for Kevin and hope he can come to enjoy his time on his team. Cool see to see Gwen join the cast and ah, so that's what happened with DJ, glad to see he is back as well. Gaius and Sammy are soooo cute! The are def my fave ship of the season. Sugar was hilarious as usual and I'm Glad to see Eddie and Gael back on good terms.
7/25/2023 c17 Alison
This was an extremely funny aftermath. Blaineley is nasty and I love her for it. Good on Sky for standing up to her. Maddy and Wynn are precious and must be protected at all costs. I wonder what is going to happen to DJ?
This was an extremely funny aftermath. Blaineley is nasty and I love her for it. Good on Sky for standing up to her. Maddy and Wynn are precious and must be protected at all costs. I wonder what is going to happen to DJ?
7/24/2023 c20 11DSX62415
Wow, a multi-chapter mega release. You love to see it when the stockpile is just right in terms of chapter count.
Wow, a multi-chapter mega release. You love to see it when the stockpile is just right in terms of chapter count.
2/2/2023 c16 4Trevaacin
Ah, Gaius's flaws are now coming back to bite him, guess it's about time given how many of those I gave him. I can't actually remember why I listed water as one of his dislikes anymore. Could've been a joke about Romans being famously bad at navies, a dihydrogen monoxide reference, or something else only my high school self now knows (as a college senior, it is wild thinking about how long ago I came up with Gaius. Damn linear time). Genuinely thought my boi was done for at the end of this, great job on that elimination scene.
As for the rest of the cast, the sharks are in for a world of conspiring with two of the most manipulative characters in their roster. Between them and Sammy's antics, the drama part of the title certainly has not been forgotten.
Ah, Gaius's flaws are now coming back to bite him, guess it's about time given how many of those I gave him. I can't actually remember why I listed water as one of his dislikes anymore. Could've been a joke about Romans being famously bad at navies, a dihydrogen monoxide reference, or something else only my high school self now knows (as a college senior, it is wild thinking about how long ago I came up with Gaius. Damn linear time). Genuinely thought my boi was done for at the end of this, great job on that elimination scene.
As for the rest of the cast, the sharks are in for a world of conspiring with two of the most manipulative characters in their roster. Between them and Sammy's antics, the drama part of the title certainly has not been forgotten.
2/2/2023 c16 3loudandclear236
Hey! Great chapter! As far as commentary I agree with Joshua why throw a challenge and risk a blindside when you can just win granted now there most hated player has advantage but still go for the win or what's the point. I loved Sammy this whole chapter she showed a lot of character which I appreciate. I'm always in it for my guy Kevin sticking up for his hopefully soon to be boo (fingers crossed) and while Kevin likes Sugar...I don't care for her 7 down 14 to gooo
I'm very happy you got your mental health in order as someone who struggles with it themselves there's always more work to be done but give yourself credit for coming this far
Hey! Great chapter! As far as commentary I agree with Joshua why throw a challenge and risk a blindside when you can just win granted now there most hated player has advantage but still go for the win or what's the point. I loved Sammy this whole chapter she showed a lot of character which I appreciate. I'm always in it for my guy Kevin sticking up for his hopefully soon to be boo (fingers crossed) and while Kevin likes Sugar...I don't care for her 7 down 14 to gooo
I'm very happy you got your mental health in order as someone who struggles with it themselves there's always more work to be done but give yourself credit for coming this far
2/1/2023 c16 xxPrincxssxx
OMG YAY! It's so exciting to see this update! Sugar is really holding down the villain title damn, and it sucks to see Maddy go, she was genuinely such a sweet character!
I honestly love how even Sammy was so convinced Gaius was going home at this point, and the blood thirst against Laurie, can't wait to see how Sugar uses that to her advantage.
And Izzy being Izzy and freaking Duncan out, oh god, the harassment! The poor guy lol!
Can't wait for the next update!
OMG YAY! It's so exciting to see this update! Sugar is really holding down the villain title damn, and it sucks to see Maddy go, she was genuinely such a sweet character!
I honestly love how even Sammy was so convinced Gaius was going home at this point, and the blood thirst against Laurie, can't wait to see how Sugar uses that to her advantage.
And Izzy being Izzy and freaking Duncan out, oh god, the harassment! The poor guy lol!
Can't wait for the next update!
2/1/2023 c16 5LaViolaViolaRosa
Holy crap, I forgot about this story. I'm still glad that Christopher is in the competition still.
Holy crap, I forgot about this story. I'm still glad that Christopher is in the competition still.