for Stand Tall5/24/2020 c11 
3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Good chapter and terrible ending with Luna missing. Thanks for sharing!
3ObsessedWithHPFanFicGood chapter and terrible ending with Luna missing. Thanks for sharing!
5/15/2020 c11 Story341
Until the last couple chapters I Harry was my main suspect now I think either Luna or Malfoy.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for writing!
Until the last couple chapters I Harry was my main suspect now I think either Luna or Malfoy.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for writing!
1/9/2020 c10 Yoto
Bon chapitre
Bon chapitre
1/8/2020 c9 HeartsGlow
At first, I thought it was Harry since he had looked up the curse used on the first girl. But he doesn't "glow silver". Maybe Cho should have the curse on her that she was planning for Luna
At first, I thought it was Harry since he had looked up the curse used on the first girl. But he doesn't "glow silver". Maybe Cho should have the curse on her that she was planning for Luna
1/8/2020 c6 HeartsGlow
"but being a muggleborn, she's about as strange" you are writing this as if LUNA is the muggleborn, which we know she is not. If you mean Kevin, it should have been worded differently. (such as "from a muggleborn point of view")
"but being a muggleborn, she's about as strange" you are writing this as if LUNA is the muggleborn, which we know she is not. If you mean Kevin, it should have been worded differently. (such as "from a muggleborn point of view")
1/5/2020 c10 6JAIMOL
It's a very interesting story. I am looking forward to knowing how you plan to continue.
6JAIMOLIt's a very interesting story. I am looking forward to knowing how you plan to continue.
12/20/2019 c8 Guest
This sequence of events bothers me to the maximum. In only ONE other well reasoned story has enough gumption to give Harry the courage to challenge this event from the beginning PUBLICALLY. With the known advantage of the UNBREAKABLE OATH only a miniscule assortment of writers even consider this option. They aren't adverse to assigning Harry unlimited power and courage, but to challenge this farce from the get go never seems to occur to them. My rant aside I hope you address the massive failure that I may alone perceive?
This sequence of events bothers me to the maximum. In only ONE other well reasoned story has enough gumption to give Harry the courage to challenge this event from the beginning PUBLICALLY. With the known advantage of the UNBREAKABLE OATH only a miniscule assortment of writers even consider this option. They aren't adverse to assigning Harry unlimited power and courage, but to challenge this farce from the get go never seems to occur to them. My rant aside I hope you address the massive failure that I may alone perceive?
12/10/2019 c8 2Crimson Reiter
I love this fic, I love the Harry you're writing and especially, I like how you're weaving actions and consequences logically and not just from a bashing and/or fan-favorite POV.
My only problem with your fic is...
...how little reviews it have! I mean, COME ON, it's awesome! It deserves more love!
2Crimson ReiterI love this fic, I love the Harry you're writing and especially, I like how you're weaving actions and consequences logically and not just from a bashing and/or fan-favorite POV.
My only problem with your fic is...
...how little reviews it have! I mean, COME ON, it's awesome! It deserves more love!
5/18/2019 c7 Dubious Destiny
Was that j'bern a reference to jbern, author of TLIL? I like the maturity you have given the characters while still retaining their characteristics, please don't go overboard with it though; they are still naive and not really tested. You've committed some minor errors in language but nothing too atrocious. This story had a solid start, the only question to be asked is whether it will end up at the level of Severus Snape or Albus Dumbledore?
Was that j'bern a reference to jbern, author of TLIL? I like the maturity you have given the characters while still retaining their characteristics, please don't go overboard with it though; they are still naive and not really tested. You've committed some minor errors in language but nothing too atrocious. This story had a solid start, the only question to be asked is whether it will end up at the level of Severus Snape or Albus Dumbledore?
5/17/2019 c4 1Dark White Fang
I'm beginning to really ove this story, it makes a lot of improvement to the original that I like to see in a fanfic without the things that spoil it for me (the emo-ness/edgelord-ness and bashing of characters right and left ; I just can't take a fic with this fic seriously ; they can be funny but I can't take them seriously)
1Dark White FangI'm beginning to really ove this story, it makes a lot of improvement to the original that I like to see in a fanfic without the things that spoil it for me (the emo-ness/edgelord-ness and bashing of characters right and left ; I just can't take a fic with this fic seriously ; they can be funny but I can't take them seriously)
5/16/2019 c1 Undeniably Uzumaki
This is a review of everything up to chapter three where I stopped reading. While I have no issue whatsoever with changes to cannon, unexplained changes that do not have a logically inferable reason are different. An example, one among many here, is Hermione not being with the Weasleys, and her parents and her still managing to attend the world cup. This isn't a result of the authorial shake up at the start, but rather a totally random change that badly impacts the world being constructed, and it is not alone. If you ever wish to have a really engaging story, you need to start seriously mapping cause and effect, and where this requires world changing from prior to the story find ways to explain this in a somewhat reasonable manner within the work, even if its just an inserted quote from a made up history text at the chapter start or a deep explanation by a more knowledgeable character.
This is a review of everything up to chapter three where I stopped reading. While I have no issue whatsoever with changes to cannon, unexplained changes that do not have a logically inferable reason are different. An example, one among many here, is Hermione not being with the Weasleys, and her parents and her still managing to attend the world cup. This isn't a result of the authorial shake up at the start, but rather a totally random change that badly impacts the world being constructed, and it is not alone. If you ever wish to have a really engaging story, you need to start seriously mapping cause and effect, and where this requires world changing from prior to the story find ways to explain this in a somewhat reasonable manner within the work, even if its just an inserted quote from a made up history text at the chapter start or a deep explanation by a more knowledgeable character.