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7/5/2020 c1 IllusionBreaker
I want more.
11/27/2018 c1 Sergio644
It's a good start to this story like to read more of it when you update it
11/23/2018 c1 7MrQuestionMark
Not too much to say on this at this point. This was sort of an introduction and the sentence structure does need a bit of work but overall, for a new story and a new chapter, the slow pace allows for an easy read. Whatever the case, looking forward to more of what you can give us!

Mr ?
11/22/2018 c1 Fortitude501
Huh this is new and what i mean by that is no one in this site actually try to have Touma encountering people from his past life. So kudos for originality.

My only gripe is that you could use a beta. Other than that this story could actually work if given a proper execution. Good work man.
11/22/2018 c1 Majin Othinus
more please!
11/22/2018 c1 13felixiglesias8
Looking forward to this

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