for The Right Path4/19/2019 c3 
5ChthonicUnraveling
This story is well written with good grammar, character portrayal, and plot development. It really feels like I'm reading real people. I was especially happy to see that your last update wasn't too long ago, so I hope that once this busy season has passed (at least, it's been ridiculously busy for me) for you, you'll be able to update again. Till next chapter, author-san! :)
5ChthonicUnravelingThis story is well written with good grammar, character portrayal, and plot development. It really feels like I'm reading real people. I was especially happy to see that your last update wasn't too long ago, so I hope that once this busy season has passed (at least, it's been ridiculously busy for me) for you, you'll be able to update again. Till next chapter, author-san! :)
4/14/2019 c3 The Dark Tempest 11211
I was always interested in a naruto trained by Tobirama. Sadly most of them get abandoned halfway. You have got an interesting start. Awaiting the next chapter
I was always interested in a naruto trained by Tobirama. Sadly most of them get abandoned halfway. You have got an interesting start. Awaiting the next chapter
4/10/2019 c1 AdriLAAAxo
Heh. When in doubt, blame the Uchiha..Apparently this works perfectly well for Senju Tobirama. Lmao
Heh. When in doubt, blame the Uchiha..Apparently this works perfectly well for Senju Tobirama. Lmao
4/10/2019 c3 BlackDragonShinigami
I am VERY excited for the upcoming update. Hopefully there is one. I always enjoy a naruto trained by tobiraama fic. He really knows how to whip naruto into shape
I am VERY excited for the upcoming update. Hopefully there is one. I always enjoy a naruto trained by tobiraama fic. He really knows how to whip naruto into shape
4/6/2019 c2 1Dark White Fang
Welll, I am really curious to see how this story will develop. It's really rare to have a somewhat dark and powerful Naruto who is not a scumbag.
1Dark White FangWelll, I am really curious to see how this story will develop. It's really rare to have a somewhat dark and powerful Naruto who is not a scumbag.
3/27/2019 c3 7TheSmilingMask
This is a really good fic! I love your style and the plot is interesting!
Since there're already three girls in the harem I don't have many ideas but with White you've more girls following Ichigo even if the romance isn't the big part of the story, so I'd suggest:
- Tayuya, mostly because of her personality which is so different from this Naruto
- Kin, this could actually begin with one of Oro's sacrifice for reviving the Hokages being her (maybe the Nidaime) but something goes wrong and his soul can't stay so she's free from the jutsu and then Naruto help her (since the alternative is her being a prisoner)
7TheSmilingMaskThis is a really good fic! I love your style and the plot is interesting!
Since there're already three girls in the harem I don't have many ideas but with White you've more girls following Ichigo even if the romance isn't the big part of the story, so I'd suggest:
- Tayuya, mostly because of her personality which is so different from this Naruto
- Kin, this could actually begin with one of Oro's sacrifice for reviving the Hokages being her (maybe the Nidaime) but something goes wrong and his soul can't stay so she's free from the jutsu and then Naruto help her (since the alternative is her being a prisoner)
3/26/2019 c3 YAY
Internet hugs dis is de da best naruto fanfiction ive red,.. and de shortest but the best...
Internet hugs dis is de da best naruto fanfiction ive red,.. and de shortest but the best...
3/24/2019 c3 Internet Hugs
This is the BEST Naruto fanfic I have read in my lifeee...
And shortest, did I mention sho, I mean best but also the shortest?!YAY!
This is the BEST Naruto fanfic I have read in my lifeee...
And shortest, did I mention sho, I mean best but also the shortest?!YAY!
3/24/2019 c2 Good
VERY GOOD...
VERY GOOD...