
11/26/2024 c18
9K. M. Donovan
i have a single suggestion for a posthumous edit, add a warning before and after any femdom/pegging scenes. not everyone is a fan of that kind of content, and encountering it unexpectedly with zero warning? is a good way to alienate your fanbase.
so if you wish to add/explore that kind of content? that is fine. but make sure to add warnings so that readers who have no desire to read such content can skip it with ease.
otherwise you could lose a large chunk of your reader base by accident.
just some food for thought.

i have a single suggestion for a posthumous edit, add a warning before and after any femdom/pegging scenes. not everyone is a fan of that kind of content, and encountering it unexpectedly with zero warning? is a good way to alienate your fanbase.
so if you wish to add/explore that kind of content? that is fine. but make sure to add warnings so that readers who have no desire to read such content can skip it with ease.
otherwise you could lose a large chunk of your reader base by accident.
just some food for thought.
9/13/2024 c11 Guest
It's really good but the way you handle character Interactions is horrid, I can't read it anymore it's just bad nobody has a set personality nobody acts in any other way than plot advancement these aren't characters they are soulless plot advancement golems. Everything else is fine you should add more detail about the surroundings but it's really these 1 dimensional characters with no personality that's the problem.
It's really good but the way you handle character Interactions is horrid, I can't read it anymore it's just bad nobody has a set personality nobody acts in any other way than plot advancement these aren't characters they are soulless plot advancement golems. Everything else is fine you should add more detail about the surroundings but it's really these 1 dimensional characters with no personality that's the problem.
3/27/2024 c10 Yuzuki476
Issei got a lot of girls in his harem and how come both Sirzechs and azazel and even kiba don't have their own harem?.
Issei got a lot of girls in his harem and how come both Sirzechs and azazel and even kiba don't have their own harem?.